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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 4, 2007 1:14:27 GMT 5
Ahbab Neelofer is forum ki nai member haiN unhooN nay yeh Ghazal kisi aur member ki takhleeq main reply kay taur par lga dee thee maiN nay munasib samjha keh yeh ghazal is forum maiN honi chahiay so ghazal parhiay aur Neelofer ko daad dejiay
hello friends....mai sukhanwar ki nyii member hoon.........is mahfil me apni eik ghazal arsal kerne ki gisaret ker rahi hoon..... ghazal mujh ko mera yaqeen bhot motaber lga ye aor bat bakht bra bekhabar ...lga
soocha tha tum se door nikal jaoNgi mger dekha to har moqaam teri rhguzar lga
binayii mujh se chiin ke yuN le gya kooi roshan hai din mager mujhe pichla pher lga
aankhoN ke sab diye tere raste pe rakh diye tareek iss liye mere di ka nager..............lga
zeer E falak to mil na saki chat sukoon ki neeche zameen ke jo mila apna ghar lga
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 4, 2007 1:16:32 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ghazal Neelofer ji daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 4, 2007 16:07:15 GMT 5
soocha tha tum se door nikal jaoNgi mger dekha to har moqaam teri rhguzar lga
Nelofar Sahiba
ghazal ka matalia kia ..........darj bala sher acha laga aik aur jagah ap nay pahar bandha hay jo mehl e nazar hay us sher ko rewrite karny ki zarorat hay majmooe taur par ghazal behtar lagi
aqeel
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Post by neelofar on Jul 5, 2007 11:53:18 GMT 5
bhai qalam dost aor bhai aqeel....adaab aap dono ne tawajjah se meri ghazal ** mujh ko mera yaqeen..........** perhi.iss baat ke lie aap ki momnoon o mashkoor hoon. Aqeel bhai aap ne ek shair ke bare me usse rewrite kerne ki baat ki hai..agr ye shair hai ke.....binayi mujh se chiin ke yun le gaya koi.....to is silsile me arzz hai ke mmere majmoye me jo kuch bhi hai usse janab JAWED MANZAR sb ki aslah ke baad hi printing ke merhale se guzra hai.waise ager aap iss silsile me rahnumaai fermaayeN to khushii ho gi.
wassalam Neelofar
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 5, 2007 12:23:37 GMT 5
Neelofar Sahiba!
Achi ghazal aapki, pasand aaee, daad qabool kijiey
Tanweer
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 5, 2007 12:43:32 GMT 5
bhai qalam dost aor bhai aqeel....adaab aap dono ne tawajjah se meri ghazal ** mujh ko mera yaqeen..........** perhi.iss baat ke lie aap ki momnoon o mashkoor hoon. Aqeel bhai aap ne ek shair ke bare me usse rewrite kerne ki baat ki hai..agr ye shair hai ke.....binayi mujh se chiin ke yun le gaya koi.....to is silsile me arzz hai ke mmere majmoye me jo kuch bhi hai usse janab JAWED MANZAR sb ki aslah ke baad hi printing ke merhale se guzra hai.waise ager aap iss silsile me rahnumaai fermaayeN to khushii ho gi. wassalam Neelofar Neelofer sahiba! baat ye hay ke koe bhi shair ho aur koe bhi lafz bandhay us ki sanad behr hal asatiza kay han say li ja sakti hay ap Javed Manzae sahab say is lafz ki sehat aur asatiza kay han say koe sanad lay lein tu ziada munasib rahay ga is tarha na sirf ap ki balkeh hamari bhi rehnumae ho jaeay. aqeel
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Post by sumanshah on Jul 5, 2007 20:44:08 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaaab neelofar
sab sey pehlay to ap ko sukhanwar par dil ki gehraiun sey khushamdeed kehtay hain.
or itni khubsoorat ghazal kay liyee hamari janib sey daaad qabool kijyee.umeed hay aap
issi tarah apnay kalam sey mehfil ko ronaq bakhshti raheen gi.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 16:37:10 GMT 5
woh lafz pahar bhi bandha jasakta hai.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 21, 2008 0:23:10 GMT 5
aankhoN ke sab diye tere raste pe rakh diye tareek iss liye mere di ka nager..............lga
kitna khoobsoorat shair hay neelofar sahiba hum nay aap ki yeh ghazal aik saal purani ghazlon main talash ki hy aur hum isay naai tehreeron main is liay rakh rahay hain k yeh khoobsoorat kalaam aur doston ko bhi parhna chaahiay thanx razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jul 21, 2008 16:17:03 GMT 5
aoa neelofar shaiba aachy ghaezl hy khass toor par yee 2 aashar mujh ko mera yaqeen bhot motaber lga ye aor bat bakht bra bekhabar ...lga
soocha tha tum se door nikal jaoNgi mger dekha to har moqaam teri rhguzar lga
dadd qabool karian mubashir
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Post by saeed on Jul 22, 2008 4:22:49 GMT 5
Nellofer sahiba,
khubsurat ghazal hai...
soocha tha tum se door nikal jaoNgi mger dekha to har moqaam teri rhguzar lga
waahhh...kiya baat hai. SAeed
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