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Post by waqaar on Aug 31, 2007 15:53:25 GMT 5
aadaab,
aik ghazal numa tahreer paiSh hay. go keh kuChh~ khaaS nahiiN likh~ paaYa ph~ir bh~ii jo likkh~aa haaZir hay.
waQaar
======= ph~as gaYaa hooN do jahaanoN maiN kahiiN laa-makaaN hooN aasmaanoN maiN kahiiN
meN to keH jaa,uuNga qabl-az-mot sab jee uTh~ooNgaa ph~ir fasaanoN maiN kahiiN
raNg to badla magar badla nah aNg hay wat^an zindah javaanoN maiN kahiiN
intaqaal-e-ruuH hay, kYa hay buraa! meN rahooNgaa jaavidaanoN maiN kahiiN
meNnay paa,ii hay "waQaar" is zeest maiN jeet pinhaaN imtahaanoN maiN kahiiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 31, 2007 22:21:42 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Waqqar Sahib
raNg to badla hay magar badla nah aNg hay wat^an zindah javaanoN maiN kahiiN
is shaer kay pehlay misray par zra daubara ghaur farma laiN baqi ghazal khoobsoorat hay zra mukhtalif andaz main
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Post by waqaar on Sept 1, 2007 3:10:32 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Waqqar Sahib raNg to badla hay magar badla nah aNg hay wat^an zindah javaanoN maiN kahiiN is shaer kay pehlay misray par zra daubara ghaur farma laiN baqi ghazal khoobsoorat hay zra mukhtalif andaz main Rafi' SaaHeb,
aadaab,
aapki niShaandahii ka Shukriah warnah Yeh ghalat^ ghalat^ hii rehta. meNnay iSlaah ker dii hay. aapnay daad say nawaazah bahut Shukriah!
waQaar
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Post by khalid on Sept 8, 2007 7:54:13 GMT 5
bohot khoob waQaar! her she'r zabar dast hai! daad qubool keeje; aur meiree jaanib se ye haqeer sa khiraaje aqeedat quboolnkeeje apni zameen meiN........ tund khoo toofaN meiN bhi saakit haiN ham nuqs hai kya baadbaanoN meiN kahiN?
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Post by haamidbaaqari on Sept 11, 2007 13:21:03 GMT 5
aadaab,
aik ghazal numa tahreer paiSh hay. go keh kuChh~ khaaS nahiiN likh~ paaYa ph~ir bh~ii jo likkh~aa haaZir hay.
waQaar
======= ph~as gaYaa hooN do jahaanoN maiN kahiiN laa-makaaN hooN aasmaanoN maiN kahiiN
meN to keH jaa,uuNga qabl-az-mot sab jee uTh~ooNgaa ph~ir fasaanoN maiN kahiiN
raNg to badla magar badla nah aNg hay wat^an zindah javaanoN maiN kahiiN
intaqaal-e-ruuH hay, kYa hay buraa! meN rahooNgaa jaavidaanoN maiN kahiiN
meNnay paa,ii hay "waQaar" is zeest maiN jeet pinhaaN imtahaanoN maiN kahiiN WAQAAR BHAI aSSALAAM O ALAIKUM
kaisay haiN aap?
aapki yeh ghazal bahut khoob hai
daad haazir hai
qubool farmaayeN
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaadah
mukhlis haamidbaaqari
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Post by waqaar on Sept 11, 2007 17:20:26 GMT 5
bohot khoob waQaar! her she'r zabar dast hai! daad qubool keeje; aur meiree jaanib se ye haqeer sa khiraaje aqeedat quboolnkeeje apni zameen meiN........ tund khoo toofaN meiN bhi saakit haiN ham nuqs hai kya baadbaanoN meiN kahiN? Khaalid SaaHeb, aadaab, aapkay husn-e-naZ^ar ka meN baChpan hii say qaa,il hooN . aur aapkii daad meray liYay baa,ic-e-taShakkur banti hay. bahut Shukriah! waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Sept 11, 2007 17:27:18 GMT 5
aadaab,
aik ghazal numa tahreer paiSh hay. go keh kuChh~ khaaS nahiiN likh~ paaYa ph~ir bh~ii jo likkh~aa haaZir hay.
waQaar
======= ph~as gaYaa hooN do jahaanoN maiN kahiiN laa-makaaN hooN aasmaanoN maiN kahiiN
meN to keH jaa,uuNga qabl-az-mot sab jee uTh~ooNgaa ph~ir fasaanoN maiN kahiiN
raNg to badla magar badla nah aNg hay wat^an zindah javaanoN maiN kahiiN
intaqaal-e-ruuH hay, kYa hay buraa! meN rahooNgaa jaavidaanoN maiN kahiiN
meNnay paa,ii hay "waQaar" is zeest maiN jeet pinhaaN imtahaanoN maiN kahiiN WAQAAR BHAI aSSALAAM O ALAIKUM
kaisay haiN aap?
aapki yeh ghazal bahut khoob hai
daad haazir hai
qubool farmaayeN
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaadah
mukhlis haamidbaaqariHaamid bh~aaii, ASsalaamO'Elaqum! aadaab! idh~er to Allaah ka bahut hii karam hay. aapkay mizaaj kaisay haiN ? aapki daad naaCheez ko sadaa naSeeb huii. Yeh aapka baRaa pan hay! bahut Shukriah! waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Sept 19, 2007 1:11:15 GMT 5
waah waqaar sahab ek aur kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai aap ne sabhi ashaar pasand aaye.daad qubuul karen. Sunita didi,
kahaaN ghaaYab haiN aajkal aap? umeed hay sab bakher hay.
aapnay itni 'izzat deti haiN keh meN ph~oolay nahiiN samaata . bahut bahut Shukriah!
waQaar
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 22:39:55 GMT 5
Wah WaQar bhai.
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