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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 30, 2012 0:08:55 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhh Bohat khoob Zubair Ghjazal mukamal ho gai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 27, 2012 22:07:07 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Zubair sahib bara wazeh faraq
is ghazal kay akhri donooN ash,aar par tawaju ki zaroorat hay
gareeb ki madad aaj kar key mein aaya sukoon sey badhe ab mein soney lagaa hun
zubair likh raha hun mein barson sey lekin kalaam haal hi sey sunaaney laga hun
in par ghaur farma laiN to ghazal mukamal ho ja,ay gi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 25, 2012 2:02:37 GMT 5
misra tarha " jhonka hawaa ka tha idhar aaya udhar gaya"
dil ko dukha key bewafaa jaane kidhar gaya itna toota ye dil key chune sey bikhar gaya
wo shaks jo nashe mein aisa kaam kar gaya guzri tamam umr na uska asar gaya
rishton ka jo lehaaz bhi na rakh saka kabhi aakhir hamari woh nazar sey hi utar gaya
din raat dhut sharaab ki halat mein gum raha jhonka hawaa ka tha idhar aaya udhar gaya
jisko lagi ye lat kahan wo phir sudhar gaya kuch kehtey hain guzar gaya kuch kehtey mar gaya
kal tak zubair mein jinka saya ban key saath that anjaan sa wo aaj baazu sey guzar gaya
please tell me whether this gazal is in perfect metre (baher/Takhti Etc. ) Thanks for your valuable comments and guidance... Razi bhai nay sahi kaha . maiN dilshikni kay khauf say kuch keh na ska dil ko dukha key bewafaa jaane kidhar gaya wo shaks jo nashe mein aisa kaam kar gaya guzri tamam umr na uska asar gaya rishton ka jo lehaaz bhi na rakh saka kabhi din raat dhut sharaab ki halat mein gum raha yeh misray wazan maiN haiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 25, 2012 1:57:58 GMT 5
Razi bhai n, Atif Mirza sahib isi page kay ooper ja kar view maiN ja kar encoding ko unicode par click karaiN ghazal parhna mumkin ho ga. pata nahi kia mas,ala hay har dafa encoding karna parti hay
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 25, 2012 1:55:36 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal share ki Razi bhai. kiA dR Sahiba forum par nahi aiN abhi?
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 18, 2012 22:33:17 GMT 5
Achi koshish Zuber abhi mazeed mehnat aur ghaur ki zaroorat hay
Mazeed zra fursat say baat ho gi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 5, 2012 21:43:15 GMT 5
Dr Najma Shaheen sahiba ka khoobsoorat ghazal aur Tasweer share ki aap nay Shukria Razi bhai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2012 22:01:29 GMT 5
WAhhhhhhhhhh
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2012 22:01:10 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal Sidiqi sahib
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Project
May 25, 2012 21:59:48 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2012 21:59:48 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat aur aham kaam Waqaar sahib
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 22, 2012 22:09:59 GMT 5
Hamara bhi Salam Razi bhai.... Sukhanwer ko kesey bhoool saktey hain..... Saeed Ahaaaaaaa Saeed sahib bhi tashreef lay a,ay Hazoor kia haal chaal haiN?
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 21, 2012 21:40:11 GMT 5
Uzair miaN yeh bara aham mazmooN hay. Bohat shukria yhaaN par bhi paste kar dia
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 21, 2012 0:24:40 GMT 5
Achi baat hay maiN bhi kuch dostooN ka klaam paste karta hooN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 21, 2012 0:20:24 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ghazal
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 21, 2012 0:19:24 GMT 5
Shukria Razi bhai
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