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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 19, 2009 19:25:57 GMT 5
AOA Ehle Sukhanwar aik nazm duaa ki sorat ap ki bisarto ki nazrAik nazm Watan ke liye Duaa ki Sourat
Mere Moula Duaye madar me sheer e madar sa zayeqa aur mithas rakhna fizaye sehan e chaman me qayem gulab mosmo ki Aas rakhna Sadaqto par Amal ki beant saato,n ki Asaas rakhna dilo ke ujde howe chaman me saba rawaeu,n ki bas rakhna Mere Moula kabhi jo peedo par zard rut ka Aazab apne par jamaye akelgi ka udas manzar haseen shamo,n ko banjh paye Sadaye bulbul me hijr ki hook aur koyel ki kook ubrhe je nakhl e zeeton sokh jaye je fakhtao,n ka shor utre To Mere Moula phir apni rehmat ke sabz mousam Gulab rut aur abre bara,n ujad dharti ke kub se phele shikasta daman me dal dena shabo ki hum rang saato,n ke sehar ki umeed baksh dena ke sirf zeeba tujhe he ehle zawal ko phir kamal dena zamee,n ke zaroo ko misle Khursheed dehr me ujal dena
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 21, 2009 16:43:48 GMT 5
umda nazm hay dad qabool kareay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 22, 2009 13:38:22 GMT 5
khoobsoorat nazm hy ramish bhaai watan sy muhabat aik aik lafz sy jhalakti hy thanx razi
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 25, 2009 1:35:15 GMT 5
AOA malik sahib bohat bohat shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 25, 2009 1:36:59 GMT 5
AOA Razi bhai bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki is mohabat bahre jumlo ke liye watan se mohabat mera imaan he ALLHA kare yeh mohabat hamesha qayem rahe ameen suma ameen ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by jooni on Mar 27, 2009 0:29:22 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai, Adaab.
Khoobsoorat nazm hai. Watan-e-Azeez k liye aap ki mohabbat ka bhar-poor izhaar hai. Aap ki DUA per Aameen!
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 27, 2009 15:15:34 GMT 5
AOA jooni bhai bohat bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki mohabto ka sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 7, 2009 10:12:30 GMT 5
BaRay Bhai Ramish Jaan! Bahut umda nazm kahi hai aap nay. Daad qabool kijiay. Aik dau muqaamaat per hijjoN ya typos ki wajah say gaR baR ghotalaa hai.
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Post by ramishjaan on Apr 25, 2009 20:53:07 GMT 5
WALEKUM SALAM chote bhai Mirza atif jee
nazm ko pasand farmane keliye shukriya hazoor jo kahi,n khai,n gar bar ghutala he na wo asal me inpage sahi na hone ki wajha se he umeed he INSHALLA jald dosra inpage shoro karo ga to yeh choti choti ghaltiya bhi behtar ho jaye gi waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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