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Post by zaki on Dec 2, 2008 17:45:33 GMT 5
kh jaisay kuch bhi nahin safar ki dhool hun main waaaaah zaki sahib bahut khoob Najma Shaheen Sahiba bahut bahtu shukria iss kavish ko passand karne ka..... sada khush raheay...
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Post by zaki on Dec 2, 2008 17:51:03 GMT 5
Durustgi ki tajweez 1:- "Meri misaal hai sookhi nadi peh pul jaisi" Durustgi ki tajweez 2:- "Gira na deeda-e-namnaak say abhi mujh ko" maiN nah Urdu Image maiN bhi durust hai aur matlab kay etibar say bhi theek hai. Durustgi ki tajweez 3:- "Teri riyazat-e-shab bhar ka ik husool hooN maiN" maiN shab bhar tau theek hai kissi hudd tak magar Ik waqee izafi hai. Iss per aap khud sochiay. bahut suhkria atif bhai ..... apne bahut mufeed maalomaat faraham ki hain jo mere leay bahut kar amad hain... durustgi farmanay ka bahut bahut shukria.... sada khush raheay...
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Post by zaki on May 9, 2009 12:53:38 GMT 5
Zaki Sahib, Boht Khoob. Daad qubool kijiye. Bahut shukria jooni sahab ... Sada khush raheay ...
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Post by zaki on May 9, 2009 12:56:16 GMT 5
Zaki sahab ap ki ghazal meiN craft ka jo tareeqa hay wo jadeed hay aur isi craft ko barqarar rakhty hoeay agay ka safar jari rakheay jin batoN par Razi sahab nay comment kia hay un say mujhy itifaq hay aik nazar dobara daikhnay say ap ki ghazal ki nashist o barkhaast umda hojeay gi aqeel Bahut shukria Malik sahab ... Sada khush raheay ....
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