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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2008 2:31:12 GMT 5
Sabhi ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Razi bhai nay meray naam say aik elaeheda board bnaya tha maiN nay us maiN kuch ghazalaiN post keeN magar ahbab ki nazar hi nahi pari mera khayal hay keh us board ko sirf clasics tak hi mehdood rakha ja,ay sukhanwar ahbab apna klaam andaz e biaN hi main post karaiN to ziada behtar hay
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Post by naheedv on Jun 1, 2008 6:16:41 GMT 5
waah Rafi bhai, aap kee ghazal pasand aayi. matla' aur pehlaa she'r dil ko choo gae. daad! maqta' meN aap ne takhalus ko iss taraH type kiyaa hai ke voh takhallus naheeN meHsoos ho rahaa hai, aur agar thoRaa ghaur na kiyaa jaaye tau misre' ke manee hee badal jaayeN aur voh bhee ghalat gramer ke saath kam az kam mujhey kuch der lagee she'r ko samajhne meN. sochaa aap ko bhee bataa dooN. shukriya Naheed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 1, 2008 9:28:22 GMT 5
rafi bhaai boht achi ghazal hy aap ki asal main ab tak yeh practice rahi hy k aik shair walay board main log takheer sy pohanchtay hain aap apna taaza kalam andaz e bayan main hi dia karain jab yahan discusion ho jaay to phir usay wahan shift kar dia jaay ga aap ki yeh ghazal bhi aap ki deegar ghazlon ki tarah khoobsoorat hay aap k haan munfarid radeefon k istamaal sy jo mazameen ka tanawo payda hota hy woh is ghazalmain bhi mojood hy thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 1, 2008 12:55:34 GMT 5
Rafi sahib achhchhi ghazal hai, Daad qabool kijiay.
Matlay kay misra-e-saani maiN "Nah (Noon Hay = Nah)" nahiN balkeh "Na (Noon Alif = Na)" hona chahiay.
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Post by Tanweer on Jun 1, 2008 22:24:10 GMT 5
Waah Rafi sahib! khoobsurat tareen, waqi wahan rasaaee na ho paee.
Behtareen Ghazal aapki, aur behtreen daad hamari.
Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2008 23:20:50 GMT 5
waah Rafi bhai, aap kee ghazal pasand aayi. matla' aur pehlaa she'r dil ko choo gae. daad! maqta' meN aap ne takhalus ko iss taraH type kiyaa hai ke voh takhallus naheeN meHsoos ho rahaa hai, aur agar thoRaa ghaur na kiyaa jaaye tau misre' ke manee hee badal jaayeN aur voh bhee ghalat gramer ke saath kam az kam mujhey kuch der lagee she'r ko samajhne meN. sochaa aap ko bhee bataa dooN. shukriya Naheed Shukria Naheed sahiba maiN aap kay tajiyay say ittefaaq karta hooN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2008 23:39:30 GMT 5
rafi bhaai boht achi ghazal hy aap ki asal main ab tak yeh practice rahi hy k aik shair walay board main log takheer sy pohanchtay hain aap apna taaza kalam andaz e bayan main hi dia karain jab yahan discusion ho jaay to phir usay wahan shift kar dia jaay ga aap ki yeh ghazal bhi aap ki deegar ghazlon ki tarah khoobsoorat hay aap k haan munfarid radeefon k istamaal sy jo mazameen ka tanawo payda hota hy woh is ghazalmain bhi mojood hy thanx razi Razi bhai aap ki ra,ay meray liay iftekhaar ka ba,es hay
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2008 23:46:56 GMT 5
Rafi sahib achhchhi ghazal hai, Daad qabool kijiay.
Matlay kay misra-e-saani maiN "Nah (Noon Hay = Nah)" nahiN balkeh "Na (Noon Alif = Na)" hona chahiay.
Mirza sahib bohat shukria aap ki neshandahi bilkul theek hay yeh composing ki ghalati hay
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 1, 2008 23:54:41 GMT 5
Waah Rafi sahib! khoobsurat tareen, waqi wahan rasaaee na ho paee. Behtareen Ghazal aapki, aur behtreen daad hamari. TanweerShukrua Tanweer sahib
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Jun 2, 2008 9:41:56 GMT 5
Mohtram Rafi Tabassum Saheb, Asslam u ALikum,
"GHAZALIN KHAREED LAEY HAIN YADOON K DES SAY" "JO TERAY SATH GUZRI THEE IK RAAT BECH KAR" WAH BOHOT KHOOB. AAP KEE MUKAMAL GHAZAL BOHOT ACHI HAI AUR YE SHER MUJHAY SAB SAY ZAYADA PASNAD AAYA HAI. MERI TARF SAY DHEROON DAAD QABOOL KEJAY.
Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 9:52:31 GMT 5
Sabhi ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Razi bhai nay meray naam say aik elaeheda board bnaya tha maiN nay us maiN kuch ghazalaiN post keeN magar ahbab ki nazar hi nahi pari mera khayal hay keh us board ko sirf clasics tak hi mehdood rakha ja,ay sukhanwar ahbab apna klaam andaz e biaN hi main post karaiN to ziada behtar hay Rafi bhai, Aapney khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai ...hamarey yar Frahat Abbas Shah ki zameen mein. aajkal is forum pe buhut se sheri mubattoN ka lutf dobala ho raha hai. Khush rahen. Daad qabool kejiye. Saeed
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 2, 2008 21:54:05 GMT 5
Mohtram Rafi Tabassum Saheb, Asslam u ALikum, "GHAZALIN KHAREED LAEY HAIN YADOON K DES SAY" "JO TERAY SATH GUZRI THEE IK RAAT BECH KAR" WAH BOHOT KHOOB. AAP KEE MUKAMAL GHAZAL BOHOT ACHI HAI AUR YE SHER MUJHAY SAB SAY ZAYADA PASNAD AAYA HAI. MERI TARF SAY DHEROON DAAD QABOOL KEJAY. Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy Bohat bohat Shukria Saffy sahib
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 2, 2008 21:57:21 GMT 5
Sabhi ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Razi bhai nay meray naam say aik elaeheda board bnaya tha maiN nay us maiN kuch ghazalaiN post keeN magar ahbab ki nazar hi nahi pari mera khayal hay keh us board ko sirf clasics tak hi mehdood rakha ja,ay sukhanwar ahbab apna klaam andaz e biaN hi main post karaiN to ziada behtar hay Rafi bhai, Aapney khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai ...hamarey yar Frahat Abbas Shah ki zameen mein. aajkal is forum pe buhut se sheri mubattoN ka lutf dobala ho raha hai. Khush rahen. Daad qabool kejiye. Saeed Izzat afzai kayliay shukar guzaar hooN
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Post by kanwal on Jun 5, 2008 0:37:07 GMT 5
Sabhi ahbab ki khidmat maiN slaam Razi bhai nay meray naam say aik elaeheda board bnaya tha maiN nay us maiN kuch ghazalaiN post keeN magar ahbab ki nazar hi nahi pari mera khayal hay keh us board ko sirf clasics tak hi mehdood rakha ja,ay sukhanwar ahbab apna klaam andaz e biaN hi main post karaiN to ziada behtar hay Bohat khoob ,... Go ke yeh ghazl pehle bhi parh chuki hooN par har baar ik naye pan ka ehsaas hota hai ,... Daad ke gulshan aapki nazR ,...
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 5, 2008 1:27:29 GMT 5
Bohat shukria Kanwal ji
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