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Post by saeed on Apr 8, 2008 5:04:31 GMT 5
Doston ne mehfil garm ki hai to....aajkal idher de rawani hai...eik aur taza ghazal Sukhanwar ki nazr.
Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai
ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Hum apni zaat se baher to nikley Bhaley dilka zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai
JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Saeed is ishq-e-be-darmaaN mein khud per YaqeeN kuch tha gumaaN kuch ho gaya hai
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Post by nadeem on Apr 8, 2008 14:01:43 GMT 5
muhtram saeed As salam u alikum aap ki ghazal paRhi paRh kay bahut khushi hoi aur bhut lutf aaya is sher naen bahut saroor ki kaifiat bana di
zuban afsoos maen uljhi hoi thi kaha kuch tha bayaan kuch ho gaya hai
yahan uljhi hoi naen bahut lutf diya waaaaaaaaaaaah
teray wehshi sambhaltay ja rahay haen tujhay shehr e butan kuch ho gaya hai
kiya umda bunat haen in ashaar ki bahut achay dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 8, 2008 17:50:19 GMT 5
AOA saeed shab ap ki ghazal parhy, accha laga ap ka aandaz , shary bunat, akfzoo ka estamal, aur khas tooe par ye share kamal hy seed shab
Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai
over all urs ghazal ahs left good impact on me carry on
ap ka apna Muabshir Saeed france
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Post by saeed on Apr 8, 2008 18:50:03 GMT 5
muhtram saeed As salam u alikum aap ki ghazal paRhi paRh kay bahut khushi hoi aur bhut lutf aaya is sher naen bahut saroor ki kaifiat bana di zuban afsoos maen uljhi hoi thi kaha kuch tha bayaan kuch ho gaya hai yahan uljhi hoi naen bahut lutf diya waaaaaaaaaaaah teray wehshi sambhaltay ja rahay haen tujhay shehr e butan kuch ho gaya hai kiya umda bunat haen in ashaar ki bahut achay dua go Nadeem Bhabha Nadeem saab, aapko ashaar pasand aaye....aapki muhabbat bhari daad ka buhut shukriya. saeed
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Post by saeed on Apr 8, 2008 18:51:43 GMT 5
AOA saeed shab ap ki ghazal parhy, accha laga ap ka aandaz , shary bunat, akfzoo ka estamal, aur khas tooe par ye share kamal hy seed shab Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai over all urs ghazal ahs left good impact on me carry on ap ka apna Muabshir Saeed france Mbashir saheb, buhut shukriya daad. nawazish! saeed
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 9, 2008 1:24:27 GMT 5
Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai
ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal ataa ki aap nay Saeed sahib daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by saeed on Apr 9, 2008 12:38:11 GMT 5
Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal ataa ki aap nay Saeed sahib daad qabool farmaiay Rafi saheb, Buhut nazish aapko ghazal pasand aayi. saeed
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Post by naheedv on Apr 9, 2008 16:02:00 GMT 5
Saeed, ghazal achi hai. mujhe maqta' pasand aayaa. buhat umdah! daad paish karti hoon. aik baat agar buraa na lage tau ke matla' meN mujhey donoN misroN kaa rabt mehsoos naheeN ho rahaa hai. ye meri fehm kaa masla' bhee ho saktaa hai. shukriya Naheed
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Post by nadeem on Apr 9, 2008 19:09:32 GMT 5
Muhtarma Naheed sahiba aap naen kaha kay matlay maen rabt nahen hai hairat hoi jab kay seedhi si baat hai kay tumharay aur meray dil kay darmiyaan koi phoot par gai hai aur is ka mujhay nuqsaan howa ab pata nahen kahan say ye bayrabt laga aap ko agar aap mazeed roshni dalaen gi ya apni baat ki wazahat karaen gi to hamaray ilm maen bhi izafa ho ga
Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai
muntazir Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 9, 2008 19:56:04 GMT 5
Doston ne mehfil garm ki hai to....aajkal idher de rawani hai...eik aur taza ghazal Sukhanwar ki nazr. Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai
ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Hum apni zaat se baher to nikley Bhaley dilka zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai
JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Saeed is ishq-e-be-darmaaN mein khud per YaqeeN kuch tha gumaaN kuch ho gaya hai Saeed Bhai! Aap ki iss umda ghazal per kayee mann daad-otehseen kay doNgray barsaay jaeiN tau bhi haq adaa nahiN hota. Mujh nacheez ki raay kay mutabiq aap nay apnay dil kay goshay hamaray samnay rakhay haiN. Daad qabool kijiay. Naheed sahiba ka etraz durust nahiN hai. Aur Nadeem Bhai number lay gaay haiN unhaiN mutmain karnay maiN. Dua yehi hai keh Mohtarma Naheed Virk nagwaar-e-khatir na jantay huway Nadeem bhai ki baat samajh kar mutmain ho jaieN. Koi khaS sher nahiN balkeh poori ghazal hawalay kay liay paish ki jaani chahiay. Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Post by saeed on Apr 10, 2008 16:41:52 GMT 5
Saeed, ghazal achi hai. mujhe maqta' pasand aayaa. buhat umdah! daad paish karti hoon. aik baat agar buraa na lage tau ke matla' meN mujhey donoN misroN kaa rabt mehsoos naheeN ho rahaa hai. ye meri fehm kaa masla' bhee ho saktaa hai. shukriya Naheed Dear Naheed, Buhut shukriya daad keliye bhi aur mashwarey keliye bhi! saeed
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Post by saeed on Apr 10, 2008 17:06:39 GMT 5
Muhtarma Naheed sahiba aap naen kaha kay matlay maen rabt nahen hai hairat hoi jab kay seedhi si baat hai kay tumharay aur meray dil kay darmiyaan koi phoot par gai hai aur is ka mujhay nuqsaan howa ab pata nahen kahan say ye bayrabt laga aap ko agar aap mazeed roshni dalaen gi ya apni baat ki wazahat karaen gi to hamaray ilm maen bhi izafa ho ga Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai muntazir Nadeem Bhabha Nadeem saheb, aapki muhabbat apni jageh baja....aur Naheed saheba ka tanqeed ka haq apni jageh. Nawazish! saeed
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Post by saeed on Apr 10, 2008 17:09:00 GMT 5
Doston ne mehfil garm ki hai to....aajkal idher de rawani hai...eik aur taza ghazal Sukhanwar ki nazr. Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai
ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Hum apni zaat se baher to nikley Bhaley dilka zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai
JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai
Saeed is ishq-e-be-darmaaN mein khud per YaqeeN kuch tha gumaaN kuch ho gaya hai Saeed Bhai! Aap ki iss umda ghazal per kayee mann daad-otehseen kay doNgray barsaay jaeiN tau bhi haq adaa nahiN hota. Mujh nacheez ki raay kay mutabiq aap nay apnay dil kay goshay hamaray samnay rakhay haiN. Daad qabool kijiay. Naheed sahiba ka etraz durust nahiN hai. Aur Nadeem Bhai number lay gaay haiN unhaiN mutmain karnay maiN. Dua yehi hai keh Mohtarma Naheed Virk nagwaar-e-khatir na jantay huway Nadeem bhai ki baat samajh kar mutmain ho jaieN. Koi khaS sher nahiN balkeh poori ghazal hawalay kay liay paish ki jaani chahiay. WahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhAtif Saheb, Apko ghazal pasand aayi...Apki mohabbat bhari daad keliye buhut mashkoor hoon! saeed
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Post by nadeem on Apr 11, 2008 0:16:55 GMT 5
anhan muhabbat aur cheez hai maen naen bhi tanqeed hi ki kiyon kay matlay ko maen naen parkha to tanqeedi taur par hai ye to aik dostana mahool hai is maen ham aik dosray ki baat ka jawaab day saktay haen agar kahen bura laga ho to mazrat
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Post by waqaar on Apr 11, 2008 12:15:02 GMT 5
Sa'eed SaaHeb, aadaab! huZoor aapki kYa zaberdast ghazal hay. lut^f aaYa paRh~ ker. khaaSker darj-e-zail aSh'aar : Kisi lamhey zayaaN kuch ho gaya hai DiloN ke darmiyaaN kuch ho gaya hai ZubaaN afsos meiN uljhi hoo-e thi Kaha kuch tha bayaaN kuch ho gaya hai Terey wehshi sanbhaltey ja rahey haiN Tujhey shehr-e-butaaN kuch ho gaya hai JunooN hai, khauf hai, ya be-hissi hai Jisey dekho yahaaN kuch ho gaya hai in per khaSoosi daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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