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Post by neha on May 24, 2008 3:29:35 GMT 5
Assalam o alaikum Ramish sahab, aap ki shairy k tou hum shuroo say fan hain ..bohut khubsurat ghazal hai hamesha ki tarhan.. Sehar ke lout anay me abhi kuch dair baqi hai Sitara akhri shab ka chamakta he nigaho'n main
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Post by ramishjaan on May 24, 2008 23:07:31 GMT 5
walekum salam neha jee bohat bohjat shukriya ap ki i spur khlos dad ke liye mamno,n ho,n ke aj bohat lambe arse ke bad ap ki janib se mere kisi bhi klam par qeemti raye masoul hoi he shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 1:41:43 GMT 5
Waah bohat khoob Ramish jee ,.... Humesha ki tarah bohat umdagi se dilloN pe likhe aapne yeh ashaar ,... Daad ke laakhoN guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by ramishjaan on May 25, 2008 23:21:24 GMT 5
[color=Green]AOA kanwal jee zahe naseeb aj aik bohat mudat ke bad ap se bazm ki raho me mulaqat hoi pehle ap ko paksitan se wapsi mubarik ho sahbe kitab ho gai MASHALLA is ke liye bhi muabrik bad ka tohfa qabol ki jiye ghazal ap ko pasand aei mere liye ezaaz he kion ke jis uamdagi se ap mere klam ko parhti aur smajhti hain esa shaz shaz hi hota he bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by kanwal on May 26, 2008 2:07:30 GMT 5
[color=Green ]AOA kanwal jee zahe naseeb aj aik bohat mudat ke bad ap se bazm ki raho me mulaqat hoi pehle ap ko paksitan se wapsi mubarik ho sahbe kitab ho gai MASHALLA is ke liye bhi muabrik bad ka tohfa qabol ki jiye ghazal ap ko pasand aei mere liye ezaaz he kion ke jis uamdagi se ap mere klam ko parhti aur smajhti hain esa shaz shaz hi hota he bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color][/quote] Aapka tohfaa kiyaa jatta hai ,...
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Post by ramishjaan on May 30, 2008 0:11:10 GMT 5
[color=Green ]AOA kanwal jee zahe naseeb aj aik bohat mudat ke bad ap se bazm ki raho me mulaqat hoi pehle ap ko paksitan se wapsi mubarik ho sahbe kitab ho gai MASHALLA is ke liye bhi muabrik bad ka tohfa qabol ki jiye ghazal ap ko pasand aei mere liye ezaaz he kion ke jis uamdagi se ap mere klam ko parhti aur smajhti hain esa shaz shaz hi hota he bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color][/quote] Aapka tohfaa kiyaa jatta hai ,... [/quote] AOA kanwal jee huamra tohfa kiya kiyaa jata he ?
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Post by neha on Jul 21, 2008 22:11:20 GMT 5
Salam. Sehar ke lout ane me abhi kuch deer baqi he Sitara akhr e shab ka chamakta he nigaho,n me
Hamesha ki tarha ye ghazal bhi bht zabardast hai apki .daad hazir-e- khidmat hai.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 24, 2008 23:55:11 GMT 5
AOA neha jee bohat bohat shurkiya is purkhlos dad ke lyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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