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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 8, 2008 23:48:31 GMT 5
AOA ehle bazm Apni aik adna si kawish ap ki qeemti bisrato ki nazr Ap ki qeemti raye ka intzar rahe ga waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Shama e ishq sar e bam froza rakhna Dagh Jalte Howe Seene Main bhi pinha,n rakhna
Jo Chamkate hai,n tri Aankh me Shabnam Shabnam Wo larazte howe moti Sar e Mishga,n rakhna
Zindagi Saghar o meena ke Sahare Guzri Apni Qismat me Kaha,n Hashr ka sama;n rakhna
Dil sanbhalta hi nahi lakh sanbhala hum ne Ab tw dastor he yeh chak gereba,n rakhna
Lout aye,n ge wo ramish teri Mhefel me Apni Mehfel ke dar o bam cahragha:n rakhna
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 9, 2008 7:55:52 GMT 5
wahh khoobsoorst ghazal Ramish sahib
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meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:45:18 GMT 5
wah ramish bhayi....aik arsay baad aik khoobsoorat kalaam paRhnay ko mila.......... aap kee shairy main bohut nikhaar aa gaya hai janab......wallah bohut umda likhtay hain aap.........! faqat meena
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Post by nazghazal on Aug 9, 2008 18:01:33 GMT 5
bohot khoob ramish sahab
aap ko itni achi tehreer par bohot si daad
naz ghazal
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 10, 2008 0:25:06 GMT 5
AOA Qable ehtram Dr sahib bohat bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 10, 2008 0:26:54 GMT 5
AOA meena sis shukriya aj ap ko yahan dobara dekh kar bohat Khushi ka ehsas ho raha he shukriya ke ap ne meri dawat ko qabol kiya meena sis Ghazal ko pasand farmane ka bohat shukriya jab dard be tahsha ho jaye to alfaz me nikhar aa hi jata he waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 10, 2008 0:27:54 GMT 5
AOA naz Ghazal jee Ghazal ap ko pasand aei bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ka apni doau,n me yad rakhyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 14, 2008 14:59:19 GMT 5
Dil sanbhalta hi nahi lakh sanbhala hum ne Ab tw dastor he yeh chak gereba,n rakhna
bhikhoob ghazal kahi aap ny wah wah thanx razi
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Post by tmasood on Aug 14, 2008 23:51:48 GMT 5
bohat khoob Janaab Ramish Saaheb
daad qabuul fermaaiN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Aug 25, 2008 21:38:59 GMT 5
Wah Ramish Bhai! Bahut umda kalaam ataa farmaya hai aap nay! Bahut si daad aap ki iss khoobsoorat ghazal ki nazar! Gar qabool aftad...............
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Post by shahkaar on Aug 28, 2008 23:24:30 GMT 5
Ramish bhai
aik arsay baad aap ka kalam parhnay ko mila,buhut umdah ghazal kahi aap nay , maqtaa parh k lutf aa gaya, itni pur lutf ghazal likhnay per daad qubool kejay.
ham say share karnay ka shukria.
shahkaar
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Post by Tanweer on Aug 30, 2008 15:18:28 GMT 5
Ramish bhaee!
Bohat he omdaah aur khoobsurat ghazal aapki, walah lutf aa gaya.
Bolien kitni daad dein ?
Tanweer
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Post by ramishjaan on Sept 3, 2008 23:52:44 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai takheer se reply ke liye be intha maazrat chahta ho,n wajha ap ko bata chuka ke 2wek hospital ke seer par geya howa tha is liye takheer ho gai ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Sept 3, 2008 23:53:35 GMT 5
AOA tahira jee bohat shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Sept 3, 2008 23:55:21 GMT 5
Wah Ramish Bhai! Bahut umda kalaam ataa farmaya hai aap nay! Bahut si daad aap ki iss khoobsoorat ghazal ki nazar! Gar qabool aftad............... AOA atif bhai ap dad de aur hum qabol na kare hazoor ese to halat nahi Atif bhai bohat shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad hum ne dil ke neha,n kahno me mehka li he walsam mukhlis ramishjaan
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