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Post by Atif Mirza on May 31, 2009 10:59:13 GMT 5
Mohtaram Nasir Malik! Aap nay aik misray maiN istemaal kia
Uss khizaaN ko *naa-motabar jana (*Noon Alif Naa)
YahaN "Naa" ka Alif gir raha hai. Issay durust karnay kay lia aap issay "Noon Alif Naa" ki bajaay "Noon Hay Nah" likhaiN. "Noon Alif Nah" ki ''Hay" dar asl "Haa-e-makhfi" hoti hai, jo likhnay maiN aati hai maga paRhnay ya taqtee maiN nahiN shumaar hoti.
Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziyada.
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Post by nasirmalik on Jun 5, 2009 10:26:58 GMT 5
Dear Atif! nishandehi aor khloos se drusti karnay ka shukria....... aap kay batay hoi donoN nuqs maiN ne theek kar leya haiN. ye'ani ab aap is ghazl maiN
us khizaN ko nah mo'tabar jana, jis khizaN maiN jaRa naheeN tha maiN.
Dil k khadshooN se pak tha nasir, jab kaheeN b jaRa naheeN tha maiN.
umeed hay ab yeh ghazal aap ki tabeea't par grani ka sabab naheeN baney gi. barah-e-karam isi tarah mujhay apni ghair mamooli tawaja k laiq samjhtay rahiye ga. bye Nasir Malik
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 5, 2009 18:44:05 GMT 5
جناب ناصر ملک آپ کے بڑے دل کے لیے بہت سی داد اب بہت اچھے ہو گئے ہیں دونوں اشعار۔ اردو امج بھی درست کر دیجیے گا۔
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:30:41 GMT 5
Pooch laita woh haal-e-dil mera Besabab tou khada nahin tha mein
Paaniyon ka mizaaj nahin tha mein Warna kachha ghada nahin tha mein
Bohut khoob nasir sahab..bohut hi rawan dawan ghazal hai..aamad hai ..meri janib se dhairon daad is khubsurat kaavish k liye
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