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Post by kanwal on Jun 9, 2007 1:28:24 GMT 5
Main huN tanhaai hai aur hai Aasman Meri yaadon ki phaili hai yeh kehkashaan
Timtimaatay huay jo yeh taaray haiN sab Mere apnay bhi rehtay haiN kab sy wahan
Door tak koi saathi bhi jab naa milay To kaho phir chalay kaysay ab kaarwaN
Meri shaitaniyaN, meri NaadaniyaN Laa de mujhe kahiN se e umr e rawaN
QurbateiN, UlfateiN thiN jahaN par kabhi Faasle aaye kaise un ke darmiyaN
Muskuraaye hue hum ko muddat hui Jabke har pal raha karte the shaadmaaN jhilmilaahat jo taaron ki hy har gharri Dhoondti hoon musarat k main kuch nishaan
Aaj dulhan sa aanchal gagan ka liay Yeh zameeN kitni lagti hai dilkash , jawaaN Sun kaNwal aaye ga mausam e gul bhi ab Jaate jaate hi jaaye gi aakhir khizaaN
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Jun 9, 2007 1:32:28 GMT 5
its very nice and deep jazbatti nazm
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 9, 2007 8:25:06 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Kannwal ji
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Post by uzair143 on Jun 10, 2007 0:33:03 GMT 5
kanwal baji
bout khoob
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:53:08 GMT 5
its very nice and deep jazbatti nazm thank you muzafar jee ,...
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:54:34 GMT 5
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:56:03 GMT 5
thank you deaar ,... ,....
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Post by rooh on Jun 27, 2007 22:37:37 GMT 5
Dear Kanwal
bahot achhi ghazal kahii hai..merii taraf se daad qabool karo.... Meri shaitaniyaN, meri NaadaniyaN Laa de mujhe kahiN se e umr e rawaN
Sun kaNwal aaye ga mausam e gul bhi ab Jaate jaate hi jaaye gi aakhir khizaaN
very nice..daad hazir hai!!!
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Post by farooqi on Jun 27, 2007 23:57:28 GMT 5
bohut zabardastt kanwal g !
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Post by kanwal on Jun 29, 2007 0:58:17 GMT 5
Dear Kanwal bahot achhi ghazal kahii hai..merii taraf se daad qabool karo.... Meri shaitaniyaN, meri NaadaniyaN Laa de mujhe kahiN se e umr e rawaN Sun kaNwal aaye ga mausam e gul bhi ab Jaate jaate hi jaaye gi aakhir khizaaN very nice..daad hazir hai!!! Rooh sis aap aayee, reply kiya bohat khushi hui ,....
Aapki muhabbat o khaloos ke liye bohat shukrguzaar hooN ,...
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 18:42:53 GMT 5
waah buhat khoob...achhi lagi aapki kaawish...daad qubool kijiye...
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Post by neelofar on Aug 6, 2007 8:02:34 GMT 5
bhot khubbbb hamnaam sis........
Allah kare zor e qalam aor zeyada.........achchi shayri apni traf khaichti hai............aap ki ghazal ne eik shair apna yaad dilaya
bhiigi aaNkhoN se hai rim jhim aisii jaise paimana chalak jaaye koii
salamat raheN aor khubbbb se khubbb likhti raheN.....AAMIN
mukhlis.........hamnam .....K.J....neelofar
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Post by Tanweer on Aug 6, 2007 17:55:22 GMT 5
KanwalBohat khoobsurat, behtreen. Sun kaNwal aaye ga mausam e gul bhi ab Jaate jaate hi jaaye gi aakhir khizaaNJaate jaate chali bhi gaee khizaaN, aur mausam e gul kab ka aa chuka bitya kahan ho tom thori si daad : : : : : : : : : : : : : nahi bohat si daad qabool karo es takhleeq par Tanweer
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Post by kanwal on Sept 12, 2007 0:20:46 GMT 5
bohut zabardastt kanwal g ! bohat bohat shukriya farooqi jee ,...
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Post by kanwal on Sept 12, 2007 0:21:38 GMT 5
waah buhat khoob...achhi lagi aapki kaawish...daad qubool kijiye... Yeh jaan kar acha laga ke aapko humari kaawish achi lagi ,...
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