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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 19, 2008 0:46:53 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 19, 2008 0:48:18 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 19, 2008 0:49:38 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 19, 2008 0:51:01 GMT 5
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Jul 19, 2008 5:09:31 GMT 5
main yahan sub say ziada razi ko janta hoon.enlish poet keats key baray main kisii nay kaha tha keh jub woh hath bhii dhota hay tu shaer lugta hay.razi bhii kuch asaa he hay.multan say meri yadoon main mehfooz rehnay waloon main shakir or razi hain.bazahir lugta hay aik dusaray ki zid hain lakin phir bhii achay dost hain shayad yeh waja hay keh doonoo "Mardam Shanass" naheen hain inhain bunday ka bees saal baad pata chata hay.kia kahoon kehnay ko bohat kuch hay lakin kam bohat hay.................baqi phir
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 19, 2008 23:54:49 GMT 5
main yahan sub say ziada razi ko janta hoon.enlish poet keats key baray main kisii nay kaha tha keh jub woh hath bhii dhota hay tu shaer lugta hay.razi bhii kuch asaa he hay.multan say meri yadoon main mehfooz rehnay waloon main shakir or razi hain.bazahir lugta hay aik dusaray ki zid hain lakin phir bhii achay dost hain shayad yeh waja hay keh doonoo "Mardam Shanass" naheen hain inhain bunday ka bees saal baad pata chata hay.kia kahoon kehnay ko bohat kuch hay lakin kam bohat hay.................baqi phir drust kaha janab aap nay hum dono mardam shanaas nahi hain hum nay aap sy dosti lagaai aur aap ny yeh baywafaai ki humain chorr kar japaan chalay gaay
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 20, 2008 0:45:41 GMT 5
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 20, 2008 0:47:42 GMT 5
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 20, 2008 1:28:21 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai!
- Aap ka zarf hai keh mujh khak saar ko bhi aap nay yaad rakhnay ka azaaz bakhsha.
- Aap ka kehna baja hai keh meri shaeri maiN koi aik mustaqil rang nahiN hai!
- Arz kia hai:-
khud apnay aap ko maiN bhi samajh sakaa na kabhi Keh apnay wastay ik imtihaan tha maiN bhi
MaiN apni soch ka izhaar bhi na kar paayaa zabaaN kay hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi
- main apnay baaray maiN jaan'nay ki koshish maiN maSroof hooN.
- Majmooa-e-azdaad hooN.
- Apnay ird gird kay logoN ko dtkhanay kay liay :=
Apnay ooper khoal chaRhaa kar kitnaa khush hooN KhushiyoN ka ik dhoNg rachaa kar kitnaa khush hooN
- Mujhay mazeed jaan'nay kay lia meri yeh ghazal paRh lijiay:-
Yeh sochta hun kissi ka jahaan tha maiN bhi Kissi zameeN ka kabhi aasmaan tha maiN bhi
Khud apni zaat kay asraar bhi samajh na saka Keh apnay waastay ik imtihaan tha maiN bhi
MaiN apni soch ka izhaar bhi na kar paaya ZabaaN kay hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi
UkhaaR phaiNka mujhay raah chalnay waaloN nay MaiN sang-e-meel tha, rastoN ki jaan tha maiN bhi
Mujhay to apnoN ki nafrat nay bad-gumaan kiya MuhabbatoN maiN bahut Khush gumaan tha maiN bhi
Tumhaari yaad nay aa kar mujhay basaaya hai Wagarna barsoN say khaali makaan tha maiN bhi
Tumhay hamaisha bachaaya hai sakht mausam say Tumhaaray waastay ik saaybaan tha maiN bhi
Koee kahaani meray paas ab nahiN logo! Gaya woh daur kabhi daastaan tha maiN bhi
Yeh kis nay noch liay meray baal-o-par Atif! BaRay sakoon say mehw-e-uRaan tha maiN bhi
- MaiN tanha hooN, ya yooN keh lijiay aik aik khoal maiN qaid hooN, self centered qism ka banda hooN.
