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Post by dilshadnazmi on Jun 3, 2007 21:54:23 GMT 5
rafi sahib
aadab
main aap se arz kar doo'n ke kiwaad<h hindi ka lafz hai aur dar farsi ka lafz hai lehazah
dar_e_ be kiwaad>h ki tarkeeb sahih nahi hai.kiwaad<h chokhat ke saath munsalik pat ko kahte hain , aap ne sahih farmaya
lijiye nasiq ka eak shear dekhiye ,,,, tegh_e_qatil ne jo khole meri chati ke kiwaad>h hasrat_e_dil ke nikalne ko ajab dar ho gaya haan yeh meri la ilmi thee ke main ne sabz qadam ke kuch aur maa_ne akhaz kiye , jis ke liye main moaa-zrat kha'n hoon , dar asl issi tarah ki tahqeeqat hamare ilm me izafe ka baa_ac hoti hain ,shukriya rafi sahib ,
qawafi ki majburiya'n apni jagah ,lekin woh ayeb to bahar haal fan_ni noqtah _e_nigaah se maoujood hai!!!!!!!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 3, 2007 22:50:29 GMT 5
Dilshad Nezami sahib bohat bohat shukria yaqeenan isi tarah ki tanqeed balkeh musbat tanqeed say insaan bohat kuch seekhta hay forum isi tarah bhar poor baat honi chahiay warna injuman e staish e bahemi bananay say koi faida nahi bohat khushi hui aap ka tabsra parh kay
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 12:58:06 GMT 5
Wah kia umda ghazal hai, Qafiay khooB haiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 5, 2008 23:36:52 GMT 5
Shukria Mirza sahib
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