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Post by naheedv on Apr 5, 2008 19:24:44 GMT 5
1. musalsal khamoshi se thakne lagi hai ke khalwat bhee manzar nayaa maangti hai 2. yahaaN har taraf hi andheraa bichaa hai yahaaN roshani har taraf hi bujhee hai 3. usey choRnaa koyi mushkil naheeN hai magar hosale kee kaheeN par kami hai 4. jo aaNkhoN se teri chuney thay kuch aaNsoo namee un kee poroN pe ab tak jamee hai 5. woh hai teraa hai gum-shudah hissah :Naheed: usey khud se baahar kahaaN DhooNdatee hai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 6, 2008 0:32:23 GMT 5
yahaaN har taraf hi andheraa bichaa hai yahaaN roshani har taraf hi bujhee hai 3. usey choRnaa koyi mushkil naheeN hai magar hosale kee kaheeN par kami hai
Bohat khoob Naheed sahiba
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 1:59:58 GMT 5
naheed sahiba aap ki ghazal parhi khaas taur per yeh shair boht umda hy
usey choRnaa koyi mushkil naheeN hai magar hosale kee kaheeN par kami hai
daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 6, 2008 12:44:20 GMT 5
Umda ghazal hai, Naheed Ji! Daad hazir hai...
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Post by naheedv on Apr 6, 2008 16:37:39 GMT 5
yahaaN har taraf hi andheraa bichaa hai yahaaN roshani har taraf hi bujhee hai 3. usey choRnaa koyi mushkil naheeN hai magar hosale kee kaheeN par kami hai Bohat khoob Naheed sahiba Buhat shukriya!
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Post by naheedv on Apr 6, 2008 16:38:21 GMT 5
naheed sahiba aap ki ghazal parhi khaas taur per yeh shair boht umda hy usey choRnaa koyi mushkil naheeN hai magar hosale kee kaheeN par kami hai daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi bhai, mamnoon hoon . daad kaa shukriya! Naheed
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Post by saeed on Apr 7, 2008 5:07:18 GMT 5
Dear Naheed,
khubsoorat ghazal hai.... bilkhasoos matla buhut acha hai...
musalsal khamoshi se thakne lagi hai ke khalwat bhee manzar naye maangti hai
buhut dad! Saeed
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Post by sunita on Apr 8, 2008 5:14:52 GMT 5
Naheed ji aap ki yeh ghazal doosari site par padi thi aur bahut achhi lagi.daad qubuul karen.
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Post by naheedv on Apr 9, 2008 16:03:00 GMT 5
Dear Naheed, khubsoorat ghazal hai.... bilkhasoos matla buhut acha hai... musalsal khamoshi se thakne lagi hai ke khalwat bhee manzar naye maangti hai buhut dad! Saeed Saeed buhat shukriya!
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Post by naheedv on Apr 9, 2008 16:03:44 GMT 5
Naheed ji aap ki yeh ghazal doosari site par padi thi aur bahut achhi lagi.daad qubuul karen. Sunita, aap kee daad kaa shukriya! Naheed
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Post by tmasood on Apr 11, 2008 20:45:38 GMT 5
Naheed! jee
salaam
aakheri shaer bohat achaa lagaa
daad Haazir hai
khush erhaiN
wassalam
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Post by naheedv on Apr 12, 2008 17:27:33 GMT 5
Tahira jee, ghazal kee pasandeedagee ke liye shukriya Naheed
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