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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 14, 2008 17:57:44 GMT 5
miray angoothay aur unglio'n k jo dermia'n hay ye ik bala hay agar ye chahay to mairi socho'n k dairay main tamam zahno'n ko qaid ker day tamam mairi zaban bolai'n wo takht jis per tamam thookai'n agar mai'n bathoo'n to sur jhuka dai'n to kia zaroorat zaban kato ya tazyanay lagao un ko bus itna ker lo miray angoothay aur unglioo'n k jo dermia'n hay isay khareedo
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 14, 2008 21:56:55 GMT 5
ahaaaaaaaaaahaaaaa
bohat khoobsoorat nazm Zagham sahib Qalam ki taqat aur hurmat ka bhar poor izhaar karti hui nazm daad hazir hay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 14, 2008 22:58:49 GMT 5
miray angoothay aur unglio'n k jo dermia'n hay ye ik bala hay agar ye chahay to mairi socho'n k dairay main tamam zahno'n ko qaid ker day tamam mairi zaban bolai'n wo takht jis per tamam thookai'n agar mai'n bathoo'n to sur jhuka dai'n to kia zaroorat zaban kato ya tazyanay lagao un ko bus itna ker lo miray angoothay aur unglioo'n k jo dermia'n hay isay khareedo dr zagham abidi kamal ki nazm hay yaar zaigham mujhy afsos hota hy k aap apni shairi ko chupa k kion rakhtay hain apni takhleeqat zaroor yahan post kia karain aur haan aik baat aur bhi kehni hay aap say aatif mirza aur main her juma cantt main aik chaay khana abaad kartay hain wahan deegar ehbaab bhi mojoo hotay hain is jumay ko agar mumkin ho to aaiay ga thanx razi
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Post by saeed on Jul 15, 2008 8:51:35 GMT 5
Wah zagham saab
"miray angoothay aur unglio'n k jo dermia'n hay ye ik bala hay"
buhut khubsurat nazm hai. Daad!
saeed
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 15, 2008 11:06:17 GMT 5
mohtram rafi sahib nazm pasand kernay ka shukria
zagham
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 15, 2008 11:09:07 GMT 5
razi bhai
nazm pasand kernay ka shukria. main insha allah jumay ko hazir ho jaoon ga
zagham
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 15, 2008 11:10:14 GMT 5
saeed sahab bhohot shukria
zagham
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2008 19:30:16 GMT 5
Dr sahab kia kamal ki aur munfarid olsloob ki nazm kahi ap nay bahut baar parha aur baar baar parha kae matalib mamas banaty hoey guzar gaey magar aik baat hay kuch bandish dheeli hay jo nazm ko halka sa gehna rahi hay zara nazr e sani karen tu aik bahut he umda aur lajawab nazm hath aeay gi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 18, 2008 12:26:32 GMT 5
aqeel sahib nazm pasand kernay ka shukria. aap nay theek kaha is nazm per nazsani ki ja sakti hay. pichlay dino'n pakistan main aik sarkari nushriati idaray main aala ohday k lalach main aik sahib nay khud ko frokht kia to main kai din disturb raha ye nazm hoe to kuch kitharsis ka saman hoa. socha apnay ahsasat app k sath share ker loon
zagham
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 18, 2008 12:44:26 GMT 5
aqeel sahib nazm pasand kernay ka shukria. aap nay theek kaha is nazm per nazsani ki ja sakti hay. pichlay dino'n pakistan main aik sarkari nushriati idaray main aala ohday k lalach main aik sahib nay khud ko frokht kia to main kai din disturb raha ye nazm hoe to kuch kitharsis ka saman hoa. socha apnay ahsasat app k sath share ker loon zagham zagham main samajh gia aap ny kis ki janib ishaara kia hy asal main yahan logon k jazbaat sy khail kar apnay maqasid haasil karnay ki riwayat hay aik aur baat yeh saabit hui k yahan her shakhs ki aik qeemat hay qamar baandhay huay biknay ko yaan sab yyar baythay hain boht sy bik chukay baaqi jo hain tayyar baythay hain hum ny bus kurrhtay rehna hy aur bus kurrhtay hi rehna hy shaid is liay k hamara koi khareedaar nahin aik baar phir is nazm par daad qabool karo thanx razi
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 19, 2008 12:23:49 GMT 5
razi bhai aaap nay theek kaha yahan sirf jazbat say khaila jata hay aur hamain kurhnay k liay chor dia jata hay. lakin aisay logo'n k makrooh charo'n say niqab hatanay k liay kuch to kerna ho ga. sirf kurhtay rahnay say kia ho sakta hay
zagham abidi
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