zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 9, 2008 12:07:31 GMT 5
Sukhanwar logon ki khidmat mein ek adna si tuk bandi.....
Ashk bhejun ya iztarab likhuN Dukh ginaaoon ke apney khawab likhuN
Hijr ki, hasratown ki baat karuN Dil pe tutey heiN jo azab likhuN
Kat gaey jo wafa ki raahoN mein un shab-o roz ka hisab likhuN
Kaisey batlaaoon qurbatown ke azab kaisey meiN wajh-e ijtenab likhun
adab
Qamar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 9, 2008 22:35:07 GMT 5
wahh Qamar sahib khoobsoorat nazm
ik dard ki buniad haiN qurbat ki saa,ataiN
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 14, 2008 10:54:17 GMT 5
wahh Qamar sahib khoobsoorat nazm ik dard ki buniad haiN qurbat ki saa,ataiN Tabasum Saheb Bey had shukria daad ka aur is khoobsoorat misra ata kerney ka Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 14, 2008 10:58:24 GMT 5
Qamar sahab matle se le kar maqte tak har ashaar bahut hi khaas laga.kaash aap kuch ashaar aur keh dete issi rang mein to kya hi kehne the.bahut khoob.dheron daad haazir hain aap ki ghazal par.khush raheN. Sunita Ji Aur sher hein tow lekin un ka rang in ashaar ke sath jachta naheen. ye ashaar ek kha skafiat mein kahey gaey they us ke baad wo masti jati rahi aur ye rang lot ker naheen aaya. Pesh kiye deta hun wo bhi. in 4 ashaar ke baad ek 5th bhi hey jo yun hey: Kis ke chehrey ko bey naqab karun nam kis ke mein intesab likhun aur baqi ashaar ye hein: teri nazrown ko mein sharab likhun tere chehrey ko mah tab likhun teri zulfoN ke pech o tab likhun apni saanson ke iztarab likhun teri palkown ki roshnaai sey teri aankhon pe ik kitab likhun koi naama kaheeN sey aaey tow phir mein rangeen sa jawab likhuN kitni jildown pe ho wo muheet ger mein chota sa aek baab likhun keh bhi duN ger sarab ko pani kaisey mein khar ko gulab likhun aap khud faisla ker li jiye Adab Qamar
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