zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 29, 2008 14:15:10 GMT 5
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 29, 2008 18:57:41 GMT 5
Zaki saheb!
Bohat achay janab, daad hazir hay
Faq't Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 29, 2008 19:19:50 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhhhhh
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 10:16:27 GMT 5
Zaki saheb! Bohat achay janab, daad hazir hay Faq't Tanweer Tanveer Sahib Hosla Afzaai ka bahut bahut Shukria....
Sada Khush Raheay.......
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 10:21:07 GMT 5
Bahut Shukria Rafi Sahib......
Sada khush raheay..........
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:39:04 GMT 5
Kon kehta hay zamaney mein wafa baqi hay ab tow duniya mein faqat nam-e Khuda baqi hay
wah Arshad saheb....bohat acha matla' hay....
Ho gaya hun kis jungle ki tarah meiN weeran meri aankhoN mein magar khawab tera baqi hay
bohat khub....bara acha khayal baandha hay aap ney
Ret sehra ki huN mein, tum ho hawaaoN jaisi Mere seeney pe tera nam likha baqi hay
acha takhayul hay lekin ager isey yun ke rlen tow meri naqis raaey mein zor peda ho ga:
Ret sehra ki huN mein, tum ho hawaaoN jaisi Phir bhi seeney pe tera nam likha baqi hay
kyunke usually hawa sey ret ur jaya kerti hay aur likha hua mit jaya kerta hay mager aap keh rahey hain ke tera nam is qadar gehra likha hay ke ret mein honey ke bawajood hawa sey naheen mita.
aur ye sher bohat lutf dey gaya:
Teri yaaden haiN ke merham hay mere zakhmoN ka mit gaey zakhm sabhi aur dawa baqi hay
wah......
bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 8, 2008 8:44:29 GMT 5
aik misray main aap nay lafz ay khuda ya istamaal kia hy ay ka matlab bhi ya hi hay ay khudaya ka istamaal drust nahin is par nazr e sani kijiay marhum bhi aik jaga drust naih likha yeh barri haay say nahin chopti hay sy likha jata hay
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 17, 2008 13:40:20 GMT 5
aik misray main aap nay lafz ay khuda ya istamaal kia hy ay ka matlab bhi ya hi hay ay khudaya ka istamaal drust nahin is par nazr e sani kijiay marhum bhi aik jaga drust naih likha yeh barri haay say nahin chopti hay sy likha jata hay Razi Sahab bahut bahut shukria drustgi farmanay ka.....
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 17, 2008 22:39:10 GMT 5
Teri yaaden haiN ke merham hay mere zakhmoN ka mit gaey zakhm sabhi aur dawa baqi hay
wah zaki sahab bht hi khubsurat ghazal hai aap ki..har shair qaabil-e- daad hai..mery taraf se mubarak baad qubool kijye itny khubsurat ghazal k liye.
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 20, 2008 13:40:25 GMT 5
Teri yaaden haiN ke merham hay mere zakhmoN ka mit gaey zakhm sabhi aur dawa baqi hay
wah zaki sahab bht hi khubsurat ghazal hai aap ki..har shair qaabil-e- daad hai..mery taraf se mubarak baad qubool kijye itny khubsurat ghazal k liye. Neha Ji bahut bahut shukria hosla afzaai farmaanay ka........ Sada khush raheay......
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Post by waqaar on Nov 17, 2008 20:22:10 GMT 5
Janaab ArShad SaaHeb, aapki ghazal bahut hii aChh~ii lagii. zameen bh~ii zarkhez Dh~ooNDi aapnay. "muNh CHh~upaati huii aaNdhh~ii se kaho keh aaye" meray khayaal maiN lafZ^ "keh" ko baRii aavaaz maiN baaNdh~na munaaSib nahiiN. "aaNdh~ii se kaho ab aaye" Ya ... "se Yeh kehdo aaye" bh`ii mumkin aShkaal haiN. maqt^'ah bemicaal hay. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Dec 2, 2008 17:32:34 GMT 5
Janaab ArShad SaaHeb, aapki ghazal bahut hii aChh~ii lagii. zameen bh~ii zarkhez Dh~ooNDi aapnay. "muNh CHh~upaati huii aaNdhh~ii se kaho keh aaye" meray khayaal maiN lafZ^ "keh" ko baRii aavaaz maiN baaNdh~na munaaSib nahiiN. "aaNdh~ii se kaho ab aaye" Ya ... "se Yeh kehdo aaye" bh`ii mumkin aShkaal haiN. maqt^'ah bemicaal hay. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar Waqar Sahab mein bahut mashkor hon apka .... app ne bahut acha mashwara dia hai .... mujhe khushi ho rahi hai keh mein yahan per apna waqt zaie nahi kar raha bal k bahut kuch seekh raha hon...... Ap ka bahut shukria umeed hai keh ainda bhi apni aa'ra se zaroor nawzte rahin ge.... sada khush raheay....
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