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Post by uzair143 on Jan 23, 2008 23:09:58 GMT 5
as salam alikum sukhanwar sathiyoun is forum per aaj pehli baar apni gazel paish ker raha ho.aik choti se koshish ki hai is main galtiyah to ho gi.is baat ko made nazar rekhte houe k insan galtiyoun se seekhta hai is gazel ko paish ker raha ho umeed hia pasand aie gi app ki raye ga ka intazar rahe ga Uzair
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 24, 2008 2:26:44 GMT 5
achi koshish Uzairm miaN behr kay hwalay say apnay walid e muhtaram say rahnumai zaroor hasil karaiN
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by zaamin on Jan 24, 2008 5:53:01 GMT 5
bahut khoobsoorat nezm,uzair ji;meri aor se daad qabool farmaayen zaamin
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:47:59 GMT 5
achi koshish Uzairm miaN behr kay hwalay say apnay walid e muhtaram say rahnumai zaroor hasil karaiN Rafi sb bout bout sukhriya hosla afzai ka Uzair
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:49:37 GMT 5
bahut khoobsoorat nezm,uzair ji;meri aor se daad qabool farmaayen zaamin Zaamin sb
Thanks a lot Uzair
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 18:15:01 GMT 5
uzair koshish achi hy abhi aap ko behr aur qawaafi k baaray main ilm nahi khyaalat umda hain khushi ho gi agar aap koshish jaari rakhain aur sabit qadmi k saath shair kehtay rahain thanx razi
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 20:47:57 GMT 5
Razi sb i am very happy to see ur comments.thanks a lot i will try my best to knowing bout baher bout bout sukhriya Uzair
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 18:05:57 GMT 5
Aik achcha tajarba hai, aik saath kaee behraiN istemaal karnay ka
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