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Post by brijinder on Jan 11, 2008 1:39:55 GMT 5
Sotay huay mehsoos kiyay shayad Meri nighaahoN say barsatay bosay Ki sharmaa kar ghany baaloN say Apnay chahray ko dhak liya usnay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 13, 2008 9:53:27 GMT 5
Aray wah brijinder jee tussi fair aa gaay O? Tussi tay rus kay tur gaay so!
- Shukar hai aap nay urdu maiN paband shaeri ki achhi koshish ki. Achha khayal hai. Pasand aya.
- Bazm maiN wapsi per aap ka SAWAGAT hai. Hum aap ko tah-e-dil say khush aamdeed kehtay haiN.
- Ab hamaiN umeed hai keh aap kabhi naraz nahiN hoN gay aur aik baRay aur khulay dil say hum dostoN kay tabsray ka jawab daiN gay.
- Umeed hai keh aap mairay ooper likhay Punjabi jumloN ko mind nahiN karaiN gay aur aik dost kay achha mazaq samajh kar qabool kariaN gay
- Khush rahieay aur khushiyaN bantieay!
- Hum sub aap kay dost haiN.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 14, 2008 15:09:56 GMT 5
khoob brijinder ji wah wah thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 14, 2008 22:54:06 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Brijender sahib
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 15, 2008 20:54:22 GMT 5
Bijiner paii! O tussi wee koi jawab taaN davo! Haan jee tussi dena hai jabab!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 15, 2008 20:54:44 GMT 5
Bijiner paii! O tussi wee koi jabab taaN davo! Haan jee tussi dena hai jabab!
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Post by brijinder on Jan 16, 2008 4:08:05 GMT 5
I am thankful to you all for the kind words.It is just incidental that small poem turned out to be conforming to pabaNd tradition.I still believe that poetry does not end with the behr n wazan but has many other forms of expression.Just like formative painting is one form of expression and there are many others like abstract,surrealism,pointilism,cubism etc.I always request all that our love for the Rose should not make us prejudices against other beautiful flowers. Poetry ,for me,has been a journey to explore,to know,to crystallise my own thoughts and NOT just the mathematically precise arrangement of attractive words.This is not to offend anyone but to share my understandingof poetry. Hope I will be understood in the right spirit. Regards brijinder
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 16, 2008 15:55:16 GMT 5
Brijindar jee! Jay tussi urdu naeeN likh sakday taaN Punjabi wich hi kuch likh ditta karo! MainooN lagda aye keh tusii koi prejudice rakhday ho Urdu day khilaf. Ki kehnday o iss day baaray!
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Post by brijinder on Jan 17, 2008 0:02:47 GMT 5
Plz sir,I ask you with folded hands not to cretae any ill-feelings again.If you say so,I shall simply leave this forum.As I have told many times that having read english litrature or all other subjects in english most of the times,I am more comforatble in it.As fas as poetry is concerned,I will say,it happens.I speak punjabi at home but there are always so-many english wirds that we use in it that it is no longer a pure punjbai conversation.And I am not very proud of it either but that is how it is. Regards brijinder
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 17, 2008 22:35:28 GMT 5
Atif Mirza sahib brah e karam thaura sa haath haula rakhaiN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 17, 2008 22:55:43 GMT 5
Atif Mirza sahib brah e karam thaura sa haath haula rakhaiN Jee Zaroor! Humara hath tau haula hi hai. Rafi Sahib! Bas yeh apnay brijinder sahib haiN na bohat hi """""WOH""""" haiN.
