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Post by jooni on Nov 18, 2008 23:36:08 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib, Adaab.
Moujooda dour main aap ghazal ka behtreen sha'er kis ko kahain gay?
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 19, 2008 0:48:20 GMT 5
rafi sahab hum maazi qareeb main daykhain to humain adeeb aur shair jamhooriat ki jidojehd main amli taur par shareek nazar aatay hain qaid o band ki saoobtain korray aur jilawatni sub kuch zia daur tak to dikhaai dayta hay phir us k baad adeeb ki active participation khatm ho jaati y kion samaaj sy laaataluk hota jaa rahahy qalamkaar? thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 19, 2008 22:19:19 GMT 5
Nasri shaeri kay baray maiN aap ki raay jan'na chahooN ga?
Mirza sahib jab nasarii hi keh dia to shairi kehna hi ghalat ho ga maiN isay nahi manta koi bhi fan paara ya to shairi hota hay ya phir nasr
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 19, 2008 22:26:47 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib, Adaab. Moujooda dour main aap ghazal ka behtreen sha'er kis ko kahain gay? Faraz nay ghazal ko jis meyar par paunhchaa dia hay woh meyar dhondna paray ga bahar haal Shehzad Ahmad maujooda daur maiN meray khayal maiN ghazal ki aabyaari kar rahay haiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 19, 2008 22:29:20 GMT 5
rafi sahab hum maazi qareeb main daykhain to humain adeeb aur shair jamhooriat ki jidojehd main amli taur par shareek nazar aatay hain qaid o band ki saoobtain korray aur jilawatni sub kuch zia daur tak to dikhaai dayta hay phir us k baad adeeb ki active participation khatm ho jaati y kion samaaj sy laaataluk hota jaa rahahy qalamkaar? thanx razi Razi bhai aaj kay adeeb ko danista taur par rozi aur roti kay chakar maiN phansa dia gia hay isi liay apnay masail say niklay ga to jamhooriyat ki baat karay ga
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 19, 2008 23:35:23 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib, Adaab. Moujooda dour main aap ghazal ka behtreen sha'er kis ko kahain gay? Faraz nay ghazal ko jis meyar par paunhchaa dia hay woh meyar dhondna paray ga bahar haal Shehzad Ahmad maujooda daur maiN meray khayal maiN ghazal ki aabyaari kar rahay haiNaur zafar iqbal k baaray main aap ki kya raay hay kia un k haan shehzad ahmad sy ziaada tanawo nahin?
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 19, 2008 23:36:32 GMT 5
rafi sahab hum maazi qareeb main daykhain to humain adeeb aur shair jamhooriat ki jidojehd main amli taur par shareek nazar aatay hain qaid o band ki saoobtain korray aur jilawatni sub kuch zia daur tak to dikhaai dayta hay phir us k baad adeeb ki active participation khatm ho jaati y kion samaaj sy laaataluk hota jaa rahahy qalamkaar? thanx razi Razi bhai aaj kay adeeb ko danista taur par rozi aur roti kay chakar maiN phansa dia gia hay isi liay apnay masail say niklay ga to jamhooriyat ki baat karay galaykin mera sawaal yeh hy k kia rozi roti habib jalib ka masala nahin tah ? unhon ny to is k bawajood apna faz ada kia
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 20, 2008 1:38:18 GMT 5
Faraz nay ghazal ko jis meyar par paunhchaa dia hay woh meyar dhondna paray ga bahar haal Shehzad Ahmad maujooda daur maiN meray khayal maiN ghazal ki aabyaari kar rahay haiN aur zafar iqbal k baaray main aap ki kya raay hay kia un k haan shehzad ahmad sy ziaada tanawo nahin? Zafar Iqbal bhi aik bara aham naam hay RAzi bhai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 20, 2008 1:45:06 GMT 5
Razi bhai aaj kay adeeb ko danista taur par rozi aur roti kay chakar maiN phansa dia gia hay isi liay apnay masail say niklay ga to jamhooriyat ki baat karay ga laykin mera sawaal yeh hy k kia rozi roti habib jalib ka masala nahin tah ? unhon ny to is k bawajood apna faz ada kia Aap nay sahi farmaya razi bhai magar Habib Jalib is qabeel kay akhrii fard saabit huay
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Post by ramishjaan on Nov 22, 2008 19:22:36 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram Rafi bhai pehle to is muaklme me ap ko khsuhamdeed aur dil ki gehraio,n se muabrikbad peesh he is ke bad maazrat chahta ho,n ke aj kal baaz majborio,n ki bina par baqayedgi se bazm me hazir nahi ho paraha aj ap ka muaklma dekha to insdhalla jald jald hazir hono ki pori koshish karo ga INSHALLA . Rafi bhai pehla sawal karne ki jisarat kar raha ho.n ap ke nazdeek majuda dour me adab ko kon si sinf zeyda maqbol he ? waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 23, 2008 0:13:49 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram Rafi bhai pehle to is muaklme me ap ko khsuhamdeed aur dil ki gehraio,n se muabrikbad peesh he is ke bad maazrat chahta ho,n ke aj kal baaz majborio,n ki bina par baqayedgi se bazm me hazir nahi ho paraha aj ap ka muaklma dekha to insdhalla jald jald hazir hono ki pori koshish karo ga INSHALLA . Rafi bhai pehla sawal karne ki jisarat kar raha ho.n ap ke nazdeek majuda dour me adab ko kon si sinf zeyda maqbol he ? waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Bohat Shukria Ramish g aap ki aamad ka
belaa shubaa Ghazal urdu adab kay maathay ka jhoomar hay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 23, 2008 14:20:42 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai!
Q 1. Kia nazm (Kissi bhi qism) ki adab maiN koi ehmiat nahiN rakhti?
Q 2. Nazm likhnay walay kum kiyooN hotay jaa rahay haiN?
Q 3. Mazahia shaeri ki adah maiN kia ehmiat hai?
Q 4. Mazahia shaeroN ko adab maiN khaS maqam kiyooN nahiN HaSil hai?
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 24, 2008 0:49:56 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai!
Q 1. Kia nazm (Kissi bhi qism) ki adab maiN koi ehmiat nahiN rakhti?
Q 2. Nazm likhnay walay kum kiyooN hotay jaa rahay haiN?
Q 3. Mazahia shaeri ki adah maiN kia ehmiat hai?
Q 4. Mazahia shaeroN ko adab maiN khaS maqam kiyooN nahiN HaSil hai? Mirza sahib baray aham swalaat a,ay aap ki janib say
nazm apni jaga aik haqeeqat hay aur apna muqaam rakhti hay jis say inkaar mumkin nahi
Ghazal ki har dil azeez sinaf shairooN ki aksariyat ko apna deewana bana laiti hay isi liay nazm kay shair kam miltay haiN
maiN taba zaad mazah ka qail hooN kioN keh yeh bhi takhleeqee kaam hay jab keh lateefooN ko nazm karna koi takhleeqee kaaam nahi
mazahia shair aaj kal apni ahmiyat manwa rahay haiN
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 26, 2008 19:19:33 GMT 5
Dr SAHAB ye farmayeay ga ke ye kis had tak darust hay ke aj ka adeeb apnay girdo pesh say baykhabar hokar takhleeqi fraiz anjaam day raha hay kia aisa mumkin hay ke baghair maroozi halaat ko janay koe adab para takhleeq hosakta hay..........?\
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 27, 2008 0:32:09 GMT 5
Dr SAHAB ye farmayeay ga ke ye kis had tak darust hay ke aj ka adeeb apnay girdo pesh say baykhabar hokar takhleeqi fraiz anjaam day raha hay kia aisa mumkin hay ke baghair maroozi halaat ko janay koe adab para takhleeq hosakta hay..........?\ Malik sahib apnay gird o paish say bay khabar rehna mumkin nahi magar majmooee taur par maslehat andaishi say kaam lia ja raha hay
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