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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 16:17:43 GMT 5
eid meelad un nabi k mubarak moqay par sukhanwar forum main aik naatia mushaaira munaqad kia jaa raha hy aap sab apni apni naatain is thread main paste karain aur isi thread main un naaton par daad dee jaay gee thanx razi-ud-din razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 22, 2008 0:25:35 GMT 5
karam ki daulat teray khazeenay sy maangta hoon bohat saleeqay say aur qareenay say maangta hoon
dua say pehlay main is pay likhta hoon naam e ahmad laga k phir haath apnay seenay say maangta hoon
woh aik lamha jo aap k dar pay main guzaaroon woh aik lamha kai maheenay say maangta hoon
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Post by kanwal on Mar 22, 2008 0:49:52 GMT 5
karam ki daulat teray khazeenay sy maangta hoon bohat saleeqay say aur qareenay say maangta hoon dua say pehlay main is pay likhta hoon naam e ahmad laga k phir haath apnay seenay say maangta hoon woh aik lamha jo aap k dar pay main guzaaroon woh aik lamha kai maheenay say maangta hoon Umdaaa ,.... Bohat hi khubsoorat ,.... Daad ke saare gulshan iss ke naaM ,...
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Post by kanwal on Mar 22, 2008 0:55:01 GMT 5
aqeedat ke chand adnaa se phool baname rasole kareem De izn e ziyaarat madeena mujhe tu DaroodoN ka de de nageena mujhe tu
Mire kaam saare sanwar jaayeiN jis se E maalik! De aisa qareena mujhe tu
Mujhe zindagi ke bhanwar se nikaale Koi de de aisa safeena mujhe tu
JahaN dil ka roshan rahe jis se har dam Wo de de munawar khazeena mujhe tu
Ibaadat main kaise karooN apne rab ki Sikhaa de habeeb e sakeena SW mujhe tu
Mile tere gulshan se ranaayee e diL Sikhaa de koi to qareena mujhe tu
Jhalak dekh paaye kaNwal teri jis se Ataa kar wo chashma e beena mujhe tu
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Post by kanwal on Mar 22, 2008 1:01:33 GMT 5
AIk aur adnaa si kavish iss mushaere ke naaM ,... mo´atar mo´atar yeh saari fizaa hai LaboN par Mohammad (SW) ka naam aa gayaa hai
NahiN koi insaan jahaN meiN mukamal Hai kaamil agar to mira mustafaa (sw) hai
Qareena sikhaaya hai jeene ka humko Ke jo kaam achcha hai uski jazaa hai
Kare jo bhi nafrat wo insaaN nahiN hai Jo jeete diloN ko wo mard e khudaa hai
Har insaaN ko laazim hai ikhlaaQ o seerat Jo aari hai in se wo bas khaak paa hai
HooN sar ba sajood ab tere saamne meiN Mujhe bakhsh de, jo bhi meri khataa hai
Kanwal rah meiN garcha dushwariya haiN Tu rakh hausla sang tere khudaa hai
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 22, 2008 1:07:29 GMT 5
aqeedat ke chand adnaa se phool baname rasole kareem De izn e ziyaarat madeena mujhe tu DaroodoN ka de de nageena mujhe tu
Mire kaam saare sanwar jaayeiN jis se E maalik! De aisa qareena mujhe tu
Mujhe zindagi ke bhanwar se nikaale Koi de de aisa safeena mujhe tu
JahaN dil ka roshan rahe jis se har dam Wo de de munawar khazeena mujhe tu
Ibaadat main kaise karooN apne rab ki Sikhaa de habeeb e sakeena SW mujhe tu
Mile tere gulshan se ranaayee e diL Sikhaa de koi to qareena mujhe tu
Jhalak dekh paaye kaNwal teri jis se Ataa kar wo chashma e beena mujhe tu
kanwal naat bohat umda hay aur naat sab ki umdaa hi hoti hay hum naat main kabhi yeh nahi keh saktay k yeh theekk nahi hay is main asal baat aap ki aqeedat hoti hy mujhy is naat main do maqamaat par aytraaz hay aik to is ki wazaahat kijiay k habeeb e sakeena sy aap ki kia muraad hay mera khyaal hy yeh yahan munaasib nahi doosra aap nay aakhri shair main lafz chashmaa e beena istamaal kia asal lafz chashm e beena hay is tara yeh shair maanwi lihaaz sy ghalat hoo gia aur agar hum chashm e beena ikhain gy to misra behr sy kharij ho jaay ga thanx razi
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Post by kanwal on Mar 22, 2008 2:47:45 GMT 5
kanwal naat bohat umda hay aur naat sab ki umdaa hi hoti hay hum naat main kabhi yeh nahi keh saktay k yeh theekk nahi hay is main asal baat aap ki aqeedat hoti hy mujhy is naat main do maqamaat par aytraaz hay Salam Razi jee ,...
Bohat khushi hui yeh dekh kar ke aap ne do naqaat ki taraf tawjaH dilaayee,....
Be shaQ hum naye likhne waale issi taraH se seekh sakte haiN,...
Ab aati hooN aapke do naqaat ki taraf;.....
Hazrat sakeena Hazrat imam hussain ki beti thiN,....
Hazrat Sakeena binat ul hussain R,....
To main sher meiN keh rahi hooN ke:
Ibaadat main kaise karooN apne rab ki Sikhaa de habeeb e sakeena SW mujhe tu
to aap khud hi dekh lijiye ke habeeb e Sakeena kaun haiN
doosra nuqte meiN talafuZ ki ghalti ho gayee,...
Urdu itni achhi nahiN aati na iss liye ,.....
To issko agar yuN keh leiN to kaisa rahe ga ke:
Jhalak dekh paaye kaNwal teri jis se Ataa kar de wo chashme beena mujhe tu
Aap bataa deiN to main Urdu meiN bhi theek kar looNgi ,...
Agar aap yuNhi meri tawjaH meri khaamiyoN pe dilaate rahe
Yeh manzil kathin sahi par asaaN ho jaaye gi ,....
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 22, 2008 2:58:23 GMT 5
Hoi qayem imanat our sadaqat apke sadqe Mohabat he meri har dam salamat apke sadqe Ye sanso ki rawani dil ki dharkan ap ki bakshish Mere khone rage jaa ki hararat ap ke sadqe Mere aqa mujhe ye fakhr he medan e mahshar me Karon ga chera e raab ki zeyarat ap ke sadqe Museebat me bohat akseer un ka ism e aazam he Isi bayes nahi khof e qeyamat ap ke sadqe Jamal e do jahaa_n bhi ap ki kherat he aqa Har ik mosam ki nikhat me halawat ap ke sadqe Hoi un ke wasele se ye meri zindagi , meri Mre imaan ki mujh se rafaqat ap ke sadqe Yaqenan he gi aye ramish drone arsaye mahshar Gonah garo pa yazdaa –n ki inayat ap ke sadqe
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Post by phototech81 on Mar 25, 2008 12:28:04 GMT 5
karam ki daulat teray khazeenay sy maangta hoon bohat saleeqay say aur qareenay say maangta hoon dua say pehlay main is pay likhta hoon naam e ahmad laga k phir haath apnay seenay say maangta hoon woh aik lamha jo aap k dar pay main guzaaroon woh aik lamha kai maheenay say maangta hoon boaht khub jnab razi sahab
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 20, 2008 21:20:43 GMT 5
karam ki daulat teray khazeenay sy maangta hoon bohat saleeqay say aur qareenay say maangta hoon dua say pehlay main is pay likhta hoon naam e ahmad laga k phir haath apnay seenay say maangta hoon woh aik lamha jo aap k dar pay main guzaaroon woh aik lamha kai maheenay say maangta hoon Wah Razi Bhai!!!!
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