- Mujhay logoN kay beech janay say khouf aataa hai! Uss kay baa-wajood aap dostoN nay sahaaraa diya huwa hai. KiyooN keh dau chaar ko chhoR kar yahaN sub lo mukhliS haiN.
- RishtoN kay iss hajoom maiN tanhaa hooN aaj tak
TanhaiyoN maiN hoti basar, daikh taha hooN
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Post by sahil on Jul 20, 2008 10:35:54 GMT 5
Razi Sahib! AA Aap nay Urdu Dudia kay liay La jwab Silsilay ka aghaz kia hay. Mujhay is mehfil main aye ziada din to nahi hoay likin me daaway say kh akta hoon kh humara ye saffer aanay wali nasloon kay lia sang e meel ho ga!!! Lf gz sojha to maeeni nay baghawt ker di. "Sukhanwar" kay lia doaeen, Jamsahid Sahil
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 20, 2008 14:37:20 GMT 5
Razi Sahib! AA Aap nay Urdu Dudia kay liay La jwab Silsilay ka aghaz kia hay. Mujhay is mehfil main aye ziada din to nahi hoay likin me daaway say kh akta hoon kh humara ye saffer aanay wali nasloon kay lia sang e meel ho ga!!! Lf gz sojha to maeeni nay baghawt ker di. "Sukhanwar" kay lia doaeen, Jamsahid Sahil jamshed sahab aap ki muhabatain hi is bazm ka husn hain is therad main aap bhi apnay doston ka taaruf karaain thanx' razi
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Post by kanwal on Jul 23, 2008 6:17:52 GMT 5
Salam!... Sukhanwar aur Ehl e Sukhan,Sab se pehle to aik baar phir Aap sab ko Sukhanwar ki teesri Saalgira ki bohat bohat MUBARAK BAAD ,... MuhabbatoN, UlffatoN, KhushyoN bhara Dosti, Waabastagi ki yaadoN ka yeh Silsila dekh kar khushi hui,... Abhi kuch din pehle hi main Ramish jee se keh rahi thi ke humeiN Sukhanwar pe " Aapke Dost" ka Silsila shuru karna chahiye par masroofyat ke jaal meiN yuN phansti chali gayee aur yeh khayaal hi ban ke reh gaya, magar yeh dekh kar khushi hui ke razi jee ne yeh Silsila shuru kar ke humare iss khayaal ko amli ranG de diya ,... YaadoN ke iss dareechey meiN bohat se naaM haiN, lekin main wohi naaM looNgi jin se waabastagi Sukhanwar ke tufailhui ,... ke in dareechoN meiN jhalakne waale sab naaM lena mushkil hi nahiN na mumkin bhi haiN kyuNke ,... Go ke yeh Silsila kaafi arse se razi jee ne shuru kiya hua hai, lekin main iss taraf aane se khud hi gurez karti rahi ke kaNwal ko jaanane waale jaante haiN ke jab main likhne pe aati hooN to kuch bhi kehne se khud ko rok nahiN paati, jo dil meiN hota hai lafzoN meiN dhal kar saamne aa jaata hai,... Shayed issi liye meri kuch baateiN kuch parhne waaloN ko buri lagti haiN,... Main nahiN jaanti ke kaNwal dostoN ki nazar meiN kaisi hai shayed issi liye kehne waale ne kaha hai: lekin kaNwal kya sochti hai dostoN ke baare meiN wohi Aap sabki bisaartoN ki nazaR,... Iss Umeed ke saath ke parhne waale feelings aur iss ki rooH talak jaayeiN ge na ke zahiri shakal se hurt hoNge ,... [/b][/color] [/center]
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Post by kanwal on Jul 23, 2008 6:19:30 GMT 5
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Post by kanwal on Jul 23, 2008 6:21:36 GMT 5
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Post by kanwal on Jul 23, 2008 6:23:40 GMT 5
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