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Post by manu1979 on Jan 19, 2008 20:09:07 GMT 5
aadaa'b ar^z hai dosto.N. Insa'allah sab se pehle Naya saal aap sab ki zii.Ndagii me.n khoob ,kaamyaabii, aur khushiiyaa.N laaye yeh merii dil se du_aa hai "AAMIN".Ab apni ek ghazal par aap sab dosto.N ki is'sallah chahta hoon,vaise mai.N ne is baar bhii poori koshish kii hai ki ek behtar aur poorjosh kalam likh sakoon. Is ghazal ke qaafee sher ek duje se juDe hue hai jo aap padhenge toh aap ko pata chal jaayega. Ummid karta hoon ki har baar ki tarah is baar bhee aap ki ummido.N par khara utar sakoo.n. Vaise aap sab dosto.n ke duaa-o- karam aur housala-afsaayii ki badaulat hee likh paata hoon jis ke liye tah-e-dil se aap sab dosto ka mamnoon hoo.n. Sabhi dosto se iltiija hai ki apne beshqeematii tabsare se is ghazal ko nawaaze.gHam mire phir zab^t mera aazmaane aa gaye ash^k kuchh Rish^tey puraane phir nibhaane aa gaye
baat hamney kii jo rasman bhii haseeno se kabhii log dekhiye toHmate.n ham par lagaane aa gaye
aaiine me.n apna chehra tum ne dekha hii nahii Ungliyaa.n kyu.n apni auro.n par uthaane aa gaye?
is qadar bhii log haiN bereh^m socha bhii na thaa zul^m kar ke zakh^m par nishtar chalaane aa gaye
zindagi bhar to nahii kii qad^r mere pyaar kii mar gayaa to qabr par sham,e'N jalaane aa gaye
shaaKh-e-dil se phool ban kar dard kee phooTee Ghazal phir lo ah-le-baz^m taariife.n lutaane aa gaye
jab kabhee Khoon-e-jigar se maiN ne likkhee hai Ghazal hamnisheeN mere sabhee bas muskuraane aa gaYe
ilm ham ko jab huaa gham apna hai unki khushii muskuraa kar ham tabhi phir Zakh^m khaane aa gaye
laakh chaaha hamne rukh yaado.N se teri moDna beete kuchh bereh^m lamHe dil dukhaane aa haye
ham ne dekhee hee nahii aa.Ngan men aisee bhee fizaa tum jo aaYe yooN lagaa mausam suhaane aa gaye!
haa.n magar apne muqaddar me.n yeh mausam hee na tha tum gaye , din zar^d patjhaR ke puraane aa gaye
Yu.n rahe apne maraasim haadso se umrabhar Chaaha dil , khoon-e-jigar mera bahaane aa gaye aap ki raay ka muntzir regards manu
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Post by sunita on Jan 20, 2008 5:23:14 GMT 5
manu bhaiya kaise hain aap.sorry ek arse se aap se baat nahin huii. aur maashaallah aap to bahut taraqii kar rahe hain,itni lambi chodi ghazal keh daali. bahut mehnat ki hai aap ne iss liye daad ke to haqdaar hain hi aap.Bas ek dhayaan rahe ki aap ki padaayii main koii harz na ho, uss par bhi poora dhayaan dena aur achhe marks lena, zindagi banaane ke yeh hi din hote hain.meri duaayen aap ke saath hain.aap hamesha khush rahen.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 20, 2008 18:25:21 GMT 5
Ghum meray phir zabt maira aazmaanay aa gaay Ashk kuchh Rishtey puraanay phir nibhaanay aa gaay
Baat hamnay ki jo rasman bhi haseenoN say kabhi Log dekhiye tohmatain hum par lagaanay aa gaay
Aaienay maiN apna chehra tum ne dekha hi nahiN UngliyaN kiyooN apni auroN par uthaanay aa gaay?
Iss qadar bhi log haiN bay-rehm socha bhi na thaa Zulm kar kay zakhm par nishtar chalaanay aa gaay
Zindagi bhar to nahiN ki qadr mairay piyaar ki Mur gayaa to qabr par sham'aiN jalaanay aa gaay
Shaakh-e-dil se phool ban kar dard kee phooTee ghazal Phir to ehl-e-bazm taarifaiN lutaanay aa gaay
Jab kabhi khoon-e-jigar say maiN nay likh'khi hai ghazal Hum-nisheeN mairay sabhi bus muskuraanay aa gaay
Ilm hum ko jab huwa, ghum apna hai unn ki khushi Muskuraa kar hum tabhi phir zakhm khaanay aa gaay
Laakh chaaha hum nay rukh yaadoN say tairi moRna Beetay kuchh bay-rehm lamHe dil dukhaanay aa gaay
Hum nay daikhi hi nahiN aaNgan maiN aisi bhi fizaa Tum jo aay yooN lagaa, mausam suhaanay aa gaay!
HaaN magar apnay muqaddar maiN yeh mausam hi na thaa Tum gaay, din zard pat-jhaR ke puraanay aa gaay
YooN rahay apnay maraasim haadsoN say umr bhar Chaaha dil, khoon-e-jigar maira bahaanay aa gaay Manu Jee! aap ki ghazal achhi lagi, khas taur per yeh she'r:-
Aaienay maiN apna chehra tum ne dekha hi nahiN UngliyaN kiyooN apni auroN par uthaanay aa gaay?
Iss Sher per ghaur kia magar maaloom nahiN kia ghalati hai hamaray paRhnay maiN
Baat hamnay ki jo rasman bhi haseenoN say kabhi Log dekhiye tohmatain hum par lagaanay aa gaay
Aik cheez ki maazrat chahooN ga woh yeh keh maiN nay aap kay likhay huwa hijjay (Spellings) badal kar likh diaay haiN kiyoon keh mujhay shuroo maiN aap ki ghazal paRhnay maiN mushkil huwi. MaiN nay yeh kaam unn dostoN kay liay kia jo meri tarah kay spellings wali roman urdu istemaal kartay haiN. Bara-e-karah mind na kijaay ga. Mera yeh kaam naik niyyati per mabni hai. Aik tarah say mera jazba dostoN ki khidmat kay liay hai.
Khair Andaish
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 20, 2008 22:24:31 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Manu ji
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 29, 2008 17:21:03 GMT 5
bahut khoob
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Post by kanwal on Feb 12, 2008 3:47:15 GMT 5
aadaa'b ar^z hai dosto.N. Insa'allah sab se pehle Naya saal aap sab ki zii.Ndagii me.n khoob ,kaamyaabii, aur khushiiyaa.N laaye yeh merii dil se du_aa hai "AAMIN".Ab apni ek ghazal par aap sab dosto.N ki is'sallah chahta hoon,vaise mai.N ne is baar bhii poori koshish kii hai ki ek behtar aur poorjosh kalam likh sakoon. Is ghazal ke qaafee sher ek duje se juDe hue hai jo aap padhenge toh aap ko pata chal jaayega. Ummid karta hoon ki har baar ki tarah is baar bhee aap ki ummido.N par khara utar sakoo.n. Vaise aap sab dosto.n ke duaa-o- karam aur housala-afsaayii ki badaulat hee likh paata hoon jis ke liye tah-e-dil se aap sab dosto ka mamnoon hoo.n. Sabhi dosto se iltiija hai ki apne beshqeematii tabsare se is ghazal ko nawaaze.gHam mire phir zab^t mera aazmaane aa gaye ash^k kuchh Rish^tey puraane phir nibhaane aa gaye
baat hamney kii jo rasman bhii haseeno se kabhii log dekhiye toHmate.n ham par lagaane aa gaye
aaiine me.n apna chehra tum ne dekha hii nahii Ungliyaa.n kyu.n apni auro.n par uthaane aa gaye?
is qadar bhii log haiN bereh^m socha bhii na thaa zul^m kar ke zakh^m par nishtar chalaane aa gaye
zindagi bhar to nahii kii qad^r mere pyaar kii mar gayaa to qabr par sham,e'N jalaane aa gaye
shaaKh-e-dil se phool ban kar dard kee phooTee Ghazal phir lo ah-le-baz^m taariife.n lutaane aa gaye
jab kabhee Khoon-e-jigar se maiN ne likkhee hai Ghazal hamnisheeN mere sabhee bas muskuraane aa gaYe
ilm ham ko jab huaa gham apna hai unki khushii muskuraa kar ham tabhi phir Zakh^m khaane aa gaye
laakh chaaha hamne rukh yaado.N se teri moDna beete kuchh bereh^m lamHe dil dukhaane aa haye
ham ne dekhee hee nahii aa.Ngan men aisee bhee fizaa tum jo aaYe yooN lagaa mausam suhaane aa gaye!
haa.n magar apne muqaddar me.n yeh mausam hee na tha tum gaye , din zar^d patjhaR ke puraane aa gaye
Yu.n rahe apne maraasim haadso se umrabhar Chaaha dil , khoon-e-jigar mera bahaane aa gaye aap ki raay ka muntzir regards manu Are manu jee aapko yahaN dekh kar bohat khushi hui ,... bas bohat masroofyat ki wajah se aapko reply na kar saki ,.... Aap jaise ache dost jahaN bhi aayeiN dekh kar khushi hoti hai ,... Chaliye ab aate haiN aapki ghazl ki tarf ,.... Manu aapki ghazl ka har sher hi apni misaal aap hai ,... bohat dilkashi nazR aati hai iss meiN ,.... Dua hai ke Khuda kare ke Zaur e Qalam aur ziyada ,... daad ke gulshan se chand phooL aapki nazR ,...
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