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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 16, 2007 12:45:16 GMT 5
teen ashaar lay ker hazir hoon. islah ka muntazir rahoon ga
sukhtian barh gai hain hijrat say kia nibha kay mila rivayat say
bus rivayat ka pass hay warna
haol ata hay ab mohabbat say
us kay paon pe haont rakh ke kia
main nay inkar poori shiddat say
zagham abidi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:31:35 GMT 5
us kay paon pe haont rakh ke kia main nay inkar poori shiddat say
Dr sahab Islah ki kia zaroorat hay itni agressiveness ap ka pschyco anylases karna paray ga
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 16, 2007 22:15:52 GMT 5
teen ashaar lay ker hazir hoon. islah ka muntazir rahoon ga sukhtian barh gai hain hijrat say kia nibha kay mila rivayat say bus rivayat ka pass hay warna haol ata hay ab mohabbat say us kay paon pe haont rakh ke kia main nay inkar poori shiddat say zagham abidi zagham bhai aap ny bohat muddat k baad kuch parhnay ko dia aur bohat hi khoobsoorat khush rahain aur isi lagan k saath shair kehtay rahain tamaam ashaar umda hain doosra shair khaas taur par thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 16, 2007 23:28:06 GMT 5
zagham abidi sahib teenooN ash,aar bohat khoobsoorat hain maiN Aqeel sahib say ikhtelaaf karta hooN akhri shaer bhi meri nazar maiN Jadeed sha,eri kay naam par jis tarah ka klaam aajkal aa raha hay un say kaheeN behtar hay
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Post by khalid on Jul 17, 2007 1:23:37 GMT 5
mohtaram teenoN ash,aar khoob haiN! do ashaar aur maqta shaamil hoN to ghazal mukammal ho jaati! bahar haal daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 17, 2007 12:46:18 GMT 5
jinab aqeel malik sahab jinab razi sahab jinab rafi tabussum sahab aur jinab khalid sahab asshaar pasand kernay ka shukria .
zagham abidi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 17:58:39 GMT 5
Janab Zaigham Saheb! Aap kay teenoN sher kamal haiN. Daad qabool kijiay.
Yeh post meray liay khaS hai keh yeh mera 1000waaN post hai.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 21, 2008 0:16:19 GMT 5
zaigham shab kia yeh ghazal mukamal hui agar hui to baaqi ashaar bhi ataa kijiay thanx razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jul 21, 2008 16:13:02 GMT 5
aoa zaighum acchy share hian par doosra share aprh kar ajeeb lga yar mohat to har door mein aik nafees rishta raha hy aur rahy ga par es sy hool aany waly bat samajh nhin aaty hy,
pehla aur teysra share kamal hain daad qabool karo ap ka mubashir
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 21, 2008 17:20:29 GMT 5
Dr Sb! Ab tau aik baras aur 4 roz beet gaay haiN, ab tau poori ghazal ataa kar dijiay.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 22, 2008 11:51:25 GMT 5
atif sahab
budqismati say gazal mukammal nahin ho saki jaisay hi hoe main aap ki kidmat main paish ker doon ga
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 22, 2008 11:53:50 GMT 5
razi bhai
budqismati say ghazal mukamal nahin ho saki. inshah allah jald hi mikammal ker k sunaoon ga
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 22, 2008 11:58:56 GMT 5
mubshar sahab jab muhabbat main insan musulsul hi holnak tajarbat say dochar ho to phir hol hi utthan ga muhabbat ka nam say. insan bechara kia kare
zagham
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Post by rooh on Jul 22, 2008 16:39:11 GMT 5
Zagham sahab
Bahot khoobsurat ashaar hain...
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 22, 2008 21:15:30 GMT 5
rooh sahaba
ashaar pasand kernay ka shukria
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