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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 12, 2009 20:27:21 GMT 5
AOA muzaaz sathio,n aj aik taweel arse ke bad apni aik ghazal ke sath hazir ho,n umeed he Ghazal ap ko pasand aye gi ap ki qeemti araka muntzar Ramish Jaan Dhoop ko chao,n banane ka hunar jante hai,n Aap suraj ko buhjane ka Hunar jante hai,n chriya,N chan se bajane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap jazbat jagane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap buhjne nahi dete badan ka Mousam Aap to Aag lagane ka hunar jante hai,n zindag Aap se Bhala Naraz keya ho gi Aap rothe ko manane ka hunar jante hai,n Hal o mazi se dhamk jati he mustaqbil tak Aap har dour me jane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap to rang ka lehja hai,n zuba,n khushbo ki Aap to phol khilane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap to meer ka lehja hai,n zub,n Ghalib ki Aap to Sheir sajane ka huanr jante hai,n Naqsh hanste howe low dete khadokahl mile Aap tasweer banane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap hi dhondiye khoye howe ramish ko kahi,n Aap hi dhond ke lane ka hunar jante hai,n
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Post by Raheel on Aug 13, 2009 11:02:34 GMT 5
Khoob likha aap ney, Ramish Sahab!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 13, 2009 19:08:35 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Ramish sahib kafi arsay kay ba,ad aap ka klaam parhnay ko millaa
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 15, 2009 20:42:38 GMT 5
AOA shukriya raheel sahib Ghazal ko pasadn farmane ke liye waslam mukhlis Ramish jaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 15, 2009 20:45:25 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram Dr sahib nawazish he ap ki moahbte hai,n janab jee isbar ghair hazri ki tawalat kuch zeyda taweel ho gai jis ke liye mazraat chahta ho,n INSHALLA aenda koshish ho gi ke taweel gahir hazri na ho Ghazal ko pasand farmane ke liye bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ka apni qeemti duaao,n me yad rakhyie waslam mukhlis Ramish Jaan
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Post by HASIB RANA on Oct 24, 2009 13:43:39 GMT 5
AOA muzaaz sathio,n aj aik taweel arse ke bad apni aik ghazal ke sath hazir ho,n umeed he Ghazal ap ko pasand aye gi ap ki qeemti araka muntzar Ramish Jaan
Dhoop ko chao,n banane ka hunar jante hai,n Aap suraj ko buhjane ka Hunar jante hai,n chriya,N chan se bajane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap jazbat jagane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap buhjne nahi dete badan ka Mousam Aap to Aag lagane ka hunar jante hai,n zindag Aap se Bhala Naraz keya ho gi Aap rothe ko manane ka hunar jante hai,n Hal o mazi se dhamk jati he mustaqbil tak Aap har dour me jane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap to rang ka lehja hai,n zuba,n khushbo ki Aap to phol khilane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap to meer ka lehja hai,n zub,n Ghalib ki Aap to Sheir sajane ka huanr jante hai,n Naqsh hanste howe low dete khadokahl mile Aap tasweer banane ka Hunar jante hai,n Aap hi dhondiye khoye howe ramish ko kahi,n Aap hi dhond ke lane ka hunar jante hai,n Asalam-o-alikum BOHAT ACH,HA LIKHA HAI AaP NE .. TAKHUAL B KHOOB HAI ... LAKIN BE,HR MAIN BOHAT GAR BAR HAY .... Aap jazbat jagane ka Hunar jante hai,n AaP JAZBON KO JAGANE KA HUNAR JANTE HAI,N
Aap buhjne nahi dete badan ka Mousam ..... BE WAZAN HAI
1# choriya,N chan se bajane ka Hunar jante hai,n 2# AaP JAZBON KO JAGANE KA HUNAR JANTE HAI,N 3# BAN K SAWAN AaP BARSIN YEH BADN PUR SAKON HO 4# Aap suraj ko buhjane ka Hunar jante hai,n
AaP KI BE,HR HAI { MaF, ELAA T'N ( tun ) BY 3 + FAO,LN ( "Nothing" ) }
YA YOUN KEH LAIN 2 3 2 , 2 3 2 , 2 3 2 , 3 2 BINA IJAZAT K ISLAH KERNE PER GUSTAKHI MOAaF HO .... KHAIR ANDESH ...... HASIB SAHIL
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Post by nazghazal on Mar 13, 2010 21:21:41 GMT 5
bohot khoob............
daad qabool kijiye
naz ghazal
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 10, 2011 13:19:29 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai Adab Kya khoob ghazal hui hai, Mubarak Mubarak. Jalees
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