zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 14, 2008 10:59:52 GMT 5
qamar ji aap ki ghazal aaj padne ka mauqa mila, bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai aap ne.daad qubuul kareN. Sunita Ji Daad ka bey had shukria Adab Qamar
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anmol
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by anmol on Mar 16, 2008 0:34:31 GMT 5
Gulshan mein thi Bahar tumhen sochtey rahey saanseN theeN khar khar tumhen sochtey rahey Aayee hawa ke dosh pe ik aashna mehek ham kho ke ikhtiar tumheN sochtey rahey guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey Aadaab, Qamar SaaHib! aap ka taaza kalaam to nahiiN mila lekin ye khoobsoorat ghazal aik baar phir paRhne ka mauqa zaroor mil gaya jo yaqeenan maiN stanvir forum per paRh chuki huuN aur daad diye baGhair bhi nahiiN rahi hoNgi. aik baar phir meri dili daad qubool kijiye. Anmol
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Post by khalid on Mar 16, 2008 5:19:36 GMT 5
waah! qamar sb is haseen merhaley ko aap ne khoobsoorat andaaz maiN peish kiya! dheiroN daad qubool keeje! aur ye she'r aapki zameen maiN arz kerne ki sa'aadat haasil ker raha hooN.... bersaat ki jhaRi ko nazar meiN samo k ham ro ro key zaar zaar tumheiN sochtey rahey Khalid Saheb aap ka ye sher meri sari ghazal ke baraber hey janab. wah kya khubsoorat sher kaha hey aap ney. Aisi bherpoor daad ke liye bey had shukria. Adab Qamar qamar saaheb aap ko ager ye she'r itna hi pasand aaya hai to aapka hua!
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