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Post by kanwal on May 26, 2008 23:56:41 GMT 5
bohat umdaa ,.... Go ke poori ghazl hi apni misaal aap hai par inn ashaar pe be saakhta muskuraahat jhaankne lagi aur daad ke gulsitaaN aapki khidmat meiN paish karne chali aayee ,....
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:16:29 GMT 5
Meib barha socha karta tha ke yahan takhleeqi hawalay say bahut kam kam horaha hay aur jo chand aik naam hein wo apnay taein koshish kar rahay hein ke fresh satah par hatul maqdoor kam kia jaeay aur kae bar aisa dil girfita hoa ke g chaha ke yahan ab kehnay sunnay ko kuch nahi bacha sab takh gaey magar ap ki jab jab ghazal kabhi aisa nahi hoa ke mein koe sher apnay sath lay kar na gia hoN aur yahan mayra ana raigan gia ho........khiar yahan kae aik jumla hae mutariza ke deay maqsoob ye tha ke jo masloob hota hay usay anal haq ki satah par ja kar he masloob honay ka maza ata hay aur kia khoob ye kaha( ab is ko anal haq kay hawalay say mat dekheay ga ke mayra mudaa ap samajh gaey hoN gaY) Phir der-paye aazaar haiN furqat ki hawayeN Phir baam-e-shab-e-hijr pe masloob ko-e hai mein ye sher aur lehja yaqeenan sath lay kar ja raha hoN magar yahan lafz moorat ne maza kirkira kar dia ke farsi daro bast kay sath ati hoe ghazal mein achanak aik hindi lafz kuch khatakta mehsoos hoa dua go aqeel Aqueel Malik sb, Buhut Nawazish pasandeedgi keliye. aapki nishan-dahi pe meine doosrey sher ke misra-e-sani mein zra si tabddli ki hai... buhut shukriya daad keliye aur aapki wapsi is bazm keliye eik neik shagoon hai. saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:18:06 GMT 5
plz send me your e mail & phone no . My contact is : 0169196259 Shumar sb, apney contacts aapko email kerdiye hai. saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:19:03 GMT 5
wahwah Takheer kay liay ma,azrat Nawazish Rafi bhai- der ayad ---drust ayad... Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:20:24 GMT 5
Muhtram Saeed Sahib Salamat Rahaen bahut arsay baad aana howa aur yahan aap ki ghazal paRhi warna to maen yahan say ja chuka tha jesay naik roohaen ilaqa chooR deti haen aisay hi maen bhi ye ilaqa chooR chuka tha par dost hausla bhi hotay haen aur paon ki zanjeer bhi tamam ghazal hi achi hai lekin khaas taur par ye sher to kamaal hai Tehreer bhi tasveer bana deti hai uski HaathoN ki lakeeroN se jo mansoob ko-e hai waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Nadeem- buhut nawazish ...aapki muhabbat hai. saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:21:24 GMT 5
aoa saeed shab acchy hy ghazall wah wah wah janab maza aa gaya hy aur khas tooe par ye share Kiya kam hai ta-alluq ke is aashob meiN reh ker Ham jesey kharaboN se bhi mansoob ko-e hai zameen ky lehaz hy, qawaef ky leehaz hy, mukammal ghazal hy, dadd hazer hy janab ok waiting for more ghazals by u ap ka Muabshir saeed Mubasher saheb Buhut shukriya is pazeerayi keliye. mamnoon Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 7:23:24 GMT 5
bohat umdaa ,.... Go ke poori ghazl hi apni misaal aap hai par inn ashaar pe be saakhta muskuraahat jhaankne lagi aur daad ke gulsitaaN aapki khidmat meiN paish karne chali aayee ,.... Kanwal Aapki pholoN se ladi daad kliye buhut mashkoor hooN. Saeed
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 4, 2008 11:30:25 GMT 5
Kiya jaaniye aashiq hai keh mehboob ko-e hai Is dil ke dar-o-baam se mansoob ko-e hai
Aaraam kahaN ishq-o-ibaadat mein bhi dil ko Butt ko-e muqabil hai to matloob ko-e hai
Kiya kam hai ta-alluq ke is aashob meiN reh ker Ham jesey kharaboN se bhi mansoob ko-e hai
Phir der-paye aazaar haiN furqat ki hawayeN Phir baam-e-shab-e-hijr pe masloob ko-e hai
Tehreer bhi tasveer bana deti hai uski HaathoN ki lakeeroN se jo mansoob ko-e hai
Phirtey haiN Saeed aur ghazal-go yahaN kitney Kab tujh sa magar sahib-e-asloob ko-e hai Biradaram Saeed Saheb, Khoobsoorat ghazal pe mubarakbaad qabool kijiey. Ye do ash'aar Phir der-paye aazaar haiN furqat ki hawayeN Phir baam-e-shab-e-hijr pe masloob ko-e hai Tehreer bhi tasveer bana deti hai uski HaathoN ki lakeeroN se jo mansoob ko-e hai bilkhasoos pasand aaey heN. Tashie
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Post by saeed on Jul 15, 2008 8:53:33 GMT 5
Kiya jaaniye aashiq hai keh mehboob ko-e hai Is dil ke dar-o-baam se mansoob ko-e hai
Aaraam kahaN ishq-o-ibaadat mein bhi dil ko Butt ko-e muqabil hai to matloob ko-e hai
Kiya kam hai ta-alluq ke is aashob meiN reh ker Ham jesey kharaboN se bhi mansoob ko-e hai
Phir der-paye aazaar haiN furqat ki hawayeN Phir baam-e-shab-e-hijr pe masloob ko-e hai
Tehreer bhi tasveer bana deti hai uski HaathoN ki lakeeroN se jo mansoob ko-e hai
Phirtey haiN Saeed aur ghazal-go yahaN kitney Kab tujh sa magar sahib-e-asloob ko-e hai Biradaram Saeed Saheb, Khoobsoorat ghazal pe mubarakbaad qabool kijiey. Ye do ash'aar Phir der-paye aazaar haiN furqat ki hawayeN Phir baam-e-shab-e-hijr pe masloob ko-e hai Tehreer bhi tasveer bana deti hai uski HaathoN ki lakeeroN se jo mansoob ko-e hai bilkhasoos pasand aaey heN. Tashie Tashie bhai, Buhut nawazish aapki! Saeed
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