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Ghazal
May 25, 2007 22:51:50 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2007 22:51:50 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat main aik Ghazal paish hay aaraa ka muntazir rahooN ga
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neha
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Ghazal
May 25, 2007 22:57:50 GMT 5
Post by neha on May 25, 2007 22:57:50 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat main aik Ghazal paish hay aaraa ka muntazir rahooN ga Bohut khoob Rafi bhai, Abhi mein tere janay par tawwajo day nahin sakta Abhi mushkil main hoon is dil ko bhi tou raam karna ahi Mery taraf se daad qubool kijye.
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Ghazal
May 25, 2007 23:01:43 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2007 23:01:43 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat main aik Ghazal paish hay aaraa ka muntazir rahooN ga
meri ruswaioN ka charcha subh o shaam karna hay kisi nay thaan rakha hay mujhay badnaam karna hay
kabhi nakamioN ka zima apnay sar nahi laina keh jo bhi kaam karna hay sar e ilzaam karna hay
mari mushkil say guzri raat to yeh khauf tari hay bhala subho ko ham nay kaisay phir say shaam karna hay
abhi maiN teray janay par tawajo day nahi sakta abhi mushkil main hooN is dil ko bhi to raam karna hay
abhi to dafn karna hay teri yadooN ko seenay main phir us kay ba,ad ji bhar kay mujhay aaraam karna hay
fsana jo yaqeen o bay yaqeeni main mu,alaq hay kisi din us ka aakhir koi anjaam karna hay
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Ghazal
May 25, 2007 23:06:06 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2007 23:06:06 GMT 5
Bohat bohat shukria neha ji
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Ghazal
Jun 1, 2007 15:39:37 GMT 5
Post by shahkaar on Jun 1, 2007 15:39:37 GMT 5
dr saheb
intehaye nipay tulay sheer
intehaye umdah aur khubsoorat takhayyal,
haqqeqat aur jazbat ko alkfaaz ki soorat aap ne buhut umdagee se di, be had shukria itni umdah gahzal ham se share kernay ka..nawazish janab, daad qubool kejay.
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Ghazal
Jun 1, 2007 23:09:26 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2007 23:09:26 GMT 5
Shukria Shahkaar ji
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Ghazal
Jun 3, 2007 21:22:14 GMT 5
Post by dilshadnazmi on Jun 3, 2007 21:22:14 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat main aik Ghazal paish hay aaraa ka muntazir rahooN gameri ruswaioN ka charcha subh o shaam karna hay kisi nay thaan rakha hay mujhay badnaam karna hay
kabhi nakamioN ka zima apnay sar nahi laina keh jo bhi kaam karna hay sar e ilzaam karna hay
mari mushkil say guzri raat to yeh khauf tari hay bhala subho ko ham nay kaisay phir say shaam karna hay
abhi maiN teray janay par tawajo day nahi sakta abhi mushkil main hooN is dil ko bhi to raam karna hay
abhi to dafn karna hay teri yadooN ko seenay main phir us kay ba,ad ji bhar kay mujhay aaraam karna hay
fsana jo yaqeen o bay yaqeeni main mu,alaq hay kisi din us ka aakhir koi anjaam karna hay ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, rafi sahib ,
aadaab
bad>hi murassa aur rawaa'n gazal se aap ne nawazah ,shukriya ,
sare ash_aar bolte huye lagte hain , qara_ee'n jin se bahot
qurbat mahsoos kareinge . iss tarah ke ash_aar ki aamad mere kh
yaal se akcar eak hi nishast me zeyadah tar hoti hai , gazal ka
laheja batata hai , ye main nahi kah raha hoon , waqa_eei
yehi hua hoga , waese aap sahih taour se waqif hain ,
shear no # 3
bad>hi mushkil se guzri raat to ye khof tari hai
bhala subho ko ham ne kaesey phir se shaam karna hai
janab taqabul_e_radeefaen ke ilawah misra cani me lafz
SUBHO tashih talab hai , jis ki wajah se wazn gaer mutwazan
ho raha hai, subh teen harfi lafz hai aur aap ne isse chaar harfi
ki surat me baandh diya hai , maslan aap ke nazdeek iss ki
adaeigi yo'n hogi
bhala subha ya
bhala subho
jab ke isse yo'n kaha jata hai
subh, saad , bey , hey
khaer rawani me akcar aesa ho jata hai , kabhi kabhi .
meri janib se dher sari daad qabool kijiye ,
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Ghazal
Jun 3, 2007 22:57:37 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 3, 2007 22:57:37 GMT 5
Bohat bohat shukria Nezami sahib
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Ghazal
Jun 4, 2007 12:32:09 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 4, 2007 12:32:09 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat main aik Ghazal paish hay aaraa ka muntazir rahooN gameri ruswaioN ka charcha subh o shaam karna hay kisi nay thaan rakha hay mujhay badnaam karna hay
kabhi nakamioN ka zima apnay sar nahi laina keh jo bhi kaam karna hay sar e ilzaam karna hay
mari mushkil say guzri raat to yeh khauf tari hay bhala subho ko ham nay kaisay phir say shaam karna hay
rafi sahib itni khoobsoorat ghala k parhta raha main baar baar isay khaas taur par matla to jaysay zehn par naqsh ho kar reh gia ghazal ka har shair apni jaga aik nageenay ki haysiat rakhta hy thanx razi
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Ghazal
Jun 4, 2007 12:41:04 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 4, 2007 12:41:04 GMT 5
Hausla afzai ka Shukria Razi bhai
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Ghazal
Jul 3, 2007 17:23:15 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 17:23:15 GMT 5
ghazal ki tehti wehdaniat mein jo rachao hay bahut umda hay khasoosan matla bahut he acha laga ghazal ka 4rth sher sham karna hay wala is ghazal mein na hota tu kia he baat thi kiun ke ye sher is ghazal kay majmooe tasur ko gehna raaha hay
aqeel
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Ghazal
Jul 3, 2007 21:47:49 GMT 5
Post by sumanshah on Jul 3, 2007 21:47:49 GMT 5
wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
meri ruswaioN ka charcha subh o shaam karna hay kisi nay thaan rakha hay mujhay badnaam karna hay
bohat khub daad qabool kijyeeeeeeeeeee
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Ghazal
Jul 3, 2007 23:14:02 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 3, 2007 23:14:02 GMT 5
ghazal ki tehti wehdaniat mein jo rachao hay bahut umda hay khasoosan matla bahut he acha laga ghazal ka 4rth sher sham karna hay wala is ghazal mein na hota tu kia he baat thi kiun ke ye sher is ghazal kay majmooe tasur ko gehna raaha hay aqeel bohat bohat shukria Aqeel Malik sahib aap ka mashwra sar aankhooN par
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Ghazal
Jul 3, 2007 23:17:00 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 3, 2007 23:17:00 GMT 5
wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh meri ruswaioN ka charcha subh o shaam karna hay kisi nay thaan rakha hay mujhay badnaam karna hay bohat khub daad qabool kijyeeeeeeeeeee bohat bohat shukria Suman ji
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Ghazal
May 9, 2008 9:04:34 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 9:04:34 GMT 5
Bahut umda Ghazal hai, daad hazir ast
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