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Post by maya on Nov 27, 2007 20:46:37 GMT 5
"Talabb kay Zarray"
Meri Matti main Khaliq nay apni talabb kay zarray rakh choray hain yea zarray jab chamkain gay tu kaali andhi raatoun main bhe Ess khaak aur raakh kay dhaier sy main Uskay naam kay moti chun loun gy...
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 27, 2007 22:37:52 GMT 5
wah
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Post by maya on Nov 29, 2007 12:58:05 GMT 5
Rafi Tabssum sahib mujay laga jab say Nasar aur Nazam pay beahs chali sab baaray tabsra krnay main Muhtaat ho gay hain.hay na ? :)shukria waslam Fatimah
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Post by maya on Nov 29, 2007 13:04:33 GMT 5
bahut khoob Fatimah jee.accha laga pad kar.khush rahen. jee didi apka bohat shukria waslam fatimah
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Post by kanwal on Dec 2, 2007 1:48:37 GMT 5
"Talabb kay Zarray" Meri Matti main Khaliq nay apni talabb kay zarray rakh choray hain yea zarray jab chamkain gay tu kaali andhi raatoun main bhe Ess khaak aur raakh kay dhaier sy main Uskay naam kay moti chun loun gy... fatimah Zaur e Qalm aur ziyaada ,.... daad e guL aapke Qalm ke nagar ,...
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Post by maya on Dec 11, 2007 13:29:59 GMT 5
Kanwal Aapa apka bohat shukria waslam Fatimah
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 23, 2007 18:50:14 GMT 5
fatimah aap k haan khyaal ki parwaz bohat buland hay meri khahish hy k aap in buland khyaalat ko ahang bhi dain is tara in nazmon ki ehmiat aur zyaada ho jaay gi main yeh bhi jaanta hoon k is main aap ko zyaada mushkil bhi paysh na aay gi thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 18:17:24 GMT 5
Wah
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Post by naheedv on May 10, 2008 4:08:07 GMT 5
"Talabb kay Zarray" Meri Matti main Khaliq nay apni talabb kay zarray rakh choray hain yea zarray jab chamkain gay tu kaali andhi raatoun main bhe Ess khaak aur raakh kay dhaier sy main Uskay naam kay moti chun loun gy... fatimah Fatimah khoobsoorat khyaal hai. agar ho ho sake tau isey kuch finishing touch dene kee zaroorat hai, aur aap se behtar ye kaam aur kon kar saktaa hai. shukriya Naheed
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 1:28:57 GMT 5
Salam Maya ,...
Kaafi arse se Aap ghaib ho Aap,...
Aur koi nayee takhleeQ bhi nigaah se nahiN guzri ,...
Jaldi jaldi aati raha kijye ,...
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Post by meena on Aug 12, 2008 17:24:47 GMT 5
bohut piyari nazm.........!
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Post by maya on Oct 5, 2008 20:16:40 GMT 5
Salam
bohat arsay bad frum pay kuch waqt guzara hay. Atif sahab,Naheed Sahaba aur Meena jee apki hosla afzai Aur Razi sahab apki rah numi ka azhad shukria.... Kanwal Aap! ap nay yaad kea.acha lagta hay jab koi hmraray na honay ki kami ko mahsoos kary aur uska ezhar be karay. Apka bhat shukria Aapa.kuch masrofiat aur kuch ajeeb si kafiat kay sabab raabtay main na rah saki.Ab kosish hay kay phir sy aap sab sy rabtay main rahoun.
waslam Fatimah
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 6, 2008 21:06:02 GMT 5
bahut khoobs
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maya
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Post by maya on Oct 8, 2008 12:50:14 GMT 5
pasandedgy kay ezhar per apka bohat shukria Najma Sahiba
waslam Fatima
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Post by zaki on Oct 31, 2008 10:58:07 GMT 5
Mein bhi bas yahi kahon ga Wah!......
Sada khush raheay......
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