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GHAZAL
Jan 22, 2008 1:21:07 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jan 22, 2008 1:21:07 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Zindagi shaam hi sham hai subh e nou aap k naam hai
pyaas hai zindagi se breee hath me khali eik jaam hai
raaste me miliN daldaleN aor manzil lab e baam hai
aise rstee se bach k chalo woh jo sab k liye aam hai
jane kab tak rahee hmsafer zeest taklif o aalaam hAI
waqt e aakhir zaroor aaye ga zindagi ka ye anjaam hai **********************
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
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GHAZAL
Jan 22, 2008 2:28:17 GMT 5
Post by zaamin on Jan 22, 2008 2:28:17 GMT 5
bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai,neelofer ji. alag si behr,khoob nibahhii doosre sher men tupo hai ;eik ki jagah ik kar diijiye zaamin
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GHAZAL
Jan 22, 2008 21:27:23 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 22, 2008 21:27:23 GMT 5
Wah Neelofar Ji! Mukhtasar behr ko aap nay khoob nibhaya hai!!! Khulay dil say daad hazir hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Issi tarah achhi shaeri say mehzooz kijay ga! Thanx
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GHAZAL
Jan 22, 2008 23:03:53 GMT 5
Post by sunita on Jan 22, 2008 23:03:53 GMT 5
bahut achhi ghazal kahi aap ne Neelofar ji.daad qubuul karen.
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GHAZAL
Jan 23, 2008 19:15:14 GMT 5
Post by manu1979 on Jan 23, 2008 19:15:14 GMT 5
GHAZAL Zindagi shaam hi sham hai subh e nou aap k naam hai pyaas hai zindagi se breee hath me khali eik jaam hai raaste me miliN daldaleN aor manzil lab e baam hai aise rstee se bach k chalo woh jo sab k liye aam hai jane kab tak rahee hmsafer zeest taklif o aalaam hAI waqt e aakhir zaroor aaye ga zindagi ka ye anjaam hai ********************** bahoot khoob likha hai. shuru se aakhir tak zeh'n par chaayi rahii aap ki ghazal yunhee likhate rahe regards manu
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GHAZAL
Jan 24, 2008 2:05:51 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jan 24, 2008 2:05:51 GMT 5
Aap tamam adab nawaz doston ka bhot shukria............aap ki duaayeN sath rahen......INSHA ALLAH kuch na kuch likhti rahoongi ....Allah kre aap sab ko mayoos na krooN. Aamin Talib e duaa Neelofar
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GHAZAL
Jan 24, 2008 2:33:37 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 24, 2008 2:33:37 GMT 5
mukhtasar behr maiN aik khoobsoorat ghazal daad hazir hay neelofer sahiba
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GHAZAL
Jan 24, 2008 3:13:21 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 24, 2008 3:13:21 GMT 5
AOA nelofar aapa kesi hain ap ap ki bohat hi khobsorat ghazal parhi chamne dil se dad ke beshumar phool ap ke husne klam ki nazr waslam ap ka bhai ramishjaan
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