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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 18:05:27 GMT 5
Razi sahab kahani to mukamal ho gaai hay darj bala misra hamary aik dost ka bhi hay aur bohat arsa pehlay un ki isi misray ki zameen mein ghazal adbiat mein chap chuki hay...... un ka sher ye hay zara thehro abhi roshni hay mujhy saey ki ahat aa rahi hay hami say hay ye rasm e seena koobi hamary hath par bayyat likhi hay mein apnay ap ko dohra raha hon kahani tu mukamal ho chuki hay khiar tawarud hota rehta hay ye ghazal apnay manon mein bahut umda lagi hay aqeel sahib asal main yeh bohat saamnayki baat hy isay mumkin hy aur shoraa nay bhi istamaal kia ho ..mazmoon agar cheh mera yaksar mukhtalif hay magar main phir bhi isay ghazal say nikaal raha hoon tawarad us waqt tak hi tawarad rehta hy jab tak us ka ilm na ho .. thanx
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 18:06:35 GMT 5
razi SaaHeb, aadaab! huZoor kaisay haiN aap! ka,ii din ba'd aapki bahut hi uMdah ghazal paRh~ ker bahut lut^f aaYa. merii dilii daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar shukria waqar k aap nay pazeeraai ki thanx razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 28, 2008 17:34:54 GMT 5
aqeel sahib asal main yeh bohat saamnayki baat hy isay mumkin hy aur shoraa nay bhi istamaal kia ho ..mazmoon agar cheh mera yaksar mukhtalif hay magar main phir bhi isay ghazal say nikaal raha hoon tawarad us waqt tak hi tawarad rehta hy jab tak us ka ilm na ho .. thanx Razi sahab ap ka bara pan hay between the lines jo mein nahi keh saka ap nay samajh lia aur myra man bhi barhaya jis kay leay mein ap ka jtna bhi shukr guzaar hon kam hay aqeel
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Post by naheedv on Nov 5, 2008 22:34:37 GMT 5
kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy
Waah, buhat hi khoobsoorat she'r, darasl poori ghazal hi aik alag kaifiyat kee hai. buhat khoob!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 6, 2008 10:44:03 GMT 5
kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy Waah, buhat hi khoobsoorat she'r, darasl poori ghazal hi aik alag kaifiyat kee hai. buhat khoob! naheed sahiba boht shukria is pazeeraai ka razi
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Post by jooni on Nov 6, 2008 17:16:20 GMT 5
"kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy
kisi ko hijr nay sayraab rakha koi qurbat main pyaasa reh gia hy"
Wonderful Razi Bhai.
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 10, 2008 10:00:00 GMT 5
hamary saath kia kia jhaylta woh..,,
biccharr kar kitna acha reh gia hay
razi sahib...... alfaz nahin mel rahy tareef kailiay .. bahut khubsurat ghazal hay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 11, 2008 0:14:22 GMT 5
"kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy kisi ko hijr nay sayraab rakha koi qurbat main pyaasa reh gia hy" Wonderful Razi Bhai. boht shukria aap ka razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 11, 2008 0:16:39 GMT 5
hamary saath kia kia jhaylta woh..,, biccharr kar kitna acha reh gia hay razi sahib...... alfaz nahin mel rahy tareef kailiay .. bahut khubsurat ghazal hay najma sahiba ghazal pasand karnay ka shukria razi
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