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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 7, 2007 16:52:43 GMT 5
Ghazal JudaiyoN ka azab kaisa huwa musallat? Daraona aik khawb kaisa huwa musallat?
Koi ta'alluq nahiN hai jis ka sawal say kuchh Woh bay sar-o-paa jawab kaisa huwa musallat?
Qareeb ho kar bhi ab talak hum haiN door kitnay? Naseeb hum peh kharab kaisa huwa musallat?
Hum aik lamhay ki dhoop ko bhi taras gaeay haiN Humaray sar par sahab kaisa huwa musallat?
MuhabbatoN ko najanay kis ki nazar lagi hai? Yeh nafratoN ka nisab kaisa huwa musallat?
Woh samnay tha magar na daikha jamal uss ka Nazar peh ATIF hijab kaisa huwa musallat?Atif Mirza
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 7, 2007 22:38:05 GMT 5
Ghazal JudaiyoN ka azab kaisa huwa musallat? Daraona aik khawb kaisa huwa musallat?
Koi ta'alluq nahiN hai jis ka sawal say kuchh Woh bay sar-o-paa jawab kaisa huwa musallat?
Qareeb ho kar bhi ab talak hum haiN door kitnay? Naseeb hum peh kharab kaisa huwa musallat?
Hum aik lamhay ki dhoop ko bhi taras gaeay haiN Humaray sar par sahab kaisa huwa musallat?
MuhabbatoN ko najanay kis ki nazar lagi hai? Yeh nafratoN ka nisab kaisa huwa musallat?
Woh samnay tha magar na daikha jamal uss ka Nazar peh ATIF hijab kaisa huwa musallat?Atif Mirza Bohat Khoob Atif Mirza sahib Munfarid qafia radeef is ghazal ka izafi husn hay jo is ghazal ko bhi infaradiyat bakhshta hay daad qabool kejiay
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 8, 2007 15:02:57 GMT 5
wah ji wah atif sahib kia khoob farmaya ap ne.
""""Hum aik lamhay ki dhoop ko bhi taras gaeay haiN Humaray sar par sahab kaisa huwa musallat?
MuhabbatoN ko najanay kis ki nazar lagi hai? Yeh nafratoN ka nisab kaisa huwa musallat?
Woh samnay tha magar na daikha jamal uss ka Nazar peh ATIF hijab kaisa huwa musallat?"""" wesay to poori ghazal hi achi hai magar akhri teen ashaar bohot hi mazay kay hain. keep it up
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 8, 2007 15:15:30 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib aur Shaheen jee aap ki taraf say tareff huwi mann ko bahut achha laga! Aap donoN dostoN ka shukriya.
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Post by khalid on Oct 11, 2007 5:20:20 GMT 5
bohot khoob atif sb!
maiN rafi sb ke khayalaat se muttafiq hooN! daad qubool keeje!!! aapki zameen meiN hi aik she'r arz kiya hai.............. manaazir e aab reit ban ker bikher gaey haiN saraab ooper saraab kaisa hua musallat!!!!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 11, 2007 18:46:02 GMT 5
bohot khoob atif sb!
maiN rafi sb ke khayalaat se muttafiq hooN! daad qubool keeje!!! aapki zameen meiN hi aik she'r arz kiya hai.............. manaazir e aab reit ban ker bikher gaey haiN saraab ooper saraab kaisa hua musallat!!!! Umda sher irshad kia hai Khalid sahib aap nay Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:53:15 GMT 5
Jo paRhtay haiN magar tabsra kiay baghair guzar jaatay haiN un ka bhi shukriya.
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