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Post by Sukhanwar on May 7, 2007 20:50:26 GMT 5
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- kaha bhi tha k manzar to achanak hi badalta hy kaha bhi tha k mosam to achanak hi badalta hy bataya tha k pasti ka safar aghaaz ho jaay to kitni hi bulandi ho ya mansab jaah o hasti ho bas ik lamhay main (han bas aik hi lamhay main ) sab kuch is tara sy khatm hota hy k jaysay aag paani sy k jasay koi shehzada nikal jaay kahani sy ........ kaha bhi tha k daya ko isi dhaaray main behnay day kaha bhi tha k hum jis haal main rehtay hain rehnay day bataya tha charaagh aandhi sy bujh jaain to aankhon main diay kuch timtimaatay hain sitaaray maand parr jaain to khud sooraj nikalta hy koi munh zor girta hy koi gir kar sambhulta hy ....... kaha bhi tha k har manzar ka pusmanzar to hota hy agar deewaar ban jaay to us main dur to hota hy kaha bhi tha k har mosam k daaman main naay mosam to hotay hain jahan koi nahin hota wahan par humto hotay hain bataya tha k har aaghaaz ka jis morr par anjaam hota hay usi anjaam say ik raasta aagay nikulta hy wahin manzar badalta hy wahin mosam badalta hy
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Post by Tanweer on May 7, 2007 22:50:16 GMT 5
Razi Sahib!
Aapka naya board, bohat sajh dhaj k saath khoobsoorti say aarasta ham nay dekha aur pasand kiya...
Bohat mobarik ho, dua hay k Sukhanwar mazeed tar^qi karay...
wahin manzar badalta hy wahin mosam badalta hy
aik bohat omdah khiyal aur manzar nama aapka, aik soch, aik isharah, aik esteaarah, bohat se daad qabool farmaien...
doosray band mein lafz "daya" ko edit kar dein "darya"..
aik baar phir mobarik
Khair Andesh Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 8, 2007 2:54:40 GMT 5
bohat Khoobsoorat nazm Razi bhai
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Post by sunita on May 8, 2007 2:59:21 GMT 5
Allah tera laakh laakh shukr hai ki ham sab phir se bazm main ikkatha hue hain.Razi bhai mubaarak ho aap ko, yeh bazm bhi aur daad bhi iss nazm par.Khuda aap ko har maidaan main tarakki de.aameen.khush rahen Razi bhai.
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:49:54 GMT 5
Salam Razi Bhai, Aap ki ye nazam mujhay bohut pasand aai ..mery taraf say itny khubsurat nazam likhnay par daad qubool kijye.Thanx God k humara ye forum doobara say start hua mubarak ho aap ko bohut bohut...
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Post by kanwal on May 8, 2007 17:12:50 GMT 5
Jee janaaB aapne jo kaha tha, humne parha tha aur jawab bhi diya tha ,..... Ab aap phir keh rahe haiN,........ Yeh nazM jitni baar parho har baar nayee lagti hai, ik naya ehsaas deti hai, bohat dil ko chhooti hui mehsoos hoti hai,... daad ke dher ke phooL aapki nazR ,....
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 12:01:39 GMT 5
bohat Khoobsoorat nazm Razi bhai
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Post by uzair143 on May 9, 2007 14:51:07 GMT 5
razi sb
bout khoobsurat nazam
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2007 23:36:36 GMT 5
Razi Sahib! Aapka naya board, bohat sajh dhaj k saath khoobsoorti say aarasta ham nay dekha aur pasand kiya... Bohat mobarik ho, dua hay k Sukhanwar mazeed tar^qi karay... wahin manzar badalta hy wahin mosam badalta hy aik bohat omdah khiyal aur manzar nama aapka, aik soch, aik isharah, aik esteaarah, bohat se daad qabool farmaien... doosray band mein lafz "daya" ko edit kar dein "darya".. aik baar phir mobarik Khair Andesh Tanweertanweer bhai yeh board to aap doston ki wajah sy saja hay khushi hui k aap ko nazm pasand aai thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2007 23:48:26 GMT 5
bohat Khoobsoorat nazm Razi bhai shukria rafi ji bohat nawazish aap ki razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2007 23:50:08 GMT 5
Allah tera laakh laakh shukr hai ki ham sab phir se bazm main ikkatha hue hain.Razi bhai mubaarak ho aap ko, yeh bazm bhi aur daad bhi iss nazm par.Khuda aap ko har maidaan main tarakki de.aameen.khush rahen Razi bhai. shukria sunita ji razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 16, 2007 23:51:45 GMT 5
Salam Razi Bhai, Aap ki ye nazam mujhay bohut pasand aai ..mery taraf say itny khubsurat nazam likhnay par daad qubool kijye.Thanx God k humara ye forum doobara say start hua mubarak ho aap ko bohut bohut... nazm pasand karnay ka shukria neha ji thanx razi
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Post by khalid on May 17, 2007 4:58:10 GMT 5
janaab aisa lag raha hai ke manzer waaqaii badalne waala hai! aik hesb e haal aur khoobsoorat nazm ke liye daad haazir hai!
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Post by hooriya on May 17, 2007 9:57:32 GMT 5
Razi bhai buhat khoobsurat nazm kahi aapne..ek ek lafz dil me utarta hua...buhat asar karti hui nazm....daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by sumanshah on May 18, 2007 11:26:48 GMT 5
adaaaab razi sahab
bohat umda nazm daad qabool kijyee.
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