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Post by khalid on Jan 18, 2008 20:43:25 GMT 5
dosto aadaab!
kyuNke is post ka aaghaaz urdu kee shaiiry sey hua hai, is liye maiN urdu maiN hi likhooN ga.
mujhey intehaii afsos k saath kehna peRta hai ke is forum meiN jo baateiN ho rahi haiN intehaii gheir zaroori haiN. ager brij sb ne javaab nahiN diya tha to ye unka haq hai. mazhabi bunyaad per kisi ko dheet kehna hamaaree mazhabi aur adabi asaas k munaafi hai. behter yehi hota k shaheen sb aur aatif sb javaab hi na deitey. maiN urdu ka javaab angreizi meiN deikhta hooN to bavajood iske ke kabhi javaab deina chaahta bhi hooN to nahiN deita. ye silsila teen baras sey jaari hai. ager aap dono ko ye pasand nahiN to javaab met deeje aainda. kisi ko ikhlaaqi ferz yaad dilvaane k liye uskee mazhabi bunyaad per tazheek nahiN honi chaahiye.
brijinder sb meiN bhi suleh jooii ka anser intehaii mafqood hai. aajtak unhoN ne ye nahiN socha k ager wo urdu ke forums per, urdu meiN likhi huii apnee tahreer ka javaab deine k liye urdu seekh hi leitey, ya tooti phooti urdu meiN hi, ya aatif sb ke kehne per punjaabi meiN hi chand alfaaz likh deitey to unki shaan meiN ferq na aa jaata. lekin wo ba zid rahey hameisha apni faseeh o baleegh english ki numaaesh kerne per.
meiree baatoN se kisi ki dilaazaari huii ho to maazrat chaahta hooN. aik adna rukn ki hesiyat sey maiN ney apni raaey dee hai. kisi bhi dost ka is sey mut'tafiq hona zaroori nahiN.
dua go
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Post by khalid on Jan 18, 2008 21:05:55 GMT 5
Brijinder ji you have done nothing wrong by replying in English.every one has right to use which ever language they feel comfortable with.My children understand Hindi Urdu and Punjabi but they all speak or reply in English and I have not thrown them out of their home.This bazm is also a home to every writer, well I think so, if not then Razi ji should tell us and we shall move away and create a bazm of our own, but let me tell some very rude people like shaheen ji that if I end up creating a bazm it will be for humans, no matter of what religion they are.But they have to be Humans LOL.Just ignore these kind of people, may be they do not have anything better to do then say these kind of things.May God or Allah give them some understanding about what humanity is. mazhab ki bunyaad per maiN kisi ki tazheek ki intehaii sakhti se mukhaalifat kerta hooN. razi sb to khair kabhi nahiN chaaheN gey ke aap kahiN bhi jaaeN. maN khud aap ko aisa kerne sey rokney maiN sab sey aagey hooN ga.
sunita behen maiN aapki is raaey sey muttafiq nahiN ke urdu k forum per apni urdu maiN kahi shairee ka javaab koii english meiN dey. ham urdu k farogh ki jo baat kertey haiN kya wo isi tarah ho ga? is mozu per mujhey aap sey himaayat ki tavaqqo thi. bachoN ki baat aur hai. lekin aik urdu ke likhaari ko, jo baRey fakhr sey apna kalaam urdu maiN post kerta hai, ye zeba nahiN ke wo urdu k forum per angreizee meiN javaab dey. aur khaas taur per us waqt jab ye baat forum per ghaalib aksariyat keh rahi ho. yahaN kahiN na kahiN ana brij sb k aaRey aati nazar aati hai.
khair andeish
bhaii
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 18, 2008 22:01:15 GMT 5
brijinder sahib main nay is post say shaheen sahib ki woh post delete kar dee hay jis main mazhabi bunyad par dil azaari ki gaai thee mera khyaal hy dost ab is topic ko chorr kr brijinder sahib ki nazm par baat karain jo is thread ka asl mozoo hy kia yeh mamooli bat hay k brijinder sahib english literature main dil chaspi rakhnay k bawajood urdu main poetry kar rahay hain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 18, 2008 22:23:07 GMT 5
aik aur baat main nay is thread k mutaalay sy yeh mehsoos ki k is main aatif sahib nay bohat nayk niati k sath aur pujosh andaz main brijinder sahib ko welcome kaha magar woh apni riwayati tabiat aur mizaj k tehat un k saath mazaq bhi kartay rahay aur baat bigarti chali gai mera khyal hay atif sahib k baray main yeh badgumani nahin karni chahiay k unhon ny danista aysa kia thanx razi
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