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Post by Sukhanwar on May 10, 2007 0:35:35 GMT 5
kisi tabeer ki khahish main yeh jeewan gaNwaatay hain agar ik khaab daykha hy to qeemat bhi chukaatay hain
hamaray is safar ka jaanay ab anjaam kaysa ho keh jo bhatky huay hain woh humain rusta batatay hain
ana, shikway, shikayat ,roothna ,naraz ho jana tumhain to yad ho ga hum yeh sab kuch bhool jaatay hain
humain bhi chaahiay sahib koi khil_at , koi mansab mahaz e jang sy hum bhi to bas nakaam aatay hain
hamaray paaon main rasta nahin bas bay qaraari hy agar bhutkain bhi to us ki taraf hi laut jaatay hain
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
razi-ud-din razi
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Post by uzair143 on May 10, 2007 0:38:32 GMT 5
razi sb
yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
kia likha app ne zabardast.daad kabool kigey
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Post by kanwal on May 10, 2007 1:00:42 GMT 5
kisi tabeer ki khahish main yeh jeewan gaNwaatay hain agar ik khaab daykha hy to qeemat bhi chukaatay hain hamaray is safar ka jaanay ab anjaam kaysa ho keh jo bhatky huay hain woh humain rusta batatay hain razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain razi-ud-din razi bohat Umdaa razi jee ,...
Umdagi to poori ghazl meiN hi hai par yeh 3 ashaar bassss,...... na poochiye,.... bohat dilnasheeN haiN ye ,....
Daad pe dheroN phooL aapke liye ,....
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 10, 2007 1:27:41 GMT 5
Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal Razi bhai
ana, shikway, shikayat ,roothna ,naraz ho jana tumhain yad ho ga hum yeh sab kuch bhool jaatay hain
is shaer kay dosray misray main shaid koi composing ki ghalati lagti hay
saari ghazal apnay andar aap kay makhsoos asloob ko smoay huay hay dad qabool farmaiN
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:55:47 GMT 5
humain bhi chaahiay sahib koi khil_at , koi mansab mahaz e jang sy hum bhi to bas nakaam aatay hain
hamaray paaon main rasta nahin hy bay qaraari hy agar bhutkain bhi to us ki taraf hi laut jaatay hain
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
razi bhai buhut khoobsurat ghazal
aap ka munfarid lehja aur mazboot takhayyul
buhut umdah ghazal he, mubarakqubool kejay
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Post by neha on May 10, 2007 14:48:12 GMT 5
kisi tabeer ki khahish main yeh jeewan gaNwaatay hain agar ik khaab daykha hy to qeemat bhi chukaatay hain
hamaray is safar ka jaanay ab anjaam kaysa ho keh jo bhatky huay hain woh humain rusta batatay hain
ana, shikway, shikayat ,roothna ,naraz ho jana tumhain to yad ho ga hum yeh sab kuch bhool jaatay hain
humain bhi chaahiay sahib koi khil_at , koi mansab mahaz e jang sy hum bhi to bas nakaam aatay hain
hamaray paaon main rasta nahin hy bay qaraari hy agar bhutkain bhi to us ki taraf hi laut jaatay hain
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
Razi bhai zabardast ghazal hai aap ki...itnay khubsurat alfaaz aur khayal k parh k maza aa gaya...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye.
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 11, 2007 18:33:45 GMT 5
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
RAZI BHAI IN ALFAZ NEY TU AAKHEER KER DE DAAD QABOOL KE'JE'EY
MAY ALLAH BLESS U [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:27:59 GMT 5
razi sb yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain kia likha app ne zabardast.daad kabool kigey uzair sahib ghazal pasand karnay ka shukria thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:29:40 GMT 5
kisi tabeer ki khahish main yeh jeewan gaNwaatay hain agar ik khaab daykha hy to qeemat bhi chukaatay hain hamaray is safar ka jaanay ab anjaam kaysa ho keh jo bhatky huay hain woh humain rusta batatay hain razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain razi-ud-din razi bohat Umdaa razi jee ,...
Umdagi to poori ghazl meiN hi hai par yeh 3 ashaar bassss,...... na poochiye,.... bohat dilnasheeN haiN ye ,....
Daad pe dheroN phooL aapke liye ,....kanwal ji daad k itnay bohat say phoolon ka main kia karoon ga bohat shukria aap ka razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:31:04 GMT 5
Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal Razi bhai ana, shikway, shikayat ,roothna ,naraz ho jana tumhain yad ho ga hum yeh sab kuch bhool jaatay hain is shaer kay dosray misray main shaid koi composing ki ghalati lagti hay saari ghazal apnay andar aap kay makhsoos asloob ko smoay huay hay dad qabool farmaiN ji rafi bhai aik lafz reh gia tha aap ny nishandahi ki to usay theek kar dia thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:32:49 GMT 5
waah Razi bhai, har ashaar bahut dil ke nazdeek maloom pada.bahut din baad koii achhi ghazal padne ko milli.daad qubuul karen. yeh Rafi bhai lagta hai sach main iss bazm ko enjoy kar rahe hain tabhi to kayi jagah do do baar reply kiya hai ya phir do do baar thread banaaye hain.sorry Rafi bhai, socha zaraa aap ko tang kiya jaaye, thodi masti bhi ho jaaye. shukria sunita ji aap ki tehseen hamara hosla barha gai aur yeh rafi sahib sy sorry na kia karain yeh kisi baat ka bura nahin manaatay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:34:52 GMT 5
humain bhi chaahiay sahib koi khil_at , koi mansab mahaz e jang sy hum bhi to bas nakaam aatay hain hamaray paaon main rasta nahin hy bay qaraari hy agar bhutkain bhi to us ki taraf hi laut jaatay hain razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain razi bhai buhut khoobsurat ghazal
aap ka munfarid lehja aur mazboot takhayyul
buhut umdah ghazal he, mubarakqubool kejaybohat shukria bohat muhabat aap ki waqar thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:37:17 GMT 5
Razi bhai zabardast ghazal hai aap ki...itnay khubsurat alfaaz aur khayal k parh k maza aa gaya...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye. aur neha ji humain aap ka reply parh k maza aa gia bohat shukria razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2007 14:41:28 GMT 5
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
RAZI BHAI IN ALFAZ NEY TU AAKHEER KER DE DAAD QABOOL KE'JE'EY
MAY ALLAH BLESS U
[/COLOR][/SIZE] [/quote] bohat shukria haseeb bhai razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 11:43:29 GMT 5
Razi sb
bahut achi ghazal hay aik likhari ka mansab ye hay k apnay daur apnay irdgird honay walay waqiat o masail ko inhail kary aur aik sachay tareeekh dan ka kam kray kiun aik adeeb apnay zamany ki akasi kar raha hota hay pakistan par jis tarha dictator ship aur neu colonialism kay hamiun nay yalghar kar rakhi hay us karb ki shidat is ghazal ki tehtee rau mein nazar ati ha yahan pakistan mein masla ye hay koe bhi nazrea kuli taur par raij hay he nahi kahi industrialist apna difa kar rahay hein tu kahin fudalists apna kahin NGOs ki ar mein saltanat ki bunyadon ko hilaay jaraha hay tu kahi comunist apna par char kar rahay hein ye aik intishar ka daur hay jis mein mazhmti adab parwan char rahay aur yehi mazahmat yahan maujood hay ap ki is ghazal mein
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