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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 11, 2008 2:26:05 GMT 5
AOA is bazm ke khobsorat our azeez sathion ................. zindagi ne kuch esi chale chali pichle dino ke aik taweel arsa howa na koi cheez atta hoi na hi dil likhne ki tarf mayel howa chand din 3 roz qabl esee hi bethe bethe aik soch zehan me aei ke kisi bohat apne ki jo itna apna ho ke apni hi zaat ka hisa ban geya ho us ki soch me dhal kar to dekho ke wo mere bare me keya sochta he .... ........[/color]
kissi ki soch meiN dhal ke dekha to yeh ghazl ataa hui ............[/color]
so usi bohat apne ke name yeh ghazal jis ki soch se mutasur ho kar yeh ghazal hoi
bohat khamosh reh kar wo saadayeN mujh ko deta tha bade bharpor jazboN ki qabayeN mujh ko deta tha
kabhi jo dard ki Aatish mujhe sulgane lagti thi wo apne sans ki mehki hawayeN mujh ko deta tha
wo us ki chahte bhi sari dunya se anokhi thiN reyazat khod wo karta tha , jazayeN mujh ko deta tha
mere ehsas ke sehraoN me jw dhop bahrti thi wo mosum ka Khuda ban kar ghatayN mujhe ko deta tha
use main ajnabi samjha magar har morh par ramish wo apne name ki sari duayeN mujh ko deta tha
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Post by Tanweer on Feb 11, 2008 13:41:40 GMT 5
Meray Bohat he Aziz aur piyaray Bhaee!
Ramish!
Taweel arsa hova aap say rabita nahi, haan albtta aapki tehreerien zaroor nazar say guzarti rahien.
Aaj mujhay Sukhanwar ka wo din yaad aa raha hay jab aapki pehli tehreer nazar say dil mein ja bethi thi................... os roz bhi aapko ba^kamal paya tha............ aur aaj aapki tazah tareen ghazal dekh kar bhi aapko ba^kamal paya............. lekin nahi............ aaj mujhay Ramish Jan ba^kamal say bhi jo ooper maqaam hay os par faez nazar aa raha hay........
Aik behtreen kawish aapki, hasab-e-riwayat meri janib say aapko 3 martba bohat si daad.
Dua'go Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 11, 2008 22:30:54 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ghazal Ramish ji daad hazir hay
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 13, 2008 1:20:11 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram sunita didi kesi hain ap bas kuch me kam kam atta hon kuch ap is liye mulaqat ka silsla zara kam raha kesi hain ap .........
didi ghzal ki pasandeedgi ke liye bohat shukriya ( wese ghor se parhiye yeh ghazal kisi ki soch ki akaas he is liye me ne nahi use ajnabi smajha us ne mujhe ajnabi smajha he ) waslam ap ka bhai ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 13, 2008 1:25:10 GMT 5
AOA azez tanweer bhai ap ki mohabtao ka mamnon hon bohat bohat ap ke in pur khlos our mohabt se labreez alfaz ne meri ankho ko num kar diya ALLHA kare ap ke dil me yeh mohabat hamesha qayeem rahe ameen ..............................................
tanweer bhai ghazal ap ko pasand aei is ke liye shukriya apni doauon me yad rakhiye ap ka apna ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 13, 2008 1:26:40 GMT 5
AOA muhtram dr sahib ap ki pur khlos dad mere liye hamesha aezaaz rahi hain our mere hoslo ko hamesha taqweeyat mili he bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/b]
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Post by khalid on Feb 13, 2008 7:44:03 GMT 5
wah! raamish bhaii kya khoobsoorat ghazal ata fermaii hai! her dhe'r haseen aur ta'assur se bherpoor hai! daad qubool keeje!
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Post by shahkaar on Feb 13, 2008 19:56:04 GMT 5
Ramish bhai
aap ke ik ik lafz se, aur ghazal ke ik ik sheer se aap ke dil kay jazbat ki akkassi hoti hay , ghazal khubsoorat hay , yeh to theek lekin ziada khushi hoye keh aap ne zindigi ke kathan haalaat ke bawajood likhaa, best of luck, and best wishes
regards
shahkaar
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 14, 2008 1:09:19 GMT 5
AOA azzezam khalid bhai hazoor ap ki tashreef awari ka bohat shukriya our is besakhta our pur khlos dad ke liye inthei mamnon hon me ap ka ap ki qeemti doauon ka talib ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 14, 2008 1:12:00 GMT 5
AOA shahkar bhai gahzal ko pasand farmane ka bohat bohat shukriya .............. hazoor bas in halat me bhi chand dost ese hain jinho ne hume yehi hosla diya he ke sanbhal kar chalo manzil na sahi nishane manzal to mile ga hi na so hum chal rahe hain zeest ke sanglakh safr par . waslam ramishjaan
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Post by waqaar on Feb 14, 2008 2:36:15 GMT 5
"wo apne name ki sari duayeN mujh ko deta tha " kYa 'ajab andaaz hay aapka RaamiSh bh~aa,i! aadaab! is behtareen kalaam per meri naacheez sii daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 15, 2008 15:27:49 GMT 5
Ramish sahab!
bahut umda dad qabooleay ga
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 16, 2008 1:06:44 GMT 5
AOA waqar bhai ap ki pur khlos dad our mohabat ke liye shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 16, 2008 1:07:52 GMT 5
AOA aqeel bhai ap ki dad hum ne apne dilme saja li janab bohat bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size]
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 17, 2008 9:40:26 GMT 5
Wah Raamish Bhai! Kia umda ghazal, khoobsoorat presentation aur khaas taur per back groud picture ka chunao tau bahut zaalim.
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