zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Apr 20, 2011 11:26:13 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki mehfil mein aik adna si tuk bandi:
YaqeeN Abhaam hona chahta hay JunooN gumnam hona chahta hay
Abhi tak tha dabi sergoshiyon meiN Wo ab paigham hona chahta hay
Bujha ker sari sham’aen aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay
Tere hontowN ko chu ker bey khudi meiN Piayala jam hona chahta hay
Teri zulfoN ki resham bandishoN meiN Ye wehshi raam hona chahta hay
Tamaashey ka naye baazigaroN ke Bas ab anjam hona chahta hay
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
adab
Qamar
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Post by Ghazalsara on Apr 23, 2011 18:19:31 GMT 5
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay wah ji bahut khoob
Bujha ker sari shm'ain aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay yon ho to kaisa ho???
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 26, 2011 15:26:55 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai bahut umda ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay. Bahut Shukriya!
Naveed bhai kay mashwaray ki taeed ka khwastgaar hoon.
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Post by dnangrani on May 2, 2011 14:36:18 GMT 5
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
Zehrab ji bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai lafzon mein daaad ke saath Devi nangrani
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Post by tmasood on May 10, 2011 17:27:35 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki mehfil mein aik adna si tuk bandi:
YaqeeN Abhaam hona chahta hay JunooN gumnam hona chahta hay
Abhi tak tha dabi sergoshiyon meiN Wo ab paigham hona chahta hay
Bujha ker sab sham’oN ko aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay
Tamaashey ka naye baazigaroN ke Bas ab anjam hona chahta hay
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
adab
Qamar Bohat a'alaa
Manderjah baala ash'aar bohat hi pasand aaey
daad Haazir hai
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 10, 2011 17:39:13 GMT 5
Wah Qamar Bhai, Aap ka shukriya, aap ki Ghazal k bahanay Tahira Masood Sahiba bhi aa gayeeN
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:14:47 GMT 5
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay wah ji bahut khoob Bujha ker sari shm'ain aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay yon ho to kaisa ho??? Daad ka shukria Naveed Bhai aap ki advice per amal ker diya hay Shukria again Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:15:46 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai bahut umda ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay. Bahut Shukriya!
Naveed bhai kay mashwaray ki taeed ka khwastgaar hoon. Himmat afzaai ka shukria Atif Bhai Is bazm ki ronaq kahan gayee janab? Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:16:39 GMT 5
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay Zehrab ji bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai lafzon mein daaad ke saath Devi nangrani Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukria Rani ji Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:17:36 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki mehfil mein aik adna si tuk bandi:
YaqeeN Abhaam hona chahta hay JunooN gumnam hona chahta hay
Abhi tak tha dabi sergoshiyon meiN Wo ab paigham hona chahta hay
Bujha ker sab sham’oN ko aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay
Tamaashey ka naye baazigaroN ke Bas ab anjam hona chahta hay
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
adab
Qamar Bohat a'alaa
Manderjah baala ash'aar bohat hi pasand aaey
daad Haazir haiTahira Saheba Ghazal ko pasand kerney ka shukria Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
Posts: 125
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:18:34 GMT 5
Wah Qamar Bhai, Aap ka shukriya, aap ki Ghazal k bahanay Tahira Masood Sahiba bhi aa gayeeN Atif Bhai Chaliye aap kehtey hain tow ham ye ilzam apney ser le letey hain... Qamar
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 11, 2011 21:13:45 GMT 5
Aray Qamar bhai ilzam sar per mat liya kijiay, yeh tau pairoN per bhi nahiN hota tau sar per kiyooN sawar karaiN.
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Post by tmasood on Jul 12, 2011 7:31:26 GMT 5
mohteram
aapki yeh ghazal aur eski zameen bohat pasnad aaee. IsmaiN itnee naghmagi thi keh maire zehn maiN goonjati rehi aur esi zameen maiN maine bhi kuch ashaar kahne ki koshish ki hai. Inshallh jald yehaN chispaN kerdoNgee.
umeed hai pasand aaey gee.
wassalam
aur aikbaar phir is ko share kerne kaa shukeriyah
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