"naalah-e-bebaak ho tera dil-e-seemaab ho"

[waqaar]

aadaab,

aik adna sii kaaviSh haaZir-e-khidmat hay. Shukriah!

waQaar

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naalah-e-bebaak ho tera dil-e-seemaab ho
aik ghamzah kay liYay teri nigah betaab ho

khaamah ho akhgar, juvaala harf hoN, ghazlaiN habaab
chaahataa hooN bas tiraa soz-e-sukhan naaYaab ho

apni Shoreedah-sari maiN bay-niaaz-e-'iShq ho
imtiaaz-e-shoq rakh~ aur bay-naZ^eer-e-khwaab ho

saaz ik insaan ik aah-o-faghaaN ik jaan ik
sindh~ ho sarHad, baloChiStaan Ya punjaab ho

pas khuda say baat ker,bay-sudh~ du'aa maiN Doob jaa
haajat-e-baytaab per girYah bahaa, pur-aab ho

ker gaYaa HairaaN qalandar jo Yeh kehta th~aa :waQaar:
tu diYaar-e-'iShq maiN khurSheed-e-aab-o-taab ho

[Rafi Tabasum]

waqaar said:

aadaab,

aik adna sii kaaviSh haaZir-e-khidmat hay. Shukriah!

waQaar

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naalah-e-bebaak ho tera dil-e-seemaab ho
aik ghamzah kay liYay teri nigah betaab ho

khaamah ho akhgar, juvaala harf hoN, ghazlaiN habaab
chaahataa hooN bas tiraa soz-e-sukhan naaYaab ho

apni Shoreedah-sari maiN bay-niaaz-e-'iShq ho
imtiaaz-e-shoq rakh~ aur bay-naZ^eer-e-khwaab ho

saaz ik insaan ik aah-o-f*ghaaN ik jaan ik
sindh~ ho sarHad, baloChiStaan Ya punjaab ho

pas khuda say baat ker,bay-sudh~ du'aa maiN Doob jaa
haajat-e-baytaab per girYah bahaa, pur-aab ho

ker gaYaa HairaaN qalandar jo Yeh kehta th~aa :waQaar:
tu diYaar-e-'iShq maiN khurSheed-e-aab-o-taab ho

Bohat Khoob Waqaar Sahib
Hazrat e Iqbal ka andaz yaad aa gia
bohat khoob

[waqaar]

sunita said:

waqaar bhai aadaab, bhayi iss baar to kamaal kar diya aap ne,hamesha bhi achha likhte hain lekin iss ghazal ke sabhi ashaar itne pasand aaye ki jitni daad deN kam hogi.khaas kar iss sher par


saaz ik insaan ik aah-o-f*ghaaN ik jaan ik
sindh~ ho sarHad, baloChiStaan Ya punjaab ho

aur yeh bhi

pas khuda say baat ker,bay-sudh~ du'aa maiN Doob jaa
haajat-e-baytaab per girYah bahaa, pur-aab ho

dheron daad meri aur se qubuul kareN aur aise hi har bazm ko sajaate raheN.

Sunita jii,

aadaab,

mu'aamilah kuChh~ YuuN hay keh kuChh~ sukhanwar kehtay haiN keh Yeh kYa likkh~aa hay aur aap nay itni daad day dii. laikin Yeh Sirf unhi kay liYay hay jo kuCHh~ istefaadah haaSil ker sakaiN in say. aapnay itni pasand farmaa,ii meri khuSh bakhti.

waQaar

[Atif Mirza]

Andaaz-e-Iqbal hai, Daad hazir hai.