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Post by neha on May 18, 2007 14:46:59 GMT 5
[color=Blue]YOUN INTEZAAR KII HAD SAY GUZARNA CHAHTY HOON
KAY TERY CHAAAH MAIN, JEE JEE KAY MARNA CHAHTY HOON
JO MERAY DIL KAY SABHI MAUSAMO'N KA SAATHI HAI USSI KAY PYAAR KI RUTT MAIN SANWARNA CHAHTY HOON
YEH RAAH-E- ISHQ KAY AAZAAR KAM NAHIN JAANAA’N JO WO MILAY NA MUJHAY TOU MEIN MARNA CHAHTY HOON
MUJHAY TABAAH NA KAR DAY MERY YEH KHUSH FEHMI ISI LIYE TOU MEIN KHUD SAY BHI DARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KISI KAA LAMS SATATA HAI DOORIYON MAIN MUJHAY WO PAAAS AAYE TOU BAHO'N MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZABA'N SAY KUCH NA KAHOON BAS NAZAR JHUKAAYE HUAY MEIN AAONSOU’N SAY TERA ZIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZAMANA JURM -E- WAFA MUJH PAY DAAAL DETA HAI KABHI KABHI MEIN USAY TUJH PAY DHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHUDA KARAY NA..........................KOI FIKR PAAS AAAYE TERAY MEIN TUJH MAIN KHO KAY TERY FIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
WOH AIK HALKY SI DASTAK TU DAY DAR -E- DIL PAY MEIN APNI ZID SAY USI DAM MUKARNA CHAHTY HOON ABHI TOU KHAAKAY KI SURAT MAIN HAI KHAYAL TERA MEIN CANVAS MAIN TERA RANG BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
BAS AIK BAAR WOH KHUD KO SANWAAR LAY MUJH MEIN MEIN KIRCHIYON KI TARHAAN KHUD BHIKARNA CHAHTY HOON
NAHI HAI KHAUF ANA SAY........................ MUJHAY KOI NEHA MEIN APNI ZAAAT kII HAD SAY UBHARNA CHAHTY HOON[/color][/b]
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 19, 2007 1:56:29 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Neha ji daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by khalid on May 21, 2007 6:47:38 GMT 5
bohot khoob neha saaheba! daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 21, 2007 11:19:55 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba,Aadaab Ghaliban pehle bhi aap ke kalaam se ru-b-ru hone ka sharaf haasil ho chuka hai...lekin aaj, SubhanAllah kya murassa ghazal kahi hai..Zindabaad. Har sher apni jagah jamai hai.kai khayalat bilkul achhote nazm kiye hai^N aap ne. Daad qubool kare^N Kherandesh Jalees Sherwani
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 14:08:30 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Neha ji daad qabool farmaiay Thanx a lot Rafi bhai
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 14:11:46 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal hamesha ki tarah sabhi ashaar achhe lage.daad qubuul karen. Thanx Sunita ji:) aap ki tareef ka..n...hosla afzai ka
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 22:17:26 GMT 5
bohot khoob neha saaheba! daad qubool keeje! Thanx Khalid Sahab, Aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya:)
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 22:22:26 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba,Aadaab Ghaliban pehle bhi aap ke kalaam se ru-b-ru hone ka sharaf haasil ho chuka hai...lekin aaj, SubhanAllah kya murassa ghazal kahi hai..Zindabaad. Har sher apni jagah jamai hai.kai khayalat bilkul achhote nazm kiye hai^N aap ne. Daad qubool kare^N Kherandesh Jalees Sherwani Thanx Jalees Sahab, Aap ki appreciation aur hosla afzai ka bohut bohut shukriya janab..ye aap jaisay senior shuura ki hosla afzai ka hi nateeja hai jo aaj mein is muqaam par puhunchi hoon bas aainda bhi isi tarhan apni raaye say nawaztay rehya taa k mein apnay kalaam main nikhaar la sakoon thanx again
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 3, 2007 14:13:40 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy neha ji bohat murassa aur rawan dawan aap ki ghazal main aik dheema dheema sulagta hua andaz qaari ko mutawaja karta hay KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON yeh shair mujhay bohat pasand aaya daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by Tanweer on Jun 3, 2007 21:01:33 GMT 5
Neha Sahiba!
apki aik behti nadi ki tarah rawan dawan ghazal pasand aaee, achay khiyalaat ka izhar achay peraey main kiya hay aap nay.
daad qabool kijiey
Tanweer
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Post by dilshadnazmi on Jun 3, 2007 22:19:41 GMT 5
[ color=Blue]YOUN INTEZAAR KII HAD SAY GUZARNA CHAHTY HOON
KAY TERY CHAAAH MAIN, JEE JEE KAY MARNA CHAHTY HOON
JO MERAY DIL KAY SABHI MAUSAMO'N KA SAATHI HAI USSI KAY PYAAR KI RUTT MAIN SANWARNA CHAHTY HOON
YEH RAAH-E- ISHQ KAY AAZAAR KAM NAHIN JAANAA’N JO WO MILAY NA MUJHAY TOU MEIN MARNA CHAHTY HOON
MUJHAY TABAAH NA KAR DAY MERY YEH KHUSH FEHMI ISI LIYE TOU MEIN KHUD SAY BHI DARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KISI KAA LAMS SATATA HAI DOORIYON MAIN MUJHAY WO PAAAS AAYE TOU BAHO'N MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZABA'N SAY KUCH NA KAHOON BAS NAZAR JHUKAAYE HUAY MEIN AAONSOU’N SAY TERA ZIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
ZAMANA JURM -E- WAFA MUJH PAY DAAAL DETA HAI KABHI KABHI MEIN USAY TUJH PAY DHARNA CHAHTY HOON
KHUDA KARAY NA..........................KOI FIKR PAAS AAAYE TERAY MEIN TUJH MAIN KHO KAY TERY FIKR KARNA CHAHTY HOON
WOH AIK HALKY SI DASTAK TU DAY DAR -E- DIL PAY MEIN APNI ZID SAY USI DAM MUKARNA CHAHTY HOON ABHI TOU KHAAKAY KI SURAT MAIN HAI KHAYAL TERA MEIN CANVAS MAIN TERA RANG BHARNA CHAHTY HOON
BAS AIK BAAR WOH KHUD KO SANWAAR LAY MUJH MEIN MEIN KIRCHIYON KI TARHAAN KHUD BHIKARNA CHAHTY HOON
NAHI HAI KHAUF ANA SAY........................ MUJHAY KOI NEHA MEIN APNI ZAAAT kII HAD SAY UBHARNA CHAHTY HOON[/color][/b][/quote] NEHA JI AADAB . SHAER GOI ME APNA RANG APNA ASLOB AUR AHANG JUDA RAKHNA KAMAL KA FAN HOTA HAI , AUR KISI KISI ME YEH WASF BAHOT ZEYADAH MAOUJOOD HOTA HAI , MAIN NE AAP KI MUKHTALIF GAZLON SE YE ANDAZAH LAGAYA HAI KE AAP KI TARAQ_QI KA GIRAAF BAHOT TEZI SE BULANDI KI JANIB GAMZAN HAI , MERI JANIB SE DHER SARI MUBARAK BAAD , ISSI TARAH KAHTI RAHEIN , ZABAA'N SE KUCH NA KAHO'N BAS NAZAR JHUKAEY HUYE MAIN AANSOONO'N SE TERA ZIKR KARNA CHAHTI HOON EAK AJEEB KAFIYET KA HAMIL HAI YEH SHEAR SHAB KI TAREEKI ME IK TERE SIWA KOI NAHI HAATH UTH_THE HAIN MERE TOU JO MUNASIB SAMJHE BAHOT KHOOB , MERI JANIB SE DHERO'N DAAD AUR DUAEEIN
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 11:40:38 GMT 5
Kia munfarid andaz hai Neha ji aap ki shaeri ka. Hairaan hooN keh aaj kal aap kahaN ghaeb haiN. Itni achhchhi shaeri ka aadi bana kar mmanzar say ghaeb hona khilaf-e-riwayat hai, mohtarma. Jaldi say bazm main wapas aa jaaiay.
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Post by neha on May 23, 2008 21:29:31 GMT 5
Assalam o alaikum Atif Sahab, Thanx 4 appreciation.......Actually kuch masrufiat ziada thi thats y yahan iss forum se ghair hazir rahy...ab Inshallah ap sab ko kuch new kavishain padhnay ko milain gi ...
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 1:57:38 GMT 5
Waah Neha jee ,... aik umdaa si ghazL par daad ke hazaaroN phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by neha on Mar 20, 2009 15:56:21 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy neha ji bohat murassa aur rawan dawan aap ki ghazal main aik dheema dheema sulagta hua andaz qaari ko mutawaja karta hay KHAYAL QAUS -O- QAZAH SAA TUMHARA LAGTA HAI WO RANG SAARAY MAIN ANKHON MAIN BHARNA CHAHTY HOON yeh shair mujhay bohat pasand aaya daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Bohut shukriya Razi bhai...aap ki daaad k liye mumnoon hoon.
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