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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 2, 2008 20:39:50 GMT 5
Yeh sochta hooN kisi ka jahaan tha maiN bhi Kisi zameeN ka kabhi aasmaan tha maiN bhi Khud apni zaat kay asraar bhi samajh na saka Keh apnay wastay ik imtihaan tha maiN bhi MaiN apni soch ka izhar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi UkhaR phainka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi Mujhay tau apnoN ki nafrat nay badgumaan kia MuhabbatoN maiN bahut khush gumaan tha maiN bhi Tumhari yaad nay aa kar issay basaya hai Wagarna barsoN say khali makaan tha maiN bhi TumhaiN hamesh bachaya hai sakht mausam say Tumharay wastay ik sa'ebaan tha maiN bhi Koi kahani meray paas abb naiN logo! Gaya woh daur kabhi daastaan tha maiN bhi Yeh kis nay nauch lieay mairay baal-o-per Atif! BaRay sakooN say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi
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Post by khalid on Jan 2, 2008 21:17:04 GMT 5
Yeh sochta hooN kisi ka jahaan tha maiN bhi Kisi zameeN ka kabhi aasmaan tha maiN bhi Khud apni zaat kay asraar bhi samajh na saka Keh apnay wastay ik imtihaan tha maiN bhi MaiN apni soch ka izhar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi UkhaR phainka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi Mujhay tau apnoN ki nafrat nay badgumaan kia MuhabbatoN maiN bahut khush gumaan tha maiN bhi Tumhari yaad nay aa kar issay basaya hai Wagarna barsoN say khali makaan tha maiN bhi TumhaiN hamesh bachaya hai sakht mausam say Tumharay wastay ik sa'ebaan tha maiN bhi Koi kahani meray paas abb naiN logo! Gaya woh daur kabhi daastaan tha maiN bhi Yeh kis nay nauch lieay mairay baal-o-per Atif! BaRay sakooN say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi bohot khoob aatif sb. her she'r la jabb hai! daad qubool keejey! aik filbadeeh she'r hesb e rivaayat meiree jaanib se bhi......[/size] maiN aik rooh tha, mujh ko badan ne maar diya baeed e qaid e zamaan o makaan tha maiN bhi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 2, 2008 23:36:03 GMT 5
Yeh sochta hooN kisi ka jahaan tha maiN bhi Kisi zameeN ka kabhi aasmaan tha maiN bhi Khud apni zaat kay asraar bhi samajh na saka Keh apnay wastay ik imtihaan tha maiN bhi MaiN apni soch ka izhar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi UkhaR phainka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi Mujhay tau apnoN ki nafrat nay badgumaan kia MuhabbatoN maiN bahut khush gumaan tha maiN bhi Tumhari yaad nay aa kar issay basaya hai Wagarna barsoN say khali makaan tha maiN bhi TumhaiN hamesh bachaya hai sakht mausam say Tumharay wastay ik sa'ebaan tha maiN bhi Koi kahani meray paas abb naiN logo! Gaya woh daur kabhi daastaan tha maiN bhi Yeh kis nay nauch lieay mairay baal-o-per Atif! BaRay sakooN say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi Bohat Khoobsoorat Ghazal Mirza sahib
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 5, 2008 9:39:20 GMT 5
aatif bhaai aaj multan aaya aur forum main jhaanak aap ki ghazal parh k safar ki saari thakan door ho gaai bohat khoobsoorat kalaam lutf aa gia thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 5, 2008 15:54:22 GMT 5
. bohot khoob aatif sb her she'r la jabb hai! daad qubool keejey! aik filbadeeh she'r hesb e rivaayat meiree jaanib se bhi...... maiN aik rooh tha, mujh ko badan ne maar diya baeed e qaid e zamaan o makaan tha maiN bhi Iss Inayat ka shukriya, Khalid Shaib
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 5, 2008 15:55:57 GMT 5
bohot khoob Atif sb. her she'r la jabb hai! daad qubool keejey! aik filbadeeh she'r hesb e rivaayat meiree jaanib se bhi......[/size] maiN aik rooh tha, mujh ko badan ne maar diya baeed e qaid e zamaan o makaan tha maiN bhi [/quote] Iss inayat ka Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 14, 2008 19:57:04 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib aur Khalid Sahib! Ghazal maiN typo thi iss liay ussay durust kar kay dobara post kia hai. Aap say guzarish hai keh aap apni post maiN meray qout kiay huway board ko modify kar laiN kiyooN keh uss ka link different hai. Thanx
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Post by neha on May 24, 2008 3:23:42 GMT 5
Salam, aap ka kalaam aaj first time padha aur bht lutf aya...bht manjhi hui aur khubsurat shairy hai..
MaiN apni soch ka izhaar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi
wese tou poory ghazal acchi hai but ye shair bohut zabardast hai
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 15:49:34 GMT 5
Salam, aap ka kalaam aaj first time padha aur bht lutf aya...bht manjhi hui aur khubsurat shairy hai..
MaiN apni soch ka izhaar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi
wese tou poory ghazal acchi hai but ye shair bohut zabardast hai Neha Sahiba! Aap ki tawajjah aur Ghazal ki taareef ka bahut shukriya. Aap ki wapsi ka bhi shukriya banta hai....... Aap ki apni shaeri bhi achhchhi hai laikin abhi nazar nahiN aati?
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Post by Bilal Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 23:23:12 GMT 5
Bhai Jan Atif aap ki ghazal nay mutassir kia, takheer say daad hazir hai.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 15, 2008 6:03:33 GMT 5
Bhai Jan Atif aap ki ghazal nay mutassir kia, takheer say daad hazir hai. Mutassir honay aur daad denay ka jaldi say shukriya.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 15, 2008 10:00:48 GMT 5
khoobsorat ghaazal kahi ap nay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 16, 2008 13:21:58 GMT 5
khoobsorat ghaazal kahi ap nay dad qabool kejeay Malik sahib pazeeraii ka shukriya.
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jun 16, 2008 21:16:08 GMT 5
aoa atif shab acchi ghazal hy khas toor par ye aashar
UkhaR phainka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi
Yeh kis nay nauch lieay mairay baal-o-per Atif! BaRay sakooN say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi
dadd hazer hy duwa goo Mubashir
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 16, 2008 21:28:08 GMT 5
aoa atif shab acchi ghazal hy khas toor par ye aashar
UkhaR phainka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi
Yeh kis nay nauch lieay mairay baal-o-per Atif! BaRay sakooN say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi
dadd hazer hy duwa goo Mubashir Mubashir Jiaap ki zarra nawazi hai keh aap nay ghazal ko itnay ghaur say paRha aur daad inayat farmaii. Khush Rahiay diyar-e-ghair maiN Allah aap ka Hami-o-Nasir ho.
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