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Post by kanwal on Feb 18, 2008 0:38:25 GMT 5
Ramish jee adaab ,..... ,............. Badi ajeeb sii baat hai ke sab se pehla Qaari aapki haseeN takhleeqaat ka hone ka sharf khaaksaara ko haasiL hota hai,lekiN reply sab se late kar paati hooN ,...... chaliye ab aap awiN kham khaaH naraaz na hua kareiN ,.... jabke jaante bhi haiN ke farq te koi paina nahiN ulta ,..... Acha ab chalte haiN aapki ghazl ki aur ,..... bohat bewaqoof tha, usse zamaane ki chalaakiyaN sikhaaiye ,.... kahiye khamosh sdaaeiN sirf zakhmi kar sakti haiN roohoN ko,... lihaaza khamosh na raha kara ,..... shayed usse sulagne ke dard ka ehsaas tha ,... warna aaj kisi k paas kisi ka dukh samjhne ka waqt nahiN ,... woH khud anokha tha naa ,.... iss liye chahateiN bhi anokha rakhta tha ,.... shayed Khuda ne ussko bargad sa zarf diya tha jo sirf chhaaoN dena hi jaanta tha ,.... Kabhi kabhi apnoN ko bhi ajnabi hona parta hai dunya ki yehi reet hai ,.... Ramish jee aapki ghazl ke liye tareef ke lafz kam parte haiN,... ghazl se ziyada aapke uss ehsaas ke liye jis ne aap se yeh ghazL kehlwaayee ,... sirf ,.... itnaa ,.... ke ,..... daad ke saare ke saare gulshan aapke naaM ,....
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 18, 2008 1:04:42 GMT 5
Wah Raamish Bhai! Kia umda ghazal, khoobsoorat presentation aur khaas taur per back groud picture ka chunao tau bahut zaalim. AOA atif bhai bohat bohat shukriya sir ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye hazoor ap ne back gound zalim laga yaqeen ki jiye jis ne yeh image banya he wo bhi bohat zalim insan he .................
aik bar phir ap ki dad ka shukriya waslam ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 21, 2008 2:50:44 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................
yeh aj pehli bar nahi howa ap hamesha deer kar deti hain .........
hum ko pata he ke huamri narazgi ka asar to hona hi he is liye hum khafa nahi hote apni azeez si our ( choti si ) dost se [/size]
nahi kanwal jee wo bewaqoof nahi he balke bohat pur khlos he khamosh sdaaein hamehsa zakhm nahi deti kabhi kabhi kisi ki rooh ko sakoon bhi deti hain.........
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bilkul sahi kaha kanwal jee use ehsas to he wo bohat hasas he jo apno ke dukh apno ki takleef samjh leta he
ho hay kanwal jee ap ko kis ne batya yeh bhi sach kaha ap ne
wah keya umda our khobsorat andaz me tareef ki he bohat ache kanwal jee
duniya he na kanwal jee hota he kabhi kabhi
kanwal jee meri ghazal ko jis andaz me ap parhti hain our us ko mehsos karti hain yehi mere liye sab se badi dad hoti he kisi bhi shaier ki takhleeq ko jab us ke qari mehsos kar le to shaier ko zehni our qalbi sakoon mil jata he ap ke in pur khlos alfaz ne mujhe wohi zehni our qalbi sakoon atta kiya he bohat shukriya ap ki dad ke sare gulab mere qalbe chaman ki zeenat ban ge hain .waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 25, 2008 8:34:36 GMT 5
wo us ki chahte bhi sari dunya se anokhi thiN reyazat khod wo karta tha , jazayeN mujh ko deta tha
ramish sahib aap ki ghazal pasand aai kisi ki soch main dhaul kar apnay baaray main kehna aik anokha andaz hay mujhay yeh shair kahs taur par passand aaya
wo us ki chahte bhi sari dunya se anokhi thiN reyazat khod wo karta tha , jazayeN mujh ko deta tha
thanx razi
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 26, 2008 2:46:30 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai ap aye bahar aei yani mehfal me bhi our meri is ghazal par bhi razi bhai ap ki mohabato ka bohat shukriya bohat gehrei se ap ne ghazal ko dekha he our mehsos kiya he us ke liye bohat shukriya apni doauon me yad rakhiye waslam ap ka apna ramishjaan
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Feb 27, 2008 2:05:04 GMT 5
hamesha ki tarah,ek khoobsoorat ghazal,ramish saahib daad qabool farmaayen
zaamin
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 29, 2008 15:14:31 GMT 5
AOA zaamin bhai ap ki mohabto ka mamnon hon me ghazal ko sarhane ke liye bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 11, 2008 9:49:02 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob Ramish bhai... pehlay bhi apki yeh ghazal kai bar parhi hai..... har bar nai lagi aur bahut maza aya.... Thanks for sharing.....
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