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Post by kanwal on Feb 14, 2008 17:09:30 GMT 5
yeh jo zindagi ki kitab he yeh kitab bhi keya kitab he kahin ik haseen sa khaab he kahin jan lewa azab he zindagi ki is kitab me aik bab mohabat ka milta he jis ka noor zindagi ki sari kitab ko dilkash our monawar kar ke ba maqsaed kar deta he.
mohabat kai roop me milti,....... he our har roop me is ki dilkashi munfraid andaz liye insan ki hayat ko tameer karti chali ja ti he..
kaha jata he ke mohabat andhi he magar is ke bawajud is ki ankheeN bohat khobsorat hain,.... yeh kisi din ki mohtaj nahi he yeh kis bhi lamha kisi bhi pal kahin bhi kisi se bhi achanik hi ho jati he ..........
magar dastor e duniya he ke us ne har tehwar ko aik din de kar mehdod kar liya he lehaza dastore duniya nibhate howe yeh thred shoro kar rahi hon ap se guzarish he ke agar mohabt andhi he to aye apne apne ehsasat ko apni tehreeart me piro kar mohabt ki khusboo se mehka kar aik aik chargh is ki rah me bhi rakh de............
is thred ki ibtada par ramish jee ka yeh sheer laga rahi hon jis me mohabt ke sumandar ko badi hi khobsorti se kozee me band kiya geya he[/b]
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 2:58:20 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee bohat umda bohat khobsorat our mohabato se labreez thred shoro karne par mubarik bad qabol ki jiye ..........
sach kaha ap ne ke mohabat aik esa jazba he jo sirf attaye KHUDAWANDI he our jis dil par yeh atta ho jaye mere nazdeek na sirf wo dil balke us dil ka malik bhi sanwar jata he ...... ap ke hukm ki tameel me aik ghazal our aik nazm pesh karo N ga is thred me us se pehle ap ke liye yeh pholo ka tohfa waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 3:03:38 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 3:07:44 GMT 5
[ IMG]http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/ramishjaan/6ypsq44.gif [/IMG] [/center] mere ehsas me khusboo si rachi he ramish koi mehka he taswar me gulabo jesa mohabat khaab he our khaab ke andar hi rehna he hume is qariya e mahtaab ke andar hi rehna he rat parhta hon taswar ko ghazal ki soorat din ko dhondo main koi chehra kitabo jesa [img src="http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/ramishjaan/917192fhitfpxzms.gif[ /IMG] i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/ramishjaan/917192fhitfpxzms.gif"]
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 3:21:19 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 3:25:16 GMT 5
mohabat khwab he our khwab ke andar hi rehna he hame is qareya mahtab ke andar hi rehna he
nahi jana he ,hum ne dastan e ishq se bahir mohabat ke sunehri baab ke andar hi rehna he
me tera aks hon me tujh se bahir ja nahi sakta ke khushbo ko gul e shadab ke andar hi rehna he
adhori se khwahish ho jise takmel se pehle bahar sorat dil e be tab ke andar hi rehna he
me mouj e husn hota to kinaro ki taraf jata ke mouje ishq ne girdab ke adnar hi rehna he
nikal kar dekhna keya he kinaro ki taraf hum ne musalsal deeda e aab ke andar hi rehna he
nikal kar ankh se me to fana ho jao ga ramish mujhe is qareya nayab ke andar hi rehna he
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2008 3:40:20 GMT 5
MUJHE TUM SE MOHABAT HE
Mujhe tum se mohabat he Mohabat bhi kuch esi jis tareh waqt e nizaa Koi faqat zindagi ko yad karta he Mra dil bhi yahan tanhaion ko bas Kheyalo se tre abad krta he Bohat beedad karta he Mujhe tum se mohabat he Mohabt bhi kuch esi Jo bhanwar me karb o gham ke Ik sahara he Tumhara gham bhi mujh ko Har khushi se barh kar peyara he Meri teera shabi me Ik stara he Istaara he Mujhe tum se mohabat he Mohabt bhi kuch esi Jis tareh jalte howe sehra me ik peyase ko Aab e sheereo yakh ki khazane ki tamana ho Jise tum dil me rakhte ho Use kionkar zamane ki tamana ho Mujhe tum se mohabat he Mohabat bhi kuch esi Jo kabhi misalo me nahi atti Kheyalo me nahi atti Jawabo me nahi atti Sawalo me nahi atti Ke jazbo ki yeh shidat Lafz o maani ke hawalo me nahi atti Mujhe tum se mohabat he Kuch esi mohabat he
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Post by kanwal on Feb 15, 2008 4:54:40 GMT 5
Wah ramish jee ,... Aap ne khoob sajaa diya iss thread ko ,... isse kehte haiN thread ka haQ adaa karne ,... baaqi kahaN haiN sab loG ,...
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Post by kanwal on Feb 15, 2008 5:12:45 GMT 5
main post to bohat kuch karna chahti thi par waqt na milla to socha filhaal yehi share kar dooN ,.... baaqi baad meiN ,....Mohabbat
Mohabbat ki manzil aksar dosti ki hadood se aage hi milti hai. yeh wo ehsaas hai jo har talooq, har rishte ki bunyaad hai, yani gar mohabbat na hoti to koi ehsaas koi rishta na hota aur na hi dunya ki dilkashi aankh ko lubhaati. Yeh woh haseeN jazba o ehsaas hai jo jis ke dil meiN ghar kar jaaye to wahaN sirf aur sirf Khuda ka basera ho jaata hai. ... ... ... ...
KyuNke mehboob hi wo seerhi hai jo insaaN ko khuda talak pohnchaati hai. aur mehboob se mohabbat karna hi khuda ke hone ka saboot hai. Aur Khuda ka basera ,... ... ... ...
Khuda ka basera sirf isi dil meiN hua karta hai jis dil ki mitti narm aur zar khaiz ho jaaye. Itni naram ke wahaN par sirf aur sirf mohabbat ke gulaab hi khul sakeiN. ... ... ... ...
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 18, 2008 12:44:43 GMT 5
Kia hamiaN kissi say muhabbat karnay ka liay kissi khaas din ki zarrorat hai? Kia hamari muhabbat kissi khaas waqt ki mohtaaj hai?
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simran
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Post by simran on Feb 18, 2008 18:09:48 GMT 5
bahut achhi post hai, Kanwal aur Ramish ji ne bahut mehnat ki hai.Duniya ne har baat ke liye ek din mukarar kiya hai tabhi to sab tarah ke tehwaar bhi bane hue hain.western world mein ek din maa aur ek din abbu ka bhi hai, taaki uss din aap apne maa baap ka shukariya adaa kar sako.iss liye agar muhabbat ka ek din bana diya gaya hai ki uss din aap apni muhabbat ko yeh bataa sako ki aap ki zindagi mein uss ki kya ehmiiyat hai to koii bura bhi nahin hai. mere miyaan ka bhi yeh kehna hai ki bahut se muhabbat karne vaale muhabbat to karte hain lekin roz maraa ki zindagi mein itne masroof rehte hain ki unhe ehsaas hi nahin rehta ki apni muhabbat ko bata sakeN ki unke dil meiN unki muhabbat ki kya jagah hain so yeh din unn bhuule hue insaano ko yaad dilaane ke liye hain.
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Shaheen
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Post by Shaheen on Feb 18, 2008 20:28:19 GMT 5
Woh kia hai k mujhay kanwal & raamish ji ki mehnat aur simran ji ke remarks pasand aaye. MaiN ittifaaq karta hooN iss baat par k jo bhi din khushiaN manane ko mile usse zaya nahiN karna chahieaye. Woh chahay Mother day ho, ya father day ya valitine day ya koi bhi day. Atif Sahib maazrat kay saath k chalo issi bahanay hum apnoN ko yaad karnay kay liaye waqt to nikaal lete haiN warna tau hamiN eid ya diwali per bhi waqt nahiN hota k apnoN ko mil sakaiN. Mera khayaal hai k aksar log mujh say ittefaaq karaiN gay.
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Post by kanwal on Feb 19, 2008 2:36:05 GMT 5
wow kanwal kya fantastic thread banaaya hai aur uss par Ramish ji ki replies, mazaa aa gaya pad kar.bahut hi khoob.dheron daad. Thank you didi ,....
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Post by kanwal on Feb 19, 2008 2:50:57 GMT 5
Kia hamiaN kissi say muhabbat karnay ka liay kissi khaas din ki zarrorat hai? Kia hamari muhabbat kissi khaas waqt ki mohtaaj hai? yeh jo zindagi ki kitab he yeh kitab bhi keya kitab he kahin ik haseen sa khaab he kahin jan lewa azab he Mohtaram Atif jee ,... Aap agar post parh ke reply kiya kareiN to aapko ilam ho jaaya kare ga ke huM ne bhi kuch aisa hi likha tha ke: magar dastor e duniya he ke us ne har tehwar ko aik din de kar mehdod kar liya he lehaza dastore duniya nibhate howe yeh thred shoro kar rahi hon [/b] Post barhaana hi maqsad nahiN hua karta post ko samjh ke reply kareiN to alaG mazaa milta hai ,.... Hai na ,...
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Post by kanwal on Feb 19, 2008 2:54:21 GMT 5
bahut achhi post hai, Kanwal aur Ramish ji ne bahut mehnat ki hai.Duniya ne har baat ke liye ek din mukarar kiya hai tabhi to sab tarah ke tehwaar bhi bane hue hain.western world mein ek din maa aur ek din abbu ka bhi hai, taaki uss din aap apne maa baap ka shukariya adaa kar sako.iss liye agar muhabbat ka ek din bana diya gaya hai ki uss din aap apni muhabbat ko yeh bataa sako ki aap ki zindagi mein uss ki kya ehmiiyat hai to koii bura bhi nahin hai. mere miyaan ka bhi yeh kehna hai ki bahut se muhabbat karne vaale muhabbat to karte hain lekin roz maraa ki zindagi mein itne masroof rehte hain ki unhe ehsaas hi nahin rehta ki apni muhabbat ko bata sakeN ki unke dil meiN unki muhabbat ki kya jagah hain so yeh din unn bhuule hue insaano ko yaad dilaane ke liye hain. Bohat khoob kehti haiN aap aur aapke miyaN bhi ,.... Dua hai dono jeete rahiye ,....
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