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Post by dnangrani on Dec 25, 2007 3:57:33 GMT 5
Gazal
Taish mein gar vo aa gaya hoga uska nuksaan hi hua hoga.
Jhooth ke paanv se chala jo bhi sach ko vo dekhkar ruka hoga.
vo bavishya aur ateet ke haathon jaane kyon, kiase, kab bika hoga.
thartharaati kalam rahi hogi likhne wala bhi kampta hoga.
raat bhar karwatein badalta hua Takiya bechaini par hansa hoga.
Aasmaan toot kar gira lekin apni himmat se vo bacha hoga.
hai vo insaaf ki agar Devi fir to insaaf hi kiya hoga.. 320
Devi
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Post by tmasood on Dec 25, 2007 4:45:19 GMT 5
achaa hai
daad qabuul fermaaiN moHteram
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Dec 25, 2007 5:50:53 GMT 5
wahhhhh bohat khoob Devi ji
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Post by dnangrani on Jan 1, 2008 10:15:16 GMT 5
Aapka bahut bahut dhanywaad
Devi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2008 16:32:02 GMT 5
1.vo bavishya aur ateet ke haathon
ap kay han khoobsorat misray mil jaty hein
aur khasoosan ap apna takhalus nihayat acha istemal keay dayti hein hai vo insaaf ki agar Devi
dad hazir
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Post by sunita on Jan 18, 2008 3:27:02 GMT 5
Devi behan hamesha ki tarah ek aur khoobsoorat ghazal padne ko mili.aap se bahut kuch seekha ja sakta hai.daad qubuul ho.khush rahen.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 18, 2008 17:33:47 GMT 5
Devi jee umda ghazal hai! Daad hazir hai
vo bavishya aur ateet ke haathon
shayed iss misray ki behr main zayadti hai.
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Post by sunita on Jan 22, 2008 23:08:42 GMT 5
Devi ji aap bhi ghayab ho, sab theek to hai na? khush rahen.
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