zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by zaamin on Nov 8, 2007 0:46:25 GMT 5
Raat need men meri baith kar Sapna ek bunti rahii Chaandani ke dhaagon par Khushboo ke phool Taank Hawaaon ki raagini ke sur Gungunati dhaariyon men baandhti; Aur phir yeh rangiiN chaadar Ujle khwaab ki Sabz waadiyon men phahraati Roshnii ke raahon men phail gayii- Koii to chalega is par bhii Ta’abiir ka diya lekar zaamin
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 8, 2007 1:05:10 GMT 5
Wahhhhhh
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Post by brijinder on Nov 8, 2007 6:59:16 GMT 5
Zamin bhai,I have read this beautiful nazm elsewhere too and appreciated as well.Again lots of congrats. Regards brijinder
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Post by phototech81 on Nov 8, 2007 10:54:48 GMT 5
nice nazam bohat khub
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 23:45:38 GMT 5
zamin bhai sab sy pehlay to aap ko sukhanwar main wapsi par khush aamdeed kehta hoon aap ki nazm main jo khoobsoorat khyaalat hainjo nafasat hy soch kius ny bohat lutf dia thanx razi
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zaamin
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Posts: 69
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Post by zaamin on Nov 16, 2007 4:19:51 GMT 5
shkriya,tabasum saahib zaamin
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Post by kanwal on Dec 2, 2007 1:56:27 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Zamin jee ,... Daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 30, 2008 0:21:39 GMT 5
shukriya,rafi saahib zaamin
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 18:02:17 GMT 5
Good Nasr
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:30:17 GMT 5
Raat need men meri baith kar Sapna ek bunti rahii Chaandani ke dhaagon par Khushboo ke phool Taank Hawaaon ki raagini ke sur Gungunati dhaariyon men baandhti; Aur phir yeh rangiiN chaadar Ujle khwaab ki Sabz waadiyon men phahraati Roshnii ke raahon men phail gayii- Koii to chalega is par bhii Ta’abiir ka diya lekar zaamin waah ! buhat khoob.
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