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Post by uzair143 on Jan 25, 2008 0:12:28 GMT 5
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 25, 2008 10:00:29 GMT 5
Uzair Sahib! Gustakhi Muaaf! Koi khaas kaavish nahiN hai. Imla aur behr ki kaafi ghalatiyan haiN, Maslan "Bulao" ko aap nay "BulaooN" lokha hai, "Bolo" ko "BoloN", "Jao" ko "JaooN" aur "Shak" ko "Shaq" likha hai. Wazan tau khair talash karnay say bhi nahiN mila. Kia yeh nasri nazm hai?
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 25, 2008 13:56:13 GMT 5
Uzair Sahib! Gustakhi Muaaf! Koi khaas kaavish nahiN hai. Imla aur behr ki kaafi ghalatiyan haiN, Maslan "Bulao" ko aap nay "BulaooN" lokha hai, "Bolo" ko "BoloN", "Jao" ko "JaooN" aur "Shak" ko "Shaq" likha hai. Wazan tau khair talash karnay say bhi nahiN mila. Kia yeh nasri nazm hai? Atif sb bout bout sukhriya Uzair
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 25, 2008 14:37:03 GMT 5
Uzair Bhai! kia durustgi nahiN karaiN gay kalam maiN. MaiN nay tau issi liay bay laag tabsra kar dia tha. Lagta hai keh aap mind kar gaay haiN.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 25, 2008 23:10:50 GMT 5
Uzair miaN Khayal acha hay nazm ka wazan aur behr kay mu,amlay maiN apnay walid sahib say rahnumai hasil kar saktay haiN
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:02:00 GMT 5
Uzair Bhai! kia durustgi nahiN karaiN gay kalam maiN. MaiN nay tau issi liay bay laag tabsra kar dia tha. Lagta hai keh aap mind kar gaay haiN. Atif sb app ka bout bout sukhriya app ne mujhe meri galtiyah batayi.main ne koi mind nahi kia insan galtiyoun se hi seekhta hai.main in per qabo pane ki pori koshish kero ga Thanks again Uzair
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:04:15 GMT 5
Uzair miaN Khayal acha hay nazm ka wazan aur behr kay mu,amlay maiN apnay walid sahib say rahnumai hasil kar saktay haiN Rafi sb bout bout sukhriya main pori koshish kero ga in galtiyoun per kabo pa sako Thanks Uzair
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2008 12:08:12 GMT 5
Atif sb app ka bout bout sukhriya app ne mujhe meri galtiyah batayi.main ne koi mind nahi kia insan galtiyoun se hi seekhta hai.main in per qabo pane ki pori koshish kero ga Thanks again Uzair Uzair Bhai Aap kay achhay alfaz nay mera maan baRha diya. U R Welcome.
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