zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Oct 15, 2008 11:28:04 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish:
Arz kiya hay:
Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee
Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee
Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee
Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee
Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee
Adab
Qamar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 15, 2008 12:08:06 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Qamar sahib
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 15, 2008 13:16:12 GMT 5
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee
Bohut khubsurat ghazal hai,har shair hi qaabil -e- daad hai
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 15, 2008 22:45:19 GMT 5
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee
wah wah qamar sahab kamal kar dia aap nay aur is shair per to hum jhoom gaay
Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee
daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 15, 2008 22:59:55 GMT 5
"Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee"
Boht khoob Qamar sahib. Daad hazir hai.
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:55:09 GMT 5
bohat bohat shukria Rafi saheb Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:56:14 GMT 5
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Bohut khubsurat ghazal hai,har shair hi qaabil -e- daad hai Neha Saheba Ghazal ki pasndeedgi ka shukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:57:27 GMT 5
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee wah wah qamar sahab kamal kar dia aap nay aur is shair per to hum jhoom gaay Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi saheb aap jaisey sukhanwar ko meri ye tuk bandi pasand aayee...meri khus naseebi. daad ke liye shukria janab khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:58:04 GMT 5
"Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee" Boht khoob Qamar sahib. Daad hazir hai. Shukria Juni ji khaksar Qamar
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Nov 22, 2008 12:53:16 GMT 5
Qamar Sahab bahut khoobsorat kalam share kia hai app ne .... Tamam ashaar qabil-e-daad hain.... laikan yeh ashaar tu bahut passand aye....
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee
Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee
Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay..... Sada khush raheay...
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 23, 2008 13:50:33 GMT 5
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee
masroofeat ki waja say aik arsay baad ana hoa aur ap ki is ghazal nay taza kar dia bahut napi tuli rawaN si ghazal kehnay par dhairooN dad qabooleay
aqeel malik
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 26, 2008 21:54:22 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish: Arz kiya hay: Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee Adab Qamar NICE POETRY ................ BE HAPPY
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Post by tmasood on Nov 27, 2008 20:15:42 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish: Arz kiya hay: Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee Adab Qamar bohat khoob Mashallah
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:16:24 GMT 5
Qamar Sahab bahut khoobsorat kalam share kia hai app ne .... Tamam ashaar qabil-e-daad hain.... laikan yeh ashaar tu bahut passand aye.... Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay..... Sada khush raheay... Zaki saheb Bey had mashkoor hun aap ka ke aap ney meri is kawish ko itney ghaur sey parha...pasand kiya...aur itni sari daad di. Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:17:29 GMT 5
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee masroofeat ki waja say aik arsay baad ana hoa aur ap ki is ghazal nay taza kar dia bahut napi tuli rawaN si ghazal kehnay par dhairooN dad qabooleay aqeel malik Malik saheb bey had shukria itni achi daad ka. Khaksar Qamar
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