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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 5, 2008 1:52:16 GMT 5
is bazm kay aik mu,azaz member jnab Mubashar Saeed sahib nay mujhay aik ghazal irsaal ahbaab say share karta hooN apni ra,ay mehfooz rakhtay huay agli nashist maiN
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 2:08:12 GMT 5
yeh kaysa ishq hay jo aankh tak nahi aata yeh kaysi aag hy jo roshni sy aari hy
mubashir sahab aap ki ghazal boht pasand aai daad qabool kijiay aur isi tara apni ghazlon sy is bazm ko sajatay rahiay thanx razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 6, 2008 11:58:08 GMT 5
Mohtram razi shab umeed karta hon ap theek thak hon gain main theek thak hon uar studies mein kafi sara time ghuzarta hy,
ghazal psand karny ka shukriya jo share ap ko zeyada pasand aaya hy, wohi share mujhy bhi bohot psand hy,
again thnaks razi shab for appreciation Mubashir Saeed france
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 6, 2008 12:42:53 GMT 5
Aray Wah Mubashar BHai Kia umda ghazal irshad ki hai aap nay. Meri jaanib say daad hazir hai.
Rafi Bhai aap kay shukriya keh aap nay itni achi ghazal share ki.
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 6, 2008 18:13:42 GMT 5
aoa sir jee thanks for appreciation it makes me happy and give me a sort of boost up. take care and remember me in urs prayerz Mubashir Saeed France
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 6, 2008 23:25:59 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ghazal Mubashar Saeed sahib
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Post by nadeem on Apr 6, 2008 23:57:05 GMT 5
jamaal e yaar naen khud mast kar diya phir bhi meray hawaas pay ab tak sahoor tari hai
piyaray saeed salam mujhay andaza nahen tha kay aap is qadar achay ashaar kehtay ho is sher naen mujhay nihaal kar diya waaaaaaaaaaaaah is waqt pakistan maen raat kay 12 bajay haen yehi wo waqt hai jahan maen apni masti maen kho jata hoon aisay lamhay aisa sher waaaaaaaaaah aik sher aap ki nazr
abhi to khaal udhaRni hai is tamashay maen abhi dhamaal maen jogi naen saans hara hai
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
bahut dil kar raha hai is sher par baat karon lekin likhna bahut museebat hai aur wo bhi keybord kay zareeaey bahut taza sher hai yaaaaaaaaaaaar
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 7, 2008 3:31:53 GMT 5
aoa nadeem shab i am very very thankful to you for urs nice comments on my ghazal.weye main koye itna accha poet nehin hoon, ap ki mohabt hy ap ny pasand farmaya, Sir jee ap ny khuch zeyada tareef kar di hay main es kay qabil nehin nehin hoon, Sir ap ki mehrbani aur mohabat hy kay ap ny meyre hosla brahya hay, warana mein ksi qabil? main hameesha ap ki mohabat ka talabgar rahoon ga aik bar pher ghazal psand karny ka shukriya, Nadeem bahi ap ny jo share share keya hay meyre sath us ka bhi jawab nehin, kamal share hy, thanks always remember me in urs prayers ap ka Mubashir
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Post by saeed on Apr 7, 2008 7:42:33 GMT 5
Mubasher sb, Achhi kavis hai. Dad!
saeed
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 7, 2008 18:29:45 GMT 5
SAEED SHAB THANKS FOR APPRECIATION BUT IF U GIVE URS COMMENTS IN DETAIL , IT WILL BE A MATTER OF PLEASURE FOR ME
THANKS Mubashir Saeed
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Post by saeed on Apr 8, 2008 18:46:32 GMT 5
SAEED SHAB THANKS FOR APPRECIATION BUT IF U GIVE URS COMMENTS IN DETAIL , IT WILL BE A MATTER OF PLEASURE FOR ME THANKS Mubashir Saeed Mubashir saeed saheb, Buhut achi aur rawan gazal hai. mujhey ye buhut acha laga.... ye kesa ishq hai jo aankh tak nahen aata ye kesi aag hai jo roshni se aari hai. buhut khub. saeed
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