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Post by Sukhanwar on May 23, 2008 21:21:36 GMT 5
Abhi tak koi ittelaa nahiN di kissi nay! Razi Sahib ab game aap kay haath maiN hai.
aap fikr na kijiay janab sab dost laut aain gy jaysay aqeel malik aa gaay hain kanwal bhi wapis aa gaai hain woh didi ko laain gi aur apnay khalid bhai to hum say ziaada naraaz reh hi nahi saktay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 23, 2008 19:43:16 GMT 5
kanwal aap ki ghazal achi lagi hum ny multan wali taqreeb main bhi yeh suni thee tamaam ashar achay hain magar aap ki baaqi poetry k muqaablay main yeh zara kamzor ghazal hy shaid is ki aik waja yeh ho k chaahat radeef rakhnay k baad aap ki ghazal k mazameen main yaksaaniat aa gain aik shair par mujhay aytraz hay
Iss zeest ka har din hai uss hi zaat ki nemat Har din pe uss hi zaat ka ejaaz hai chaahat
aap nay dono misron main laf us hi istamaal kia hy aap yahan kehna to usi chaahti hain magar wazan poora karnay k liay aap ko us hi kehna par gia ye munasib is liay nahi k hum ye lafz USI istamal kartay hain US HI nahi isay drust kar lijiay bazi theek hy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 23, 2008 19:30:39 GMT 5
suhail sahab muddat k baad aap ki ghazal parhi kahan rehtay hain aap..kia masroofiat ziaada barh gai hay ? khoobsoorat ashaar atta karnay ka shukria razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 23, 2008 19:18:45 GMT 5
Lejiayhazoor Coulmn image aa gia boht shukria rafi sahab aap ny column ka formate drust kar dia main akhtar shumar sahb ko samjhanay ki koshish to karta raha magar theek tara sy samjha na paaya ..aap unhain bhi guide kar dain boht acha kia akhtar shumar k aap ny yeh column yahan paste kar dia is bazm main aap ki tehreeron k zariay aap ki adabi wo samaji sargarmion sy bhi agaahi rahay gi aur aap ka takhleeqi safar bhi nazron main rahay ga main aap ka column columns walay section main shift kar raha hoon thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 21, 2008 23:21:18 GMT 5
tanweer sahib hum dua go hain k aap ki walida mohtarma jald sehat yaab hon maam ka saaya aap k sir per hamaysha salamat rahay aur un ki duaain aap k shamile haal rahain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 21, 2008 17:07:14 GMT 5
By poetrazimeri khushi ki intaha nahi k aaj mera dayreena dost akhtar shumar is bazm main aa gia hy akhtar shumar k baaray main hum nay kuch arsa qabl isi forum par khabar dee thee k woh ab qahira main hain aur wahan urdu parha rahay hain kai shairi majmoon k khaliq akhtar k fun ki boht see jehtain hain main detail sy us k baaray main isi thread main phir likhoon ga filhaal usay yahan welcome kehta hoon akhtar shumar tumhari poetry ka intzaar hay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 23:15:35 GMT 5
Aur razi jee sab se ziyada shukr guzaar kaNwal aapki hai ke aapke hi waseele se khuda ne aabgeene ki soorat di hai. Meri dua hai ke Khuda wand e kareem Sukhanwar ko aur aap ko mazeed taufeeQ ataa karta rahe ke wo Sukhanwar ki rooH aur aapke maqsad ko qaim rakh sake ke Aap jaisi hastiyaN hi hoti haiN jo bargad ki thandi ban ke har kaNwal ko raah dikhlaati haiN, aur aaj kitni hi kaNwal haiN jo seedhi raahoN se aage barhna chahti haiN, apni zaat ko pehchaanana chahti haiN,.. [/b][/quote] kanwal itni boht see duain day deen tum nay bhai main inhain kahan sambhaloon ga aur phir bhala shukria ka kis baat ka bhai
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 23:07:16 GMT 5
ateeq bhai yeh image mujh sy open nahi hua is liay ghazal nahi parh saka aap itnay arsay baad aay aur hum sy ghazal open nahi ho rahi agar is ka roman version bhi shamil kar dain to munasib rahay ga thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 13:01:41 GMT 5
raamish sahib khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap ny wah wah lutf aa gia
Sehar ke lout ane me abhi kuch deer baqi he Sitara akhr e shab ka chamakta he nigaho,n me
wah wah janab khoobsoorat baat ki aap nay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 12:56:54 GMT 5
aakif sahib aap ki ghazal parhi boht khoobsoorat andaz hy aap ka
mujh ko acha na lagay shakhs k jo bolay to guftagoo jo bhi ho her baat ko mubhum rakhay
wah wah saari ghazal achi hy matlay main aik typing mistake hy pehlay misray main maayray ki bajaay meray aay ga thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 12:50:24 GMT 5
aor kuch deer ger woh ruk jatey hoti kuch aor roshni momkin khoobsoorat ghazal hy neelofar sahiba aur sunita ji aap bhi to is ghazal par raay dijiay neelofar sahiba ny khaas taur par aap ko mukhatib bhi kia hy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2008 23:59:17 GMT 5
lijay sahib hamara waada poora ho gia aqeel malik k liay shuroo kiay gaay isi alwidaai thread main hum nay baraay maaan k saath waada kia tha k hum aqeel sahab ko wapis lay aain gy aur aaj aqeel wapis aa gaay hain aqeel ko hum apnay ghar main wapis aanay par khush aamdeed kehtay hain aur is k saath hi is thread ka unwaan bhi tabdeel kar rahay hain saeed sahib nay is thread ka naam aqeel malik khuda hafiz rakha tha hum isay tabdeel kar rahay hain thanx
razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2008 18:23:32 GMT 5
aaj hamari bazm k rukn aur khoobsoorat shair janab zaigham abdi sahib ki salgira hy zaighum sahib aap ko boht boht mubarak ho aur boht see duaain aap ki sehat aur salaamti k liay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 15, 2008 0:08:32 GMT 5
mubashir ki khoobsoorat ghazal parhnay ko dee aap nay rafi bhaai kisi ka qurb qyaamat sy kum nahi tha saeed faqat firaaq ko hum imtihan samajhtay thayy
waah waah khoob kaha saeed aap nayy girah bhi achi lagaai hy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 14, 2008 11:17:04 GMT 5
salam,hamari janib say Ghazni Sahib ko bharpoor dad deejay.Razi Bhai! is ghazal ka mood daikhain oor lutf uthain. ji naveed main ny daykha hy is ghazal ka mood boht khoobsoorat radeef shaid main ny yeh radeef pehli baar isi ghazal main parhi hay boht see daad is ghazal par thanx razi
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