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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 8, 2008 1:09:10 GMT 5
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 11, 2008 20:15:24 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib! BaRi jandaar ghazal hai. Daad hazir, Gar qabool aftad zahay izz-o-sharaf!
Rafi Sahib! Aik choti si observation hai, agar bura na manaiN tau arz karooN. Woh yeh keh akhiri dau ashaar kay qafiay lafz "NAH" haiN, arz yeh hai keh "nah" aur "keh" ki "hay" asl maiN "haa-e-makhfi" hoti hay aur taqtee maiN nahiN aati aur meray Ustaad-e-Muhtaram Allama Anees Lakhnavi kay mutabiq agar "nah" aur "keh" she'r maiN "kub" kay wazan per aa jaaieN tau she'r ki taqtee maiN aik rukn kum ho jataa hai.
Meray naqis ilm kay mutabiq maiN nay yahaN apna mutmaa-e-nazar bayan kar diya hai, shayad aap mujh say ittefaaq na karaiN. Albatta wazahat ki qawi umeed hai.
Yaqeen hai keh aap iss ka jawab zaroor marhamat farmaaieN gay.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 11, 2008 22:38:02 GMT 5
Bohat shukria Atif Mirza sahib maiN aap kay tajziay say muttefiq hooN yeh noon alif naa aur noon hey nah wala mu,amela kafi arsa zair e behs raha hay ab to Dr Baidil Haideri sahib marhoom jaisay ustaadooN kay shagird bhi is tarah kay mu,amelaat par gunjaish lainay lagay haiN asooli taur par aap ka mu,aqif bilkul sahi hay aur maiN aap say muttefiq hooN
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 12:52:55 GMT 5
Inhi qawaneen ki paasdaari na kar kay tau logoN nay shaeri ko kharab kia hai
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:36:32 GMT 5
Rafi saheb Nayab gazal Sukoon ka ek bhi lamha............!! Bahut sunder ye to bhala ho urdu ka jo main pad pati hoon, varna jane kya khone ke chances rahte.
Kya aisa ho sakta hai kahin hum hindi se Urdu mein transcript kar paayen Devi Nangrani
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 15, 2008 1:05:45 GMT 5
Shukria Devi ji
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 24, 2008 19:01:21 GMT 5
kia he khoobsorat aur gungunaati hoe zameen hay dad qabool kejeay bara kutf aya mujhy
aqeel
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jul 24, 2008 19:55:59 GMT 5
aoa rafi sahib mza aa gya hy si rjee wah wah wah par atif sahib waly bat ki final result kiya nekala hy ap ny ye ku,jaes li ja sakty hy ya nhin jo ap ny lii hy waiitnf or urs reply
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 25, 2008 22:31:50 GMT 5
kia he khoobsorat aur gungunaati hoe zameen hay dad qabool kejeay bara kutf aya mujhy Shukria Aqeel Malik sahib aqeel
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 25, 2008 22:39:41 GMT 5
aoa rafi sahib mza aa gya hy si rjee wah wah wah par atif sahib waly bat ki final result kiya nekala hy ap ny ye ku,jaes li ja sakty hy ya nhin jo ap ny lii hy waiitnf or urs reply Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka shukria Mubashar Saeed sashib main Atif Mirza sahib kay nuqtay say 100 feesad ittefaaq karta hooN magar aaj kal is ki gunjaish bhi li ja rahi hay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 28, 2008 1:06:10 GMT 5
rafi bhaai aap ki ghazal main ny boht muddat baad parhi mujhy lagta hy yeh main ny parhi to shaid pehlay bhi thee magar daad ab day raha hoon thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 28, 2008 2:16:10 GMT 5
Shukria Razi bhai
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Post by shahkaar on Aug 10, 2008 13:54:19 GMT 5
Rafi tabassum saheb
haqeeqtan
mein to bholay bhatkay aya tha
lekin ghazal parh kar sakin ho gaya,buhut umdah khubsoorat dilkash ghazal
daad qubool kejay , umdah kalam hay
shahkaar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 10, 2008 21:51:00 GMT 5
Rafi tabassum saheb haqeeqtan mein to bholay bhatkay aya tha lekin ghazal parh kar sakin ho gaya,buhut umdah khubsoorat dilkash ghazal daad qubool kejay , umdah kalam hay shahkaar Shukria Shahkaar g
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Post by zaki on Sept 8, 2008 10:25:23 GMT 5
Bahut Khoobsoart ghazal share ki hai app ne.... Bahtu sari daad qabool farmaeay....
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