zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jan 3, 2008 12:19:51 GMT 5
shaeri ki duniya ke saathiyon ki nazar, ek adna si kawish.
Gulshan mein thi Bahar tumhen sochtey rahey saanseN theeN khar khar tumhen sochtey rahey
Aayee hawa ke dosh pe ik aashna mehek ham kho ke ikhtiar tumheN sochtey rahey
chu ke dar-e habib ko lotey tow raah mein palkeN theeN ashkbar tumhen sochtey rahey
Tanha, sakoot-e shab meIn sar-e aastan-e shauq sooni thi reh guzar tumheN sochtey rahey
guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey
RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey
Niaz mand
Qamar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 3, 2008 22:32:12 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Qamar sahib
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Post by khalid on Jan 4, 2008 19:33:16 GMT 5
waah! qamar sb is haseen merhaley ko aap ne khoobsoorat andaaz maiN peish kiya! dheiroN daad qubool keeje! aur ye she'r aapki zameen maiN arz kerne ki sa'aadat haasil ker raha hooN....
bersaat ki jhaRi ko nazar meiN samo k ham ro ro key zaar zaar tumheiN sochtey rahey
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 5, 2008 9:41:29 GMT 5
qamar bhaai khoobsoorat ghazal ataa karnay ka shukria thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 5, 2008 15:51:25 GMT 5
Wah Qamar Sahib! Kia khoob Ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay! Daad hazir hai!
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Jan 6, 2008 12:33:08 GMT 5
Daad ka shukria Tabasum saheb. Niaz Mand Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jan 11, 2008 11:58:18 GMT 5
waah! qamar sb is haseen merhaley ko aap ne khoobsoorat andaaz maiN peish kiya! dheiroN daad qubool keeje! aur ye she'r aapki zameen maiN arz kerne ki sa'aadat haasil ker raha hooN.... bersaat ki jhaRi ko nazar meiN samo k ham ro ro key zaar zaar tumheiN sochtey rahey Khalid Saheb aap ka ye sher meri sari ghazal ke baraber hey janab. wah kya khubsoorat sher kaha hey aap ney. Aisi bherpoor daad ke liye bey had shukria. Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jan 16, 2008 12:11:20 GMT 5
qamar bhaai khoobsoorat ghazal ataa karnay ka shukria thanx razi pzeerai ka shukria Razi saheb Qamar
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Post by shahkaar on Jan 16, 2008 15:14:25 GMT 5
araakeen e mehfil se apni yeh khubsoorat ghazal share kernay ka be had shukria
shahkaar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 16, 2008 20:12:16 GMT 5
bahut khoob qamar sahab dad hazir hay
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 8, 2008 3:15:53 GMT 5
araakeen e mehfil se apni yeh khubsoorat ghazal share kernay ka be had shukria shahkaar ghazal ki pasndeedgi ka shukria shahkar ji. adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 8, 2008 3:16:31 GMT 5
bahut khoob qamar sahab dad hazir hay daad ka shukria Aqeel saheb. Adab Qamar
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Post by saeed on Mar 8, 2008 8:18:07 GMT 5
Qamar sb, achi ghazal hai....
guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey
dad hazir hai. Seeed
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 9, 2008 11:50:05 GMT 5
Qamar sb, achi ghazal hai.... guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey dad hazir hai. Seeed Daad ka shukria saeed saheb Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 9, 2008 11:50:53 GMT 5
qamar ji aap ki ghazal aaj padne ka mauqa mila, bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai aap ne.daad qubuul kareN. Sunita ji ghazal ki pasndeedgi aur daad ka shukria niaz mand Qamar
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