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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 22, 2008 18:56:48 GMT 5
Sunita behn aap ka intekhaab khoob hai. App nay tehreek di tau maiN yeh nazm mukammak kar raha hooN.
Jal raha hoon, kal nahin parti kisi pehloo mujhay HaaN dabo de ai muheet-e-aab-e-Ganga tu mujhay
Sar zameeN apni qayaamat ki nifaaq angez hai Wasl kaisa, yaaN tau ik qurb-e-firaaq aamez hai
Badlay yak-rangi kay yeh na aashnaai hai ghazab Ik hi khirman kay daanoN meiN judaai hai ghazab
Jis kay phooloN meiN akhuwwat ki hawa aai nahiN Uss chaman meiN koi lutaf-e-naghma pairaai nahiN
Lazzat-e-qurb-e-Haqeeqi par mita jaata hooN maiN IkhTelaaT-e-mauja-o-saHil se ghabraata hoon maiN
Daana-e-khirman numaa hai shaer-e-mo'jiz bayaN Ho na khirman hi tau iss daanay ki hasti phir kahaN
Husn ho kia khud numaa jabb koi ma'el hi na ho Shamma ko jalnay say kia maTlab jo meHfil hi na ho
Zouq-e-goyaee khamoshi say badalta kiyooN nahiN Mairay aaeenay say yeh johar nikalta kiyooN nahiN
Kubb zabaN kholi hamari lazzat-e-guftaar nay! PhooNk Dala jubb chaman ko aatish-e-paikaar nay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 26, 2008 19:51:04 GMT 5
Sunita Ji! Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya! Hum Mughal aik kay badlay 10 lotaya kartay thay laikin abb baadshahat nahiN rahi, haan aik kay dau abb bhi day saktay haiN! AAp kay 2 + hamari jaanib say. Khush rahiyay. Aap ki beti aur billay ka kia haal hai?
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 7, 2008 16:24:40 GMT 5
Ji maan liya keh aap close watch per haiN, magar unn ka kia kijia jo Smite bhi kar rahay haiN, Meray saath aaj kal yehi ho raha hai.... Graf kabhi ooper jaataa hai kabhi neechay. Musaddas Madd-o-Jazar-Islam ka amli muzahira dekhta hooN aaj kal. KhushiyaN aap ka bhi muqaddar banaiN aur ghum dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooor rahaiN. Beti kay liay dheroN duaaiN. Billay kay liay bhi dua. Aur haaN yeh lijiay 1+ aur, chhotay bhai ki jaanib say....Abhi 105 haiN +1 kay baad 106 ho rahay haiN
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Post by jooni on Dec 18, 2008 20:13:31 GMT 5
Sunita G aur Atif Bhai,
Itni achhi nazm share kernay ka boht shukriya.
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Post by zaki on Mar 3, 2009 10:14:27 GMT 5
Atif bhai bahut khoobsorat sharing...
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 11, 2009 18:10:08 GMT 5
Jooni aur Zaki bhai! Pasandeegi ka bahut shukriya. Iqbal ki yeh nazm hamari aik bahut moazziz rukn "Sunita" sahiba nay shuroo ki thi. Sunita behn kuchh ghalat fehmiyoN ki waja say hum say judaa ho gaeeN, Insha Allah wapas aa jaiN gi.
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