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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 5, 2007 23:31:06 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Chand roz pehlay hi yeh ghazal hui thee magar Matla ka intezaar karta raha isay meri khami samjh laiN ya qafia radeef ki tangi keh abhi tak matla nahi keh saka so bghair matlay kay yeh ghazal qabool farmaiyay kautahi fan ka aiteraaf karta hooN Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 5, 2007 23:44:38 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Chand roz pehlay hi yeh ghazal hui thee magar Matla ka intezaar karta raha isay meri khami samjh laiN ya qafia radeef ki tangi keh abhi tak matla nahi keh saka so bghair matlay kay yeh ghazal qabool farmaiyay kautahi fan ka aiteraaf karta hooN
Ghazal
Saltanat Khaab ki sjatay kia neend apni grift maiN kb thee
ham bhi chu laitay aasmaanooN ko maslehat hi sarisht maiN kab thee
kia huwa jo samar nahi pauhncha beej paashi hi kisht maiN kab thee
daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab thee
jis peh mat,oon aaj thehra hooN baat meri nawisht maiN kab thee
hay Tabasum deewaar girnay ko yeh kaji pehli khisht maiN kab thee
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Post by khalid on Jul 6, 2007 5:44:52 GMT 5
ham bhi chu laitay aasmaanooN ko maslehat hi sarisht maiN kab thee
daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab theebohot khoob!
rafi sb daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 6, 2007 8:08:43 GMT 5
Shukria Khalid sahib
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jul 6, 2007 11:27:13 GMT 5
Salam...chand rooz pelay aap ki Lodhran aamad par aap say ye ashaar sunnay ka moqa mila tha.Khoobsorat hain,dad qabool kijay oor maqta par ghor farma lain .behtari ho gi.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 6, 2007 13:04:04 GMT 5
Shukria Naveed sahib Mashwara sar aankhooN par
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Post by shahkaar on Jul 6, 2007 23:55:17 GMT 5
kia huwa jo samar nahi pauhncha beej paashi hi kisht maiN kab thee
daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab thee
Dr.saheb
ghazal buhut khubsoorat hay ,.daad qubool kejay
matlay ke saath is ke husn mein mazeed izaafa ho jaye ga.mehfel mein hamaray saath share kernay ka be had shukria,
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 7, 2007 8:27:38 GMT 5
Bohat Bohat Shukria Waqar Masood Khan Sahib
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 8, 2007 10:45:56 GMT 5
aik tang qaafiay k saath aik khoobsoorat ghazal kehnay par aap ko mubarak baad rafi bhi aap ko bhi matlay ka intzaar hy aur humain bhi ab is ka intzaar rahay ga itni umda ghazal daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab thee wah wah janab kia kehnay hain ' isi tara yeh shair bhi bohat pasand aaya Saltanat Khaab ki sjatay kia neend apni grift maiN kb thee bohat see daad hazir hy thanx razi
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 8, 2007 14:30:48 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib!
Kiya he baat hay janaab!
Bohat khoob, omdaah, aur omdaah si daad qabool kijiey.
Tanweer
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Post by sunita on Jul 8, 2007 15:29:59 GMT 5
ek arse baad Rafi sahab aap ki ghazal padne ko mili, bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain aap ne.dheron mubaarak meri aur se.khush rahen.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 8, 2007 20:35:03 GMT 5
Saltanat Khaab ki sjatay kia neend apni grift maiN kb thee daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab thee kia khoobsorat aur rawan ashaar hein tang qafeay mein dad hazir hay qabooleay ga
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 9, 2007 13:11:30 GMT 5
aik tang qaafiay k saath aik khoobsoorat ghazal kehnay par aap ko mubarak baad rafi bhi aap ko bhi matlay ka intzaar hy aur humain bhi ab is ka intzaar rahay ga itni umda ghazal daam e gandum to ik bhana tha hasiyat kuch bahisht maiN kab thee wah wah janab kia kehnay hain ' isi tara yeh shair bhi bohat pasand aaya Saltanat Khaab ki sjatay kia neend apni grift maiN kb thee bohat see daad hazir hy thanx razi Hausla afzai ka shukria Razi bhai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 9, 2007 13:12:36 GMT 5
Bohat bohat shukria Tanweer sahib
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 9, 2007 13:15:03 GMT 5
Sunita ji bohat bohat shukria